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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~sumedha~
the intro scene was sooooooooo cute!!!
4th grade???????????
aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww
usually its armaan kissing rids and she being shell shocked.....but here you've cutely turned it around!
just a bit of advice.....don't you wanna put in a disclaimer? coz otherwise it might be closed or something.....and i sooooooo don't want that to happen!
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sumedha

thanks sooo much sumedha

yeap i've put a dissclaimer hehe

thanks u sooo much for ur lovely comment

means a ton

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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah swansea its rocking one superb yaar

Thanks ya tonnnnnnnn nidha didi

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ritu

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Posted: 16 years ago

nice ,hot, sweet, love story .keep writing.

ritu

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

please make sure ur at least 15+ to read this, i don't want it closed.

hahahaha...now thts a gd joke swini...lol!!! i guess u probably know y em laughin...u shud have mentioned ur own age too...hahah...well nevermind ur age sweety whn ur writing is sooooooooo brilliant!!! it ws HOT HOT HOTTTTTTT!!! i relly think u shud turn this into a proper fanfic...if u have tym..wud love to read...hehe

tc hun
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lookwhoshere

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Posted: 16 years ago

oooohh..sizzling one shot! gud job cind!!

luv ya,

anu.

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Rukhsar Ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

wowwww i really liked it

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Killer

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Posted: 16 years ago

omg omg ..!!! is tht u angel??

i m hell ya Suprised!

u rote an amazing part yrrr.... y didnt u turn it into an FF.like comtinue it from here.... its superb yarrrr

i loved it ...!!

its really really Hot Hot hot .😳... i m feeling dead🤢

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i mean u r excellent Da way u describe each and every part it was really amazing ...really passionate..!!

and i want uu to rite more ..!!! plz yar ...something reaallly like dat .......lol ...i wantttt tooooo read naaaa

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unknowndesires.

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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG awesome one shot!!!keep it up!

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ambryn

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Posted: 16 years ago

very nice and sensuous... keep writing..

One shots or Mini fan fics are my favourite...

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Misha Rai

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Posted: 16 years ago

Accha? Yhuu wrote this but didnt inform me !! Argh* // phone pe aaj bohtoh maar kaana Swan .. too good .. amazing and magnificent .

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