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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: dmg_fanatic
woah swancy
nice one

y don u write them more often
????????????????????????

Thanks soo much

na yaar i never get time anymore😆

Thank ya anyway sweets

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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007
hey..

that was one very cute and passionate one shot...

great work...well done..

Thanks alot sunaina

glad u liked it

thanks agaian sweetie

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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: 268143

so Armaan loved her since childhood dats cute n sweet 😊 ....... i love stories wif childhood love 😛 nways da rest of it was hot 😳

by da way in sum places it still says Bella ...... u myt wana edit it 2 Ridhima

😆yeap eddited it cakes hehe

thanks so much for the comment sweets

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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: lali123
feeling hot hot hot...☺️ lol
very well written swancy great job... its so romantic n well hot n all good job... keep it up..

☺️

😉hehe

thanks sooo much lali, glad u liked it

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~sumedha~

@~sumedha~

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

the intro scene was sooooooooo cute!!!
4th grade???????????
aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww
usually its armaan kissing rids and she being shell shocked.....but here you've cutely turned it around!
just a bit of advice.....don't you wanna put in a disclaimer? coz otherwise it might be closed or something.....and i sooooooo don't want that to happen!
love
sumedha

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Haha ok that was blatanly hot!

But loved it nevertheless!

Bdw which contest did u write this for?

Do write more Swancyy!

-M

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Riddhi

@Riddss

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

heyyy
nice FF
do continue soon
with ur other one shot
thanks for PM.

love
Riddss

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Soumya

@lilangel_soumya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

armaan got kissed by riddhima when they were in the 4th grade awwwww ☺️...thats so damn sweet...loved the whole one shot......its clearly a situation edward n bella would be in....very nicely written dear......u need to write more one shots 😉...love soumya 😊

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Aneesa

@Chiraiyya...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Uhum Uhum
Mesmerised. A person that I know very very very closely has the exact same title for her Mini FF that she hasnt updated in ages and has gotten lost in the crowds of luvely FFs.

Luved it even thought i read it b4.

x...Aneesa...x

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Oh My....u just sent Goosebumps all over me Swancy☺️

Hot Hot Hot..............*cough Cough* Forgive me i need to come out of this hypnotism u just showered on me😆

Well Written Baby..........How cute...1st time they kissed in 4th grade😆

Superb baby........

Loved it

So what if u didnt win.....keep Trying n keep posting👍🏼

Love

Steff🤗