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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Jinalee114

hey yaar!

great update!
lol....armaan n rahul r sooo funny!...luv them
do continue soon!
tc! 😃



thanks for the reply Jinalee. i am glad you enjoyed the part. yes they are funny and sometimes too funny..

loads of love..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princess52

hey mel

amazing part
conitnue soon
love u habs



thanks for the reply habs. i am glad you enjoyed the part.

loads of love..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maanu

hey mel...

too hilarious...

i guess u excell here...

police stations...

never thought of it in my wildest dreams also.....abt the whole scene ending this way...

abhis scens was super duper funny... it ant get more hilarious...

but the part ended in a wrong place...

so do continue super fast...

waiting...

thnaks for the pm

bye



thanks for the reply maanu. i am glad you enjoyed the part. aww. thank you for the compliment but i am not that good, there are soo many wonderful writers out there in the forum.
even i never thought that i'll be writing the police station. it just came when i started writing. i had a good laugh when i was writing the abhi-rahul-armaan scene. me and updating fast, can't say this now..isn't..i am super-duper late with the update again. :P


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AR_LOVER

plz add me to ur PM list



thanks for the reply dear. i am glad you enjoyed this Fic.. will Pm you..

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Posted: 15 years ago

Okay so without breaking the habit of updating late as always , here is the next part . In case you have forgotten which I am sure you must have coz even I had to re- read the last part when I started writing this chapter, here is a quick sneak peak of what happened in the the previous part- Rahul and Armaan ends up in jail with abhi and he mocks them. Abhi remembers their previous encounter of kidnapping when he thought they wanted to cut his hands. Rahul and Armaan talk among themselves, the way they do before doing something crazy.

Part 9 (continue from page 66)

Rahul and Armaan walked towards him and stood in front of him. Seeing them coming closer, Abhi looked outside the cell and found the whole passage empty. Not a single policeman was present. Rahul held Armaan and punched him lightly on his face. They were hitting each other as abhi stood like a spectator looking at them confusingly. When they were sure of themselves, they punched abhi on his face, making him fall down on the floor. Abhi screamed for help and by the time he stood up and the policemen came, the sight in front of him made his jaw dropped to the ground.

Armaan and rahul were kneeling down in front of him asking for forgiveness. "abhi please, we are sorry. Please forgive us, we promise we won't ever come in your way but please don't hit us" rahul cried as armaan covered his face, hiding the pain on his face.

"and we believe you now" rahul said looking at the policemen who were looking at them confusingly, having no idea of what was going on.

"what do you mean?" one of the policeman asked.

"Sir" rahul stood up wiping his crocodile tears. "abhi told us that he is your head, I mean you follow his orders and you work according to his terms. He can rusticate all of you anytime. He told us that he is gonna beat us today if we don't do his work" Rahul said making them look at abhi in anger.

"Really'And what else'"

"and he told us that you are nothing in front of him. Your head knows him very well and.." armaan was cut-off by abhi. "no sir, he is lying. You don't know them. They are liars. Don't believe them. they'they.." he was cut-off by rahul.

"no sir we are telling the truth, you can check his past records and you'll know who is telling the truth." Rahul spoke as armaan nodded looking at the policemen.

"We believe you Mr. Grewal. this is not the first time we have arrested him and don't worry we'll take strict action against him." the policeman said looking at abhi giving him a murderous look. "Both of you come with me, your dad is here to bail you out" armaan and rahul looked at each other, grinning as they followed the policeman.

They stood behind rahul's dad who was shocked to look at his son's condition but rahul signaled him to remain silent.

As they came out of the police station, rahul's dad gave him a much needed lecture. "rahul beta what's wrong with you. I never expected this kind of behavior from you at least. You are such a sensible person and still you behaved so immaturely. What is the use of reading all those detective novels when you can't kidnap a single person properly. Vo to accha hua that he is my friend's friend and took back his complaint..nahin to pata nahin aaj kya ho jaata'"

"sorry dad, actually it was my first time that's why. I promise next time I won't do any such stupid mistake" rahul replied.

"that 's my boy" his dad said pating his back

"btw what happened to your faces" his dad asked looking at their clothes and faces.

"long story dad, I'll tell you later'.right armaan" rahul replied giving a hi-five to armaan. They went to Armaan's house and changed into new clothes and reached the hospital where muskaan and riddhma were waiting for them. Muskaan moved out of the room to give the couple some time alone.

Looking at riddhima, he moved towards her and sat beside her. Riddhima not being able to control her emotions anymore hugged him tightly, sobbing as he felt his shirt getting wet by her tears.

"Hey Riddhima, I am okay, stop crying" he tried pacifying her making her shed more tears in the process. He wiped the tears off her cheeks and looked at her angelic face. Seeing a faint smile on her face brought a smile on his face.

