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1st thx for all teh comments they mean alot MAUZH to all

ok part 10 is here so get ready steady READ


PART 10

As the bottle slowed down it landed on......

it landed on anjali

anjali: nooo acha armaan tum mujhse kuch puucho

armaan thought this was the perfect chance to find out the truth of ridzi and anjy

armaan: acha question is Why are you so angry with ridzi?

a smile appeared on ridzi face. There was the armaan who had promised her and here he was fulfilling the promise. She was so proud of him. Nothing could make her be angry with him

as armaan saw ridzi his smile grew wider happy to see ridzi smiling back at him.

ammy: anjy answer it then

anjy: well because its my choice

ammy: yah but shes your sister

anjy: ya but I don't like her because my dad loves her more than me. She always gets what she wants but when it comes to me its always ' next time beta'
ITS not fair(staring to get really anry) btw no personal questions please

armaan looked at ridzi sympathetically
ridzi had tears in her eyes. She ran upstairs crying
armaan followed

anjy looked in anger and jealousy: see this is what I mean

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Upstairs when ridzi was crying armaan opened the door and sat next to her. He wiped her tears and turned her so she was facing him.

ammy: look as you know ive promised you and again I promise you ill try my best to get rid of the differences

ridzi: I noe butt I don't get it. She also gets what she wants then why does she hate me so much. Dad loves her as much(crying). I also love her alott but she hates e. she hates me

ammy: no she doesn't look(holding her by the shoulders) she thinks she hates you but she doesn't look just trust me. Give me some time

ridzi: ok thankyou armaan im so glad ive found a friend like you(she held his hand)

ammy: its ok and im also soo happy

he came forward for a hug but seeing rizi feel so awkward he backed off

ammy: sorry ab chalo

ridzi: its ok chalo

both of them ran downstairs

both sat down with a smile on their face

atukl: kya hua

ridzi: don't worry

atul: ok so lets carry on acha anjy tumhari dare hai ki(thinking of the perfect dare) GIVE ME A KISS ON MY CHEEKS

anjy: NO WAY!!!

everyone laughed. This dare was a must do/.anjy face scrunched up in embarssment

everone: DO IT DO IT DO IT!!!!!!

anjy: nooooooooo wayyyy

ammy: yup or u outta the game

anjy: gosh fine

she walked up to atul. She pouted he lips closed her eyes. Scrunched up her nose as he smelled really bad. She pecked him and ran back to her seat .

atul smiled blushing.

ammy: no that wasn't a proper kiss again again

atul smiled wider. Woohoo she was going to kiss him again. He pulled out his cheek for her to dod it again. He was oo happy

anjy: no man ive done it carry on

atul was so diapointed. He sat up dtaright. But atleats she kkisssed him.. his heart was danicing in happiness inside

ammy: fine

anjy spitted and wiped her lips as many times as possible: URGHHH that was soo digustinggg

anjy: tum kabhi nahate nahi ho kya

atul: nahat huun par aaj nahi nahaiya

ridzi remembering: atull tumne di ko who flower diya

atul: OH NO I forgot totally thank ridzi for reminding me

he walked to behind the sofa and brought tina the flower pot he brought for anjy at the beginning

atul: here u go anjy tumhare liye

anjy: ewwww yeh kya hai

atul: per pode

anjy: huh?

atul: flower pot

anjy: oh mere liye kyun leke aayo(taking it making a nasty face)

atul: because yeh meri favourite hai tumhare jaisi

anjy: ohhh kkk then(she placed it away from her)

ammy: yaar u complain too much . lets carry on

anjy: gosh fine then

ammy smiled and spinned the bottle.

again as it slowed down ammy wished for it to be ridzi because he knew the perfecttt question for her which he hopes he knew the answer too.

and as armaan says he always gets what he wants and agen he did.

it landed on ridzi

a cute deep dimpled smile came on ammys face.

ridzi shrugged her shouders. She saw ammy's face. She got worried. What if he asked her to do something like anjy. She'll never be able to do something like that. She crossed her fingerzz.

ammy: yes(he whispered)

ridzi: huh kuch kaha

ammy: no I mean ya

atul: mein puuchunga

ridzi gave a relived sigh

ammy: no wayyyzzzz its my turn

ridzi bited her lips. She knew ammy was up to something

ammy: opk Riddhima guupta(rubbing his hands together)

ridzi: yaa armaan jaldi bolo mujhe dar lag raha hai

ammy: bolta huun acha agar tumhe sanjeevani se ek ladke ko apna boyfriend bana ho to who kaun hoga?

