1st of all thx for all ur comments they mean a lot
2nd 9th part coming your way NOW
PART 9
She ran to open the door but when she opened'
when she opened she was totally disappointed as the person she was expecting which was ammy wasn't there but standing there was atul with a flower pot in his hand with a wide grin.
ridzi: oh tum (disappointed)
atul: kyun kisi aur ka interzaar ka
ridzi(realzing what she was doing) oh no I didn't mean it that way andar aao na
atul: sure by the way di kaha hai I MEAN I MEAN TUMHARI di kaha hai tumhari haan meri nahi mera who matlab nahi tha tumhe maloom hai na who meri di nahi hai (deep breath)
ridzi: ya ya calm down I noe (laughing)
ab andar aao
atul(walking in slowly) anjali kaha hai
ridzi: who tyaar ho rahi goi abhi aa jayegi tab tak tum beth jaao
atul: oh okk usse jaldi bulao (blushing) mujhe usse kuch dena hai
ridzi: (staring at his flower pot) yeh?
atul: haan mein anjali ko apna favourite tina dunga
ridzi(confused) tina??
atul: haan meri plant tina my favourite plant mere paas bachpan se hai mein isko sabse zyaada pyara karta huun
ridzi: oh kk(kinda confused and surprised at this)
atul:(looking at ridzi expression) kya hua (caressing the plant)
ridzi: kuch nahi main abhi aati huun tab tak tum tv dekh sakte ho
atul: no way mein tv nahi dekhta
ridzi: urm' kyun
atul: tv matlab electricity waste phir pollution phir global warming aur phir hum sab dead aur humare saath yeh chote chote cute cute plants bhi
ridzi: ohh kk tumhari marzi mein aayi
she runs upstairs disappointed. She still wanted to see armaan. She didn't know why she was so eagerly waiting for him. She knew hell come anywayz but she wanted him to come now. To see her and tell her how she looks. She wanted him to tell her that hes here for her. Well she knew that wasn't true but still. A girl can dream. As she looked at the time it was only 6.45 and the party started at 7. she realized it was too early for him to come she guessed hell be late anywayz. You know how these type of guyz can be. Dress to impress the girls but in her heart she knew he wasn't like that.
she walked infront of the mirror and looked at herself. She combed her hair. She struck different poses to the mirror to see herself from different angles. She thought she was looking altight but wanted a boy point of view consent weel armaan point of view only. She got some lip gloss and started applying to her soft shiny lips. She added some more blush on. She was just doing this to pass her time as she had nothing else to do. She also kept looking at her watch incase it was 7 but no there was still 7 minutes left
at that time her sister entered
ridzi: hi di you look very pretty
anjy: (coldly) tell me something new
anjy went in front of the mirror and started applying mascara and then eyeliner
ridzi raised her eyebrows. She was tired of her sister being so cocky towards her. She couldn't wait to see what ammy was going to do to clear their distances. He had promised her to do it. But she didn't think he knew how he will do it but she trusted him to come up with a good plan. Maybe tonight itself.
ridzi: diiii mein kasi lag rahi huun
anjy: mujhe kyun pocch rahi hai by the way doorbeel pe kaun tha kaun aya hai armaan hai kya. (quickly fizing her hair to rush downstairs if its armaan)
ridzi(surprised at anjy waiting for ammy) no atul hai aur who aapke liye phool laya tha
Anjy: oh atul allowhim tum usse dekhlena
*under her breath* aur armaan ko mein dekhungi
she walked out of the room
ridzi sat on her bed taking a deep breath looking at her watch
ridzi thinking: why is time going sooooo slowww
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Outside the gupta mansion there was armaan mallik on his motorbike who had just arrived there. His bike skidded when he pressed the breaks. It stopped. He slowly took og his red helmet(sauce wala laal hehe) . the wind whooshed thru his long hair. It went on his eyes. He ran his hand through his hair smiling because he knew he was looking sexcier than ever. He looked at himself on the side mirrors. He fixed his hair. And winked at himself.
armaan: I wish its good enough to impress Rid.. (realizing what he was going to say)
I mean to impress all of them why was I going to say that no idint mean that. Haye yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai. Is it just attraction ya kuch aur'.
