my ff:phele takrar phir pyar part 24 on page 100 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
1st thx

2nd was it that boring ke sirf do logo ne comemnt kiya

plzzzzz commentt
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
arre no yaar it wasnt boring!!!
it ws fultoo entertaining..i think evry1s bz wid de posts for kanic..most probably..dw kall tak achche inne sare comments mil jayenge..dun lose hope!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Brilliant part, it wasn't boring at all
i'm eager to know how ridz will take revenge from armaan
plz continue soon


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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
lovely update cute ar fight.... misha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
awwwwwwwwwwww luved it sweets tooo goood adored every momment of it do continue soon swancy
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
hey
nice update
so their nok jhok has started
how cute
lookign forward to the ff
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaanno01fan

ok so the 4th part coming up

PART 4

Armaan, muskaan and rahul were walking to their reported duties

Muskaan: hi Armaan
amyy: hi beautiful
muskaan: thanku tum bhi to bare sone munde ho(in punjabi)
ammy: i know
muskaan: tumhari koi girlfried hai
ammy: thinking : no i mean yes (to himslef) nahi usse to break up hogaya tha (then confirming with himslef) no nahi hai koi
rahul: tumse kya matlab(to muski)
muski: chup beth duffer kahin ka

they reach and rahul goes to a patient but muski rushes and overtakes him

muski: mein is patient ko dekhungi
rahul: meh pehle aya tha iske paas
muski: to?
rahul: isliye yeh mera patient hai
muski: nahi mera hai

they start snatching the file
rahul pulls muski pulls

muski takes her stescope and starts hitting rahul with that

muski: maine kaha na mera haii
rahul(pulling her hair) chup beth punjaben mene pehle ise dekha ta
muski: mimicing him : maine pehle isse dekha tah to tune dekha to teri property hogayi kya

as their fight goes on

in the other room

atul here you go anjali you could sit here
anjy: nah its ok
atul: tum relax karo mein tumhare patient ko dekhunga
anjy(getting angry) NO thankyou mein yaha doctor bane ayi huun chutiyan manane ya gup shup karne nahi so let me do my work please


in the other room again

armaan(in his head) 3 patient kop dekhlia aur inki larai to kabhi khatam nahi honewali (luking at rahul and muskkan) to ab kya karu i know ridz ko tnag ... luaghs silently

he leaves the room

hes waiting outside the room where ridz and dr kirti are working

she sees him and gasps

dr kirti: kya hua
ridzi: kuch nahi
dr kirti: can u pass teh stethescope please
ridzi looking at ammys direction doesnt realize asn with the steshecope bumps into dr kirti

riddhim: im sorry maam
dr kirti: DR riddhima apna dhayan kam par rakhiye please aur meh yeh aapse odbara nahi kehna chati ok

armaan peeking form the window laughs

he calls her with his hand

ridzi: mimes to him with her hands: kya hai

armaan: tum yaha to ayo(mimes)

riddhima: maam mein apne haath dho ke aati huun

dr kirti: jaldi

she goes out to armaan

ridzi: kya hai?

armaan: kuch nahi mai bore hor raha to socha ke tumhe buladu

ridzi(sarcastically) are baby bore ho raye the kilhona laoo

armaan: childish with a sweeeet smile : haa haa mujhe khilona bahut ache lagata hai

ridzi: shut up tum yaha kaam karne ayo ho ya masti karne

ammy: me ghar par betha tha aur bor ho raha tha to socha ke yaha aa jayu

ridzi: sachi mein kyu bulaya

armaan: maine kaha nah aise hi

ridzi in anger : uff yeh aaj kal ke ladke nah
starts 2 walk off

armaan: in his head : yeh to ja rahi hai
he rushes and hold her hand form the back to stop her

ammy: aaj kal ke ladke kya(smirk on his face)

ridzi: chodo mere haath

ammy: nahi tum ladko ke baare mein kya kh rahi thi

ridzi: ke tum bare pagal hoto ho ab chodo mera haath

ammy : tumhe ladko ke baare mein bahut pata hai kyun tumhara koi boyfreidn hai?

ridzi: tumhe batana mein zaroori nahi samajti

ammy: oye hoye

ammy gets a pager and leaves her hand

ammy: uff galat waqt par

ridz: kya hua

ammy gets a idea

wo hum dono ko dr gupta bula rahe hai

ridzi: sachi

ammy: haan

ridzi: chalo

ammy: tum chalo mein aya

ridzi: ok

ammy laughs : muhahahaa and then walks to the general ward as he was called there

ridzi: knocks
noone answers
she tries opening the door but its locked

she runs back to dr kirti

Dr kirti really angry

dr kirti: tum kagha gayi thi
haath done ya pura nahane

ridzi: sorry maam

dr kirti: aapka pehle impreesion last impression hota hai aur aapke pehle impression mujhe bilkul bhi aacha nahi lag raha

ridzi: par maam woh dr gupta neh bualya tha

dr kirti: woh kaise bula sakte hai woh to hospital mein nahi hai

ridzi understood ammys chaal

ridzi: par..

dr kirti interupts: par war kuch nahi dr riddhima ab aldi kaam par lag jaye warna kis aur ko yeh kaam sop dungi

ridzi: ok maam

1 hr later

dr kirti: aap apni break par jaa sakti ahi ab

ridzi: ok maam..( she walks off) muttering to her self........is armaan ko to mein chodungi nahiii.. idiot stupid duffer pagaala ufffff

she enters the canteen where she see armman rhaul and atul

runs to him and tries to hit him on the head but he dodges and gets off his chair and goes to the other side of the table

ridzi: How dare you? tumne mujhse jhoot bola daant parwayi tumhari to kher nahi( trying to catch him running aroun table)

armaan trying to act inncoent (gettign away form her by running aournd the table): maine to kuch nahi kiya and then laughs

ridzi: kuch nahi kiye... idiot stupid duffer pagal urghhhhhhhhhh badla to mein leker rahungi

dekhte jaao tum

how was it
please leave comments



Oh Anam! i soo enjoyed it! it made my day after a hard days work! 😃😃😃

thank you for listening to my suggestion! 😃

loved the Rahul and Muskaans part! was bare funny 😆😆

plus AR nok Jhok! 😆 and Armaan already starting to hold riddhimas hand from behind and his 'Oy Hoi!'...im loving it! 😃

keep up the good work mate! 👏


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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
Nice update anam... Busy wid my exams so ll comment in detail later...pm me for da next part..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
it was really gud plz contd soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
heyy anam great update dear loves it soo much
specially armaan , ridzi n also muski
aww they r all so sweet
loving the story very much
plzzz continue soooon n thanx soo much for the pm

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