"Riddhima your nose is turning red like tomatoes. Are you sure it's coz of crying or .. " he said as she hit him lightly on his arm. Bringing her face closer to his " I still love you like this.." he whispered in her ear, kissing her cheek making her go beetroot red as he chuckled. Riddhima was looking at her hands feeling shy at the sudden change of events in her life. Till yesterday she had accepted her destiny that they weren't meant to be together and today was nothing more then a dream come true for her.

Armaan made her look up to him and she saw a pool of emotions in his eyes- love, belonging, togetherness, pain, separation, fear all in his eyes. She knew the amount of pain he went through all these months was un-imaginable for her. He'll never tell her but his eyes said it all and now it was her time to share her feelings with him. The feelings she was trying to lock inside was needed to come out. He has the right to know what she feels about him and this was the perfect moment.

Sighing she looked at him and said "Armaan..i 'I want to say something" armaan noticed the hesitation in her voice ' her body a bit tensed making him tensed "what ?" he asked keeping his one hand on her cheek. Riddhima kept her hand on his and looking deep into his eyes said "Armaan..I..I'"

"love you" rahul said cutting her off as he was thrown inside by muskaan who was standing at the door fuming in anger, her hands on the waist. The sudden intrusion made riddhima push him out of the bed and he landed on the floor.

"Armaan do you know what he was doing?" muskaan entered the room and helped him get up from the ground. "he was eavesdropping and when I told him to back off, he told me to join him. " hearing him Armaan glared at him in anger first for disturning their private moment and second for listeing to their talks.

"Don't give me those looks" rahul said looking at Armaan who was ready to beat him any moment. " main kabse wait kar raha hoon. You guys are taking hell lot of time to confess. Mujhe bahar se pata chalgaya ki riddhima confess karna chahti hai and you still wasn't able to guess. Kya hoga tera? Look at me man, it's so simple - I love you muskaan" he said giving a flying kiss to muskaan as she blushed. "I love you Ridd'.Armaan" he was about to give a flying kiss to riddhima but looking at Armaan's fist gave it to him.

"Chill dude..i didn't mean it that way." Rahul said trying to ease the atmosphere but getting constant glaring from Armaan changed the topic "Okay now that everything is settled should we start from where we left." rahul said as riddhima looked at him surprisingly. Armaan expressions changed to a happy one as he realized what his friend was talking about.

"Riddhima is in the hospital and rahul is still thinking about the marriage..cool dude..." Armaan thought. Rahul looked at her confused expression and armaan's happy expressions and patted himself mentally for having such an intelligent brain.

"rahul you know I was dying to tell you this 'sometimes I do hate you from the bottom of my heart for coming up with weird ideas but today you proved me wrong. I mean I am not getting words to describe you how proud I am today for having you beside me. I love you man..i love you.."armaan hugged rahul. Riddhima had her eyes crooked at his response not knowing where this convo was heading.

Excusing himself Rahul took out his cell phone and dialed the no. as a man entered the room with his parents. Muskaan took blessings from them and hugged his mom. Armaan introduced riddhima to rahul's parents who were like his parents too. His mom was too happy to see both her son's happy. In the last few weeks even she was scared about them. After what all they have been through, she was relieved to see the smile back on their faces.

Riddhima was still clueless as to what was going on in front of her. Rahul and Armaan were busy with the guy and muskaan was sitting besides her blushing like a bride, looking at rahul. After few moments, Armaan sat beside her and taking her hand in his blushed.

"okay he just blushed" riddhima thought looking at armaan. Muskaan and armaan were sitting beside her on the opposite sides of the bed and blushing, rahul was grinning standing at the other end of the bed and his parents were smiling looking at her.

"armaan what's going on?" she asked as she couldn't take this anymore. This silence was killing her. She knew something was going on but no one was telling her.

"we are getting married today.." armaan said as he couldn't hold it inside anymore.

"what?" she looked at him in shock as she saw him nodding his head , her gaze shifted to others who were nodding their head grinning. She looked at muskaan turning red and above all Rahul who was showing his 32 pearl white.

"but how..today..i mean..i..am not ready..and ..i .you..hospital.."

"don't worry riddhima , everything is set. The marriage registrar is here and our parent's are here, we three are looking like bride and groom and about you, don't worry you are looking very beautiful in this hospital gown , you just need a bit of make-up, you know, to hide the shadow under the eyes aur muskaan hai na, she'll do the makeup and you are all set for your marriage."

Rahul said as riddhima had this- are-you-nuts- expression on her face.

"don't look at me like that'riddhima..main jaanta hoon.. you are so looking forward to your marriage. Aur ho bhi kyun na..after all it's every girl dream to get married one day and you are lucky girl. Want to know why? Coz you are getting married the same day your baby is born..and once you are back discharged we'll throw a big party..so take a chill-pill' have no fear when I am here.." rahul complimented patting himself.