interrupted his thoughts by rahul
rahul: hey dude
ammy: hey rahoooolll haii tu to bara fit lag raha hai pehle se work out karta hai kya(remembering those dayz in college where he use to have gelled up hair check shirts and goofy glasses)
rahul: sangat ka asar hai*pointing towards him*
ammy: I agree (laughing) but your looking much better thanm before so you shud thank me(rembering him teasing rahul with his other mates in college and once he even sed to him that if he wants pacify the chicz he he need to work out)
rahul: yeah yeah whatever ab chalo
ammy: tum jaao mein abhi aaya
rahul: kool
rhaul walks off whilst ammy gets off his bike but before going he checks himself once more in the mirror and winks to himself . after fizing his hair and all he goes off to their house.
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Whilst in the Gupta mansion Riddhima was still sitting on her bed when she heard a doorbell. She jumped of her bed in excitement
ridzi:ATLAST
she couldn't wait to see him she ran to the top of the stairs but soon stopped when she saw rahul.
the disappointed Riddhima frowned and started to walk back to her room with her thoughts of armaan which were interrupted by the voice of armaan.
armaan from the door(ridzi cant see him yet)
armaan: hi babes(to anjy)
ridzi turned around flipping her long shiny hair back which was tied in a pony: woh to armaan ke awaaz thi par who hai kahan(rying to see him but she could only see rhaul)
ammy stepped forward standing right next to rahul .
NOW ridzi had a great view of ammy from the top of the stairs.
her smile grew wider as armaan looked at her and mimed hi. She mimed back
anjali who opened the door was blaabering on to ammy but didn't notice how ammy wasn't even looking at her
anjy: hi itni der kyun lagadi traffic tha kya? arman hayee tum kitne handsome lag rahe ho. Ghar to mushkil se nahi mila na. waise mein kaise lag rahi huun. Humesha ki tara beautiful na? mujhe mallom hai wiase rahul tum bhi itne bure nahi lag rahe ho
as she was blabbering on armaan looked at Riddhima with a wide grin . he mimed to her with a thumbs up that she was looking gorgues. Riddhima mimed back with a sgh of relief and sed thank you. she said the same thing back. And ammy also sed tahnkyou. Ridzi couldn't take her eyes away from him. She had never seen such a sexci man. He was looking soooo awesome. She was soo glad to see black on him. It suited him very well. As she was day dreaming ammy caught her atteintion miming
anjy was still blaabering on forgetting theyr still standing outside at the door but armaan couldn't care less because he was enjoying miming to Riddhima.
he mimed to riddhim to open her hair as it would look much prettier opened. Riddhima taking his advice took her pony out and there lied her beautiful long hair. Her hair was so silky and shiny. She loved her hair. She always used to do a pny but after this she knew she would leave it out.Her fringe covered her eyes. She kept putting it behind her ear but it didn't work. Armaan remembered that night in the hospital.
Riddhima realizing theyr still at the door so she ran downstairs but near the end of the stairs she was about to slip. Armaan noticed so he ran for it to save her not realzing he just pushed anjy on the ground.
as atul ran to pick up anjy by giving him his hand . anjy refused in anger to see ammy helping ridzi but not her. She got up in anger and stormed to the kitchen
ridzi was in ammys arma lying their having another eye lock session. She didn't care less about what just happened. If she hurt herself or not. She was actually glad. She was in armaans arms staring at his awesome expressive gol gol eyes. Ammy was feeling the same he just stared at her without wanting this beautiful moment to stop. All he could see was the prettiest girl he ad ever seen right there in his arms stairing right back at him with her pretty eyes. This perfect moment for these two was ruined by atul.
atul: armaan dekh na phirse anjy nraaz ho gayi
armaan gaining back to his senses left Riddhima.
