Love Not At First Sight(AR)Last Part pg73 (03/07) - Page 57

Originally posted by: HeAvEnS

Loved the ending it was so cute ...and armaan is ideed different character in it which was amazing

well u compleated the FF

congratulatuions

LOve heaven

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

thanks nruti for the reply. . finally you said what i was waiting to hear. i am not happy with the part myself. i had 2-3 ways going on in my mind when writing but it came in my mind when almost two-third of the part was written and i didn't had the heart to delete this. i am not the person who likes typing that much and with little time i had in my mind, i completed the part and posted it but i hope it wasn't that boring..

loads of love..
Mel..

Now here goes my judgment on Love not at first sight………..

And the comment is quite long so if u have holiday go through it……..

I have to write more on last kidnapping part but I cant I am full in laugh……..

But frankly I love unknown truth most………

And this tiem u entered into rahul in unknown truth u entered in riddima...............

Part 1

Ahaaaa Armaan thought she is thief………..how funny.and what he said 'This city gifted hima Wife….' Nice said dear……..armaan and rahul "chuddies-buddies"….how u get these words dear….riddima is like bull she kicked two boys haha……

Part 2

Poor armaan first he is husband then he is father and next what???….. :)

Part 3

Haa rahul is ready to beat him up from getting relieved from the pain caused by riddima he is too funny using all filmy tricks……haaa armaan made abhi eat chilli powder serves him good……………

Omg rahul thought the reaction for armaan's constant thinkinga bout riddima is some black magic is he gone crazy like u dear…….i think in this ff u entered in rahul damn brain…..as no one gets these weird ideas except u………

"in a brotherly way as I looked like his brother and coz of you I made a fool of myself as I proposed her …and in return I got a tight slap from her…." he said as Rahul laughed looking at him…

After reading this I confirm that rahul is no one but yourself all crazy ideas…….and next what everyone thought armaan is gay….hehehe…….omg how could u write……..

Omg armaan told that rahul loved riddima….armaan what came into u idiot……….

"you are asking me Rahul..i thought you are a nice human being just like Armaan...but no even you are like other'playing with women "'

"but What's wrong with playing with women ..i am playing with them since I was a small kid..and even now I play with them'" haha rahul ur dead meat……

"yes riddima I love you..aur mujhe tumse pehli nazar mein hi pyar ho gaya..jabse maine tumhe dekha hai..mujhe aur kuch nazar nahin aata..har jagah sirf tum-hi-tum nazar aati ho' yaha bhi tum yaha bhi tum har taraf bas tum hi tum, main pagal ho gaya hoon tumhare pyar mein'riddima..i have fallen truly, madly deeply in love with you ... I love you from the bottom of my heart'.i mean main tumhe apne tan, man ,dhan se bhi zyada chahta hoon' aur mein jaanta hoon ki tum mujhse pyar nahin karti or na hi kabhi karogi'par pyar one sided bhi to ho sakta hai na'and I can spend the rest of my life thinking ki maine bhi kabhi kisise pyar kiya tha..that even I loved you' and now it's your turn..say something.." omg itna bada dialogue……Now what he will tell to his thief(Muskaan) if he tell everything to riddima…..rahul be careful muskaan is not any other girl…….

What riddima is kidnapped and rahul bought pepper and novel with him……….omggg what can be more crazy than this………

Oho my god armaan climbing pipe for rahul.are u sure both are not gays…………

And armaan muskaan finding them in dark was most hilarious dear…..and muskaan doubting rahul and then

"muskaan atleast listen to me. I don't know what he is talking about…main..main to isse jaanta bhi nahin..aap kaun hai..chaliye jaiye mera ghar se" he said avoiding their eyes as armaan narrowed his eyes listening to his nonsense…..haaa chiii rahul for girl ur saying u dnt know armaan…dost dost na rahe….

The priest rolled his eyes , shook his head and started again taking 15 sec break after every word "I ………Now…Prounce…you ………husband……and …..wife…"….poor priest I think rahul has to preach him not priest……

"Riddima I know this is not the perfect time and moment and I promise you as soon as you are out of the OT you can give me any punishment you want but please just tell me your answer 'yes or no'. I can't take this suspense anymore." the doc and the nurse looked at him as if he has gone insane. Hahaha Omg armaan is so desperate……

"then what Riddima. do you have any idea what we have been through from the day you disappeared. Ye Armaan, he was this close of losing his mental balance. He stopped going out. Itna to thik tha but he even stopped me from going out with Muskaan. He started watching "devdas" every night. Itna to thik tha but he even made me watch that movie. Yesterday we completed a century. I was okay with this too but when he started imitating his dialogues. I love these whole episode with dialogues……actually dialogues are very fab……..haha

"I don't know how to say this'(pause).... but i left coz I thought you'I mean..i thought you both were couple.."Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii riddima also thought they botha re gays………..armaan rahul what u both are sach me gays hey….hehe..yehi dosti dostana hogaya………

Omg Mel I cant laugh rahul how can he kidnap marriage register and poor armaan…as he is being frd for crazy man he should face these many problems…..ohooo meri maaaa again ending scene ke liye police station I think u like the….wink

main tumhe apne tan, man, dhan se chahta hoonwrite more this type of ff's……………………