ridzi: simple tum

ammy surprised at her answering so confidently but had a sweeeet smile on his face. Yeah!! He was happy. That's the answer he was expecting

everone looked at her shocked.

ridzi: I mean I mean .....tum mere ache dost ho aur .... aur

ammy: don't worry I didn't ask you to explain(he had a wide grin on his face. As everyone else just waited he winked at her secretly so no one saw. Ridzi blushed. She was soo embarsed . she didn't mean what she said well sjhe did but she didn't want to say it out loud but she already had and everyone was staring at her. But all her feelings was gone as soon as she saw ammy winking at her with his dimpled smile.

ok now she was nervous for rthe dare, hopefully armaan wouldnt be the one. Actually she wished armaan was the one as she knew he would never make her do anything horrible. She had started trusting him more than herself and she didn't know the reason why.

anjy: ok my turn

ridzi smiled thinking atlast her sister was talking to her but what did she know aobut her evil sister.

anjy: You have to go to the attic lights off for 5 mins by yourself

anjy smiled wickedly as she knew ridzi was very very very scared of the dark. She even slept with a lamp on.

ridzi couldn't believe it. How can her sister make her do that?

ridzi: but??

anjy: no butss... I did my dare

ridzi: but armaan..

armaan: anjy saying the truth she done her dare.... o well its just a dare cmon do it(not knowing about her fear)

ridzi unable to fight back agreed. She got up and climbed up the attic. She heard the door slam behind her. She jumped. There was nothing she could see except pitch black darkness. As she walked ahead she felt a few spider webs. She jumped and struggled around with them. She let out a silent scream. She walked forward and as she was unable to see anything she bumped into a chair which then fell on her foot. She screamed and ended up crying.

in the room they heard her scream and armaan ran up the attic.

Riddhima felt a hand on her shoulder which made her let out a louder scream.

ridzi: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

ammy: kya hua mein huun

ridzi realzing its him hugged him as tight as she could as she felt safer than ever. Tears rolled down her eyes. She hugged him tighter. Let her soft delicate head rest on his muscular chest. Seeing this armaan put his hands around her huggin her tightly. One of his hand were on her smooth slim waist.he [ulled her even tighter. Riddhima felt a shiver through her body. She lifted her head and looked at armaan. He looked back at her. She was so beautiful crying he lost his senses. He held her by her cheek and brought her as close as possible. Riddhima was feeling good though she knew she should push him away she didn't. she let him do what he wanted to. They both cold feel each other breaths in their mouths. He first kissed her on the cheek and then her forehead. Then he brought her face to face as close as possible. They were an inch or two away form kissing.Riddhimas eyes were red. She was also not in her senses right now. All she could see was armaan and all she could feel was armaan. As they came closer they heard a shout form underneath.

atul: kya hua

they broke apart gaining their senses.

ammy: urm..... im sorry I didn't mean to

ridzi more tears rolling down her cheek realzing what she was about to do: no its ok I hugged you first.

ammy with a sigh of relief: nah its ok but kya tumhe bhi(thinking of to say how he thinks he feels for her and how hes never felt this way before)

atul came upstairs: kya hua jaldi karo by the way Riddhima tumne sirf 2 minutes kiya par its ok lets go downstairs yaar.

ammy: ya cmon

ridzi: chalo

as they walked off ridzi held armaans hand

ridzi: im really sorry I didn't mean to hug you who mujhe dar lag raha tha isliye

ammy:its ok aur dar kyun

ridzi: who andhere se mujhe bahut bahut dar lagta hai

ammy: aur tumhari di ko pata tha

ridzi: yaa

ammy: phir usne aise kyun kiya

ridzi: wahi tho I told you she hates me

ammy: are phirse mat shuru ho jaao I said na trust me ab chalo sba inetrzaar kar rahe hai

ridzi and armaan both went downstairs and sat down

ridzi spinned the bottle and as it slowed down it landed on muskaan


Muskaan face turned red. She knew rahul will use this opportunity for something she didn't want. But she decided she didn't cae what he asked she will reply truthfully as the games rule applied to her to do but still she was nervous. She was hoping that armaan or someone else will ask her a question instead of rahul but as expected she was wrong.