"but today.." Getting married in the hospital was totally a crazy idea but argiung with rahul wasn't even an option for her as she saw the excited and cheerful look on their faces.

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Riddhima was discharged from the hospital after one week. Rahul and muskaan had already decorated his house to welcome the baby. Armaan held the baby in his hand with riddhima by his side. The past one week was the best week for him. Finally his dream of spending the rest of his life with riddhima wasn't a dream anymore. Riddhima entered the house and saw rahul's mom standing at the door. She did the aarti and asked her to enter the house how a newly wedded wife enters.

Rahul came forward to hug her when armaan came in between..

"armaan she is like my sis..ab to shaq karna band kar.." rahul said as riddhima giggled at his response. Armaan had told her how he thought that she had feeling for him and she had pulled his cheeks at his innocence. "armaan you behave like a child sometimes.." she had told him.

"I think I am spending too much time with rahul.." he had replied.

Rahul hugged her followed by muskaan who was standing behind rahul waiting for her turn. After some chit-chat everyone left the newly wedded couple to spend some time alone. They all needed some rest as Armaan and Rahul had organized a party for celebrating their marriage and the arrival of the baby. After saying good-bye to everyone, armaan locked the door, entered the bedroom and looked for her.

He opened the balcony door and saw her looking at the sky. Closing the door he moved towards her and stood behind her looking at her and saw her dreaming about something as he noticed a faint smile on her face. Placing his hands on her waist, he kept his chin on her shoulder making her shudder at the sudden contact.

"Thinking about me" he whispered as she shook her head negatively. "Then" he asked in a disappointed tone.

"I am thinking about us" she replied bringing the smile back on his face as she kept her hand on his cheek.

"and.."

"and that me and baby are blessed to have you in our life" she said turning around and looked at him. He smiled at her cute confession and she touched his dimple "and we love you " she whispered. Moving closer to her, he touched his forehead with her, his hands holding her by her waist and she closed her eyes.

"May I" he whispered on her lips and saw her nodding. Feeling his lips on hers, she stood up on her toes and pulled him towards herself as she deepened the kiss.

Pulling himself as he knew this isn't the correct time; he saw her downcast face and the blush on her cheeks that she was trying to hide by not looking at him. Making her look at him, she saw the cheeky smile on his face and hugged him tightly to calm her nerves.

"How is he?" she whispered after sometime keeping her head on his chest as he wrapped his hands around her.

"He just slept. He is angry with mamma for not taking care of his dada" he said making a puppy face. With a smile, she looked up at his face and hit his forehead noticing the naughty expression on his face.

"Riddhima can I ask you something?" he asked. She nodded weakly as she knew what was coming. She was waiting for this conversation from the time they came face-to-face one week back.

"How did you? I mean'was it really rahul?" he asked as she shook her head negatively.

"I knew it. Credit- Chor, gave me a big lecture in the hospital. Usse to mein baad mein dekhunga." He muttered under his breath which didn't go unnoticed by her as she giggled hearing him.

"it wasn't him but his better-half" she said as Armaan looked at her in surprise.

"You mean muskaan" he asked as she nodded her head.

"but how did she? Did she know where you were all this month? She didn't even tell me, she betrayed me like him..woh bhi.."

"Calm down Armaan, It was entirely my fault. I jumped to the conclusion without giving a thought. I should have asked you before leaving the house. The past few months'it was like I was living just for the sake for the baby. I had no where to go and I couldn't even think of going back to dad. I was living in women's shelter and then muskaan found me. Actually it was her friend Anjali who came and told me about you and rahul and what I saw wasn't the whole truth. I didn't knew whether to laugh or cry at my destiny. I was so happy to know about you but when I got to know about your wedding, it was like my whole world came crashing down. I never wanted to come back to your life after hearing about you moving on in life, she persuaded me to go and confess my feelings before it's too late as you were marrying coz of parental pressure from rahul's parents."

"I wasn't marrying coz of parental pressure" he said as riddhima looked at him with a now-I know look.

"so it was all muskaan's idea. She betrayed me from the start by not telling me about you and I was scolding Rahul for hiding you from me" he complained as riddhima hit her forehead for his brainless thinking.

"will you stop blaming them. Muksaan must have told him about me after she found me and he planned the whole church wedding. Use you brain Armaan. She had no idea about where I was or why I left. You and rahul didn't even look for me after I left"

"that's not true..we did searched for whole one week and'"

"and then what Armaan. You turned into this non-alcoholic Devdas and rahul who should have stopped you was supporting you. Muskaan couldn't see you guys in that condition so she searched for me and if she hadn't supported you, I don't know what you guys would have done to yourself" she said looking at Armaan who had a sorry expression on his face.

"okay fine, I am sorry for everything and I promise I won't say anything to Muskaan..happy now.." he replied.

