my ff:phele takrar phir pyar part 24 on page 100

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armaanno01fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

sure ambi
thanks
will continue soon

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LIKEDMG

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Love it...waiting for next part...😊

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armaanno01fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: LIKEDMG
Love it...waiting for next part...😊

thanx😉

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angel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

heyyy anam...LOVE AT 1ST SIGHT HAA ummmmm INTRESTING 👏

lovely start dear.....all the parts were amazingg..😃

armaan n ridzi awww they r just cutesestest.... ridzi always trying to avoid him n ARMAAN always trying to pull her leg huh kabhi nahi badlenge lollll😆😆..............aaah loved ti😊

sorry for late reply

n thanx for the pm😕

continue sooooooon

lov yaa😊

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armaanno01fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: SuKaSh
heyyy anam...LOVE AT 1ST SIGHT HAA ummmmm INTRESTING 👏
lovely start dear.....all the parts were amazingg..😃

armaan n ridzi awww they r just cutesestest.... ridzi always trying to avoid him n ARMAAN always trying to pull her leg huh kabhi nahi badlenge lollll😆😆..............aaah loved ti😊

sorry for late reply

n thanx for the pm😕

continue sooooooon

lov yaa😊

ur welcome dear
thanks

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Rinku Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Update soon! 😃

im sorry for rushing you 😆

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~sumedha~

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

hi
thanks for the pm!!!!
nice update and i liked the way armaan goes like hassi toh phassi!!!
lol!
love
sumedha

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armaanno01fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

thx
nah its aii rinku it just encourages me lolz

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armaanno01fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#59

ok so the 4th part coming up

PART 4

Armaan, muskaan and rahul were walking to their reported duties

Muskaan: hi Armaan
amyy: hi beautiful
muskaan: thanku tum bhi to bare sone munde ho(in punjabi)
ammy: i know
muskaan: tumhari koi girlfried hai
ammy: thinking : no i mean yes (to himslef) nahi usse to break up hogaya tha (then confirming with himslef) no nahi hai koi
rahul: tumse kya matlab(to muski)
muski: chup beth duffer kahin ka

they reach and rahul goes to a patient but muski rushes and overtakes him

muski: mein is patient ko dekhungi
rahul: meh pehle aya tha iske paas
muski: to?
rahul: isliye yeh mera patient hai
muski: nahi mera hai

they start snatching the file
rahul pulls muski pulls

muski takes her stescope and starts hitting rahul with that

muski: maine kaha na mera haii
rahul(pulling her hair) chup beth punjaben mene pehle ise dekha ta
muski: mimicing him : maine pehle isse dekha tah to tune dekha to teri property hogayi kya

as their fight goes on

in the other room

atul here you go anjali you could sit here
anjy: nah its ok
atul: tum relax karo mein tumhare patient ko dekhunga
anjy(getting angry) NO thankyou mein yaha doctor bane ayi huun chutiyan manane ya gup shup karne nahi so let me do my work please

in the other room again

armaan(in his head) 3 patient kop dekhlia aur inki larai to kabhi khatam nahi honewali (luking at rahul and muskkan) to ab kya karu i know ridz ko tnag ... luaghs silently

he leaves the room

hes waiting outside the room where ridz and dr kirti are working

she sees him and gasps

dr kirti: kya hua
ridzi: kuch nahi
dr kirti: can u pass teh stethescope please
ridzi looking at ammys direction doesnt realize asn with the steshecope bumps into dr kirti

riddhim: im sorry maam
dr kirti: DR riddhima apna dhayan kam par rakhiye please aur meh yeh aapse odbara nahi kehna chati ok

armaan peeking form the window laughs

he calls her with his hand

ridzi: mimes to him with her hands: kya hai

armaan: tum yaha to ayo(mimes)

riddhima: maam mein apne haath dho ke aati huun

dr kirti: jaldi

she goes out to armaan

ridzi: kya hai?

armaan: kuch nahi mai bore hor raha to socha ke tumhe buladu

ridzi(sarcastically) are baby bore ho raye the kilhona laoo

armaan: childish with a sweeeet smile : haa haa mujhe khilona bahut ache lagata hai

ridzi: shut up tum yaha kaam karne ayo ho ya masti karne

ammy: me ghar par betha tha aur bor ho raha tha to socha ke yaha aa jayu

ridzi: sachi mein kyu bulaya

armaan: maine kaha nah aise hi

ridzi in anger : uff yeh aaj kal ke ladke nah
starts 2 walk off

armaan: in his head : yeh to ja rahi hai
he rushes and hold her hand form the back to stop her

ammy: aaj kal ke ladke kya(smirk on his face)

ridzi: chodo mere haath

ammy: nahi tum ladko ke baare mein kya kh rahi thi

ridzi: ke tum bare pagal hoto ho ab chodo mera haath

ammy : tumhe ladko ke baare mein bahut pata hai kyun tumhara koi boyfreidn hai?

ridzi: tumhe batana mein zaroori nahi samajti

ammy: oye hoye

ammy gets a pager and leaves her hand

ammy: uff galat waqt par

ridz: kya hua

ammy gets a idea

wo hum dono ko dr gupta bula rahe hai

ridzi: sachi

ammy: haan

ridzi: chalo

ammy: tum chalo mein aya

ridzi: ok

ammy laughs : muhahahaa and then walks to the general ward as he was called there

ridzi: knocks
noone answers
she tries opening the door but its locked

she runs back to dr kirti

Dr kirti really angry

dr kirti: tum kagha gayi thi
haath done ya pura nahane

ridzi: sorry maam

dr kirti: aapka pehle impreesion last impression hota hai aur aapke pehle impression mujhe bilkul bhi aacha nahi lag raha

ridzi: par maam woh dr gupta neh bualya tha

dr kirti: woh kaise bula sakte hai woh to hospital mein nahi hai

ridzi understood ammys chaal

ridzi: par..

dr kirti interupts: par war kuch nahi dr riddhima ab aldi kaam par lag jaye warna kis aur ko yeh kaam sop dungi

ridzi: ok maam

1 hr later

dr kirti: aap apni break par jaa sakti ahi ab

ridzi: ok maam..( she walks off) muttering to her self........is armaan ko to mein chodungi nahiii.. idiot stupid duffer pagaala ufffff

she enters the canteen where she see armman rhaul and atul

runs to him and tries to hit him on the head but he dodges and gets off his chair and goes to the other side of the table

ridzi: How dare you? tumne mujhse jhoot bola daant parwayi tumhari to kher nahi( trying to catch him running aroun table)

armaan trying to act inncoent (gettign away form her by running aournd the table): maine to kuch nahi kiya and then laughs

ridzi: kuch nahi kiye... idiot stupid duffer pagal urghhhhhhhhhh badla to mein leker rahungi

dekhte jaao tum

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