rahul smiled. He had the best opportunity to find out the answer of the question he has been asking her for years.

rahul:so muskaan

muskaan was disappointed as the person ahe didn't want aksed her.

rahul: muskaan as u know..

muskaan gave him a lil sign from her eyes not to ask anything personal infront of everyone. Rahul saw the hurt in her eyes so he decided to not say ALL of it

rahul: ok your question is that why are you so angry with me? Why don't you talk to me like you did before?

everyone shocked thinking that what sort of question is this. Its meant to be fun. They didn't have a clue what he was saying as the day they've seen both of them all they've done in front of them lot is fight.

atul: rahul yeh kya

muskaan seeing everyone confused decided to answer this question sensibly

muskaan: don't worry atul ok listen rahul I am talking to you as you can see so please no more personal questions and if you expect me to say anything more ill leave the party

rahul was soo sad. No he was just wanting the answer . he didn't want to upset her but he saw that lil tear in her eye which she quickl;y wiped away. He was such a jerk. What ahd he done. He had just made muskaan cry and still he didn't get his answer. He didn't know what to do anymore. He had lost hope. The more he tried the more muskaan got distanced away from him. He decided to leave their friendship as it is.

rahuk: ok im sorry I didn't mean it that way

muski: its kk carry on with the game please

everyone confused staring at them two carried on

atul: ok your dare is to do a sexy wexy dance to impress us guyzz

armaan: yaaaa good idea champ( hi5ed atul)

Riddhima was shocked. She so didn't expect this from armaan. She thought he was different from those perv guyz. OMG what was he saying. She couldn't believe it

ridzi: armaan yeh kya keh rahe ho

atul: what its just a dare

ridzi: but

armaan: but what gosh tum ladkyian bhi na(abit rudely)

ridzi was digusted. Armaan just changed suddenly. She couldn't believe it. She was silent,

as ridzi was shocked the same was rhaul/ well he knew how armaan was but he never expected this from atul specially muskaan in this condition. He couldn't let her do this. He had to stop him.

rahul: armaan what a stupid dare yaar choose another one

armaan: no take it or out of the game

rahul: par muskaan nahi karna chahti to kuch aur dedo

muski: rahul mene tumse kuch kaha hi nahi to tumhe kya pata .

rahul shocked to hear that. What was happening today. Everthing was going wrong!!!

muski: ill do it

armaan: woohoo that's the spirit

anjy: yh muski u can do it

ridzi and rahul were both schocked they didn't even have the guts to see it.

muskaan stood up and tied her duppata around her slim waist. Armaan went and put on music.

the song was chaliya

muskaan wearing a purple and white salwar started dancing.she moved her hips tio the tune. She winked , she pouted. She showed her waist.

as the song continued she came close to ammy and kissed him on the cheek with a sexy smile. Rahul and ridzi were shocked. Ridzi had a weird feeling as armaan smiled cheekily showing his cute dimples to her as she kissed and rahul was shocked to see muski like this. He had never seen her kiss anyone else not even on the cheeks except him.

she chucked her dupaata and stood on the chair. She moved her hips and showed her butt. She opened her curly hair danced wildly. she pulled ammy up in aa sexy way. And they both danced but as ridzi was feeling so awkward she went and switched off the music.

armaan and muski stopped

ridzi: bas bahut hogaya ab game continue karein

everyone clapped for muskaan. Rahul snatched her dupaata off atul who was playing with it and put it on muskaan. He stared at muskaans eyes angrily. Muskaan didn't know what just happened to her. She had never been this wild. Why did she do this?? She was so tired of her queit life. The only reasons he done this was to forget her life for 2 minutes or so but as she saw rahul fill with anger she saw the jelousy inside him which she didn't expect.

armaan looked at ridzi as he sat down fixing his hair. She was burning with anger. She didn't look at him anymore. She concentrated on the game only. She couldn't believe she thought armaan wasnt one of those guyz. She was so wrong.

armaan wondered why she was so angry with him. All he done was dance! But he felt sad when Riddhima looked ta him and didn't smile but showed a angry face.

armaan stood up looking at his watch.: cmon guyz its late now

atul: ya cmon

rahul and muskaan also got up. Muskaan was feeling shy after what just happened so she stayed quiet.

they all went out of the door but ammy was the last one. Anjy had already gone upstairs. Ridzi didn't talk to ammy as she ws really angry with ammy. He didn get why!