"no why are you saying sorry, It was my fault so I should be saying sorry, not you" she replied turning her back at him

"okay so say sorry and finish it here'happy.."he said making her face him.

"how mean , you want me to say sorry to you, yehi hai tumhare pyaar. I thought you love me but no you are just like others waiting to prove your superiority." She said turning around as Armaan hit his forehead at her lame excuse.

" What do you want me to say?" he asked turning her around, making her look at him.

"you should have said " riddhima don't say sorry, it was not your fault. I was responsible too. Don't blame yourself for everything."" She replied sniffing.

"okay..riddhima don't say sorry, it was not your fault. I was responsible too. Don't blame yourself for everything" he repeated wiping her tears, shaking his head which according to him was a nonsense talk.

"I know .." she said and hugged him tightly as he rolled his eyes at her constant mood swings that he was experiencing from the past few days.

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As promised rahul and Armaan organized a big party celebrating their marriage and the arrival of the baby. Armaan and Riddhima reached the venue where the party was in full swing. She looked at the dance floor where muskaan was teaching rahul disco steps to go with the song which he wasn't able to do at all. He was feeling more embarrassed as he looked at his friends and colleagues who were laughing looking at his condition. More importantly were his parent's who were dancing much better than him, dancing beside him. He looked at armaan and even he laughed at his friend's poor condition. He made riddhima sit at the table and after making sure she was okay, moved to the dance floor. He took it from there, dancing with muskaan who was more than happy to dance with him. Rahul muttered a "thank you" and moved to the table, sitting beside riddhima.

"so..?" rahul asked, sipping the drink and looked at riddhima who was looking at the dance floor where armaan and muskaan were dancing.

"I never saw him this happy" riddhima replied, her eyes fixed at the dance floor.

"I know, I am asking about you" he said.

"What about me Rahul?" she asked turning looking at him.

"you know riddhima,"

"I know and don't worry, he is keeping me very happy, stop being so possessive about me" she replied. Now Rahul was more concerned about Riddhima and same goes for armaan- he was always asking about rahul behaviour from muskaan like a big brother.

"shall we" riddhima looked at rahul and nodded. Getting up they walked towards the dance stage and stood beside Armaan and muskaan who were dancing and laughing at some joke. Riddhima smiled watching them enjoying as a smile formed on her lips and looked at him as he raised his eyebrow asking the reason of the smile. She shook her head and turned around as she danced slowly with rahul as the song changed to a slow number.

"it's my turn now" Armaan took riddhima from rahul placing her hands around his neck as muskaan took rahul, dancing beside them.

"so, Mrs. Malik may I know the reason behind this smile of yours" he asked looking at her, removing the strand of hair from her face.

"I was just thinking about us, about our first meeting" she said as she noticed the smile on his face.

"what?"

"I can never forget that day, you fainted in my arms and I thought you were a thief" he said as they laughed remembering the old times.

"and then you had hit us so hard on the head that still I can feel the pain ." he said placing his hand on the head where she had hit her as she slapped his arm lightly, smiling. "then I started feeling something for you which slowly turned into love. It was like, you know step-by-step " she nodded agreeing to his each and every word. 'and when you left me.." she placed her finger on his lips stopping him from saying further.

"no more sad talks now, we are together and that's what matter" she said as he nodded, smiling. She kept her head on his shoulder as he wrapped his arms around her, feeling complete in each other arms.

THE END


okay so finally... What started as a mini fic took more then a year to reach its destination and the whole credit goes to just one person ..that' me off course : P

A big thank you to all the readers for your support and encouragement. Without you all this fic wouldn't have been possible especially when the writer is as lazy as me : P The last few parts took a hell lot of my thinking power causing delay and more delay. i I hope this wasn't a boring part.

Hope you all enjoyed reading this fic as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Looking forward to your views..

Loads of love..

Mel..😳

Edited by Caramel_21 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG......finally u updated..........thanx alott........
awwww...its finished.......i m really going to miss this alott...n
i love u girl n ur writing too....its simply AMAZINGLY SUPERB...this is one of the best ff i hav read till now..........👏👏👏👏👏
i m in hurry right now....will soon give u a gud big comment soon......
god bless u....
take care.....😊😛😃😊😛😃
Edited by ks_diehardfan01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 part
loved it
thnks for pm
continue soon
TC
GAURAV
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Posted: 15 years ago
haww itz finished?

yar m gonna miss it!!!

aweusm end!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part just loved all the scenes and especially armann and rahul begging infront of abhi thanks alot for the pm
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Mel..........
that was wonderful part.........i truly loved it..........i t was very funny to see how armaan and rahul screw up
abhimanyu..............the part was very sweet but i am so sad that this FF ended like this........................i think that there could have been another way to end this story but its ok.........
thanks a lot for the pm
thanks a lot for the wonderful and most amazing FF...........
lods of love
nruti

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