ammy: bye ridzi

ridzi: bye(mumbling)

ridzi started to wlak off but ammy held her wrist which sent shivers through her body which made her remember what happened in the attic.

ammy: kya hua? Tum mujhse tikh se baat kyun nahi kar rahi ho

ridzi: kuch nahi (and she ran off)

ammy thought it was because of the attic thing and started blaming himself

ammy walking outside sat on his bike mumbling to himself: OMG your such a jerk. Its all because of youu. She is such an innocent girl. Tumhe kya hogaya tha.usne tujhe gale kya lagaya tu to..... Urghhh armaan you are such a stupid boyy.. she probably feels so weird. Agar usne kal bhi tumse baat nahi ki to...........

as he carried on mumbling he didn't realize he was home.

he freshened up and laid down on his bed in his white vest showing his fit phique and muscles with his tattoos which made him look all tough and sexci which he surely was(hehe) he tried to sleep but that 1 moment was stuck in his head. The way she hugged him tightly, the way he kissed her and how close they were and then the moment where she wasn't talking to him. NO he couldn't take it. He had become so close to her that he coudlt resist her not talking to him. He decided to call her

:ridzi lying on her bed picked up the phone: HI

ammy: hi ridzi woh..

ridzi: armaan tum who bhi itni raat ko.

ammy: who tum mujhse naraaz ho kya?

ridzi: please mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni(remembering how he danced with muskaan)

ammy: par.....

ridzi: bye(she slaamed the phone down and turned to sleep but she knew she wouldn't be able to sleep till she talked to him properly.

ammy was so upset.: see armaan who tumse naraaz hai ab tu kya karega

he thought silently for a few minutes when a idea clicked in his head.

he quickly wore his shirt and his chappals(slippers) and left the house

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Riddhima was trying to sleep forgetting what happened when she heard a knock. She slowly got up abit scared and opened her room door but no one was there. She turned back and lied down still scared thinking who it might be. She heard it again. She got really scared. She wanted to wake her sister up but she knew her sister would just scream at her

she whispered: kaun hai

ammy: mein

she turned to see ammy standing well hangin there at her window standing on a ladder knocking the window.

Riddhima was shocked. She ran and opened the window

ridzi: tum yaha iswaqt agar kisine dekhliya na to musibat hojayegi. Tum ghar jaao. Kyun aayo

armaan heairng her blabber so much so he put his finger on her lips. Ridzi surpised looked down at his finger which made ammy feel awkward so he removed it.

ammy: ab meri baat suno

ridzi realzing she was blabbering so much shut up

ammy: dekho jab tak tum mujhe batogi nahi tum mujhse naraaz kyun ho mein jaunga nahi(acting like a little kid)

ridzi: armaan tum isliye itni raat ko aayo ho

ammy: yaa ab batao to

ridzi: just go form here agar di uth gayi to tumhari na meri kher nahi

ammy: no no no no no

ridzi: acha baba tum ladke bhi kitne zidi hote ho. Tumne apne aap ko muskaan se dance karte hue dekha.

ammy: ya so..

rizi: what do you mean so(disgusted) it was so.......... I cant even say it ab bataya na ab jaao

ammy: acha acha im sorry ab mujhe maaf kardo(cutely holding his ears)

ridzi: no

ammy: please pretty please with a charry on top

ridzi(not being able to resist his cutness: acha acha ab jaao bhi (smioling)

ammy: waise tumhe kyun bura lag raha tha

ridzi: who.. kyunki ....tum.. I mean... who....

ammy laughed hearing her confused: acha acha koi baat nahi mein jaata huun

ridzi: goodnight byee

ammy: sweert dremas try not to dream about me(winked and flying kiss)

ridzi blushed and lied down on her bed.... as she tried to sleep she remembered what ammy said.....

Why was she feeling bad? was it jealousy.?. nah why would she be jealous .. its up to him who he dances with.....

with all these questions stuck in her head slowly her eyes closed and she fell asleep

GUYZZ HWO WAS ITTT??????

please comment or critcizeee


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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww loved it girl
toooo good
adored it soooo much
Awwwwwwww AR hug was soooo hawt
i loved the way you showed muski's dance😆 it was funny
do continue soon
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Hey awesome part!! Loved it!! The AR hug waz so cute!! Continue soon! Thnks for the PM!!

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