ammy: ridzi tum tikh to ho na
ridzi: yah thankyou so much tum nahi hote to mujhe zaroor chot lag jaati
ammy: koi baat nahi (turning to atul) by the way anjy ko kya hua
atul: maloom nahi yaar tumne usse giraya to who gusse mein chali gayi
ammy: oh my bad
anjy came in anger still
ammy: oh babes im sorry maine tumhe dekha nahi who Riddhima gir rhai thi aur
anjy: yah yah don't care kk maaf kiya ab chalo party shhru karte hain
rahul: abhi muskaan nahi aayi uska wait karo
anjy: oh yah who kahan hai
rahul: pata nahi(worried remebring the last time he saw her as she was angry with him)
dorrbell rang
rhaul ran for the door: aa gayii
he opened it
anjy walked over
rahul: hiiii itni der kyun lagadi
muski: urm.. who
anjy: hi muskaan rahul yeh mera ghar hai isliye mein hi darwaz kholti huun tumne kyun khola
rhaul: oh yh whatever (and walked off confused thinking whats the big deal)
anjy: cmon lets rock the party now
ammy: dr shashank kaha hain
Riddhima: who unko emergency case aa gaya tha
anjy: who mujhse puuch raha tha(angrily) haina armaan(swwetly)
ammy: ya I mean no I mean I don't know yaar chalo
anjy: kool pehle dance
they put on some loud music dancing on different fast songs.
Riddhima was leaving to kitchen when armaan held her hand
ammy: kaha jaa rahi ho
ridzi: who sab ke liye kuch peen eke liye lane
ammy: oh usko chodo come dance
as he was talking to her anjy looked at them two in anger but jealousy at the same time
she wasn't really dancing just moving her hands but atul was danicing like crazy moving around her.
muskaan and rahul were also just moving hands not dancing in full force
seeing this ammy made an announcement
ammy: yaar guyz cmon yaar whats this issse koi party kehte hai put the volume louder aur sab aise nacho aise nacho ke''(thiniking) bas nacho yaar
everyone laughed at this sweet cute confused ammy
AFTER 30-45 mins or so as everyone got tired of dancing crazily enjoying themselves not carung about who theyre dancing with were really tired so theyd decided to slowdance
they put on slow romantic tune without lyrics.
ammy: grab your partners
atul grabbed anjy as quik as possible and oobviously rahul grabbed muskaan. So ammy was left with Riddhima not that he was gonna choose anyone else anywayz
rahul and muskaan danced away with the music muskaan had forgotten everthing. She just rested her head on his shoulder and felt the moment. She was enjoying every second . she wasn't in her senses. She hugged rahul as tight as possible and danced away slowly
rahul was feeling so relievd after so many long years. There was his love hugging him. He hugged her back and let her rest on his shoulder. He was living the moment. He kissed muskaan on her forehead.
Whilst anjy was so NOT enjoying her dance with atul. He couldn't dance at all. He kept steeping on her foot or kept twisting himself aroung instead of her. She was sick and tired of him already.
but ammy and ridhima were aving a perfect dance.
ammy put his hand on Riddhima wasit as she felt a lil shiver through her spine. She held his hand slowly and they started moving. They couldn't hear anything or see anything else. It was like a prefect dream for both of them. They were enjoying every second of it. As they looked deeply and immensely into each others eyes they could see each other in each others eyes. This was so romantic. Ridzi didn't know what she saw in him but she knew she felt something for him but she also thought it was too soon as she just met him and vice versa. Ammy also knew ha felt something for her but he also kenw he found all girls attractive but something was unusual here something different.
they loved to be around each other. Loved each others company. As they got closer ammys hand around her waist got tighter. She felt the shivers through her spine.they were really close. So close that they could hear each others breath.
as rahul and muskaan and ammy and Riddhima were soo enjying this dance anjy was not though atul was. So anjy stopped the music
muskaan relzing pushed rahul.
muski: urm.. im sorry mein abhi aayi
tears rolling down her eyes ran upstairs in to the washroom
ammy and ridzi were still string into each others eyes not notcing the music had stopped.
anjy in jealousy came and pushed them apart
anjy: hogaya ab chalo khana khaane
ammy shocked and surprised at the same time was also very happy.
as anjy was so angry he was smiling at Riddhima showing his cute deep dimples and Riddhima glared in his eyes for dunno how long.
anjy: ridzi ridzi
ridzi coming back to senses: oh yh haan di
anjy: khaana?
ridzi: ooh ya di abhi laayi.
as she walked to the kitchen she turned to see if ammy was lokking at her and not to be surprised he was. Both of them smiled to each other. Riddhim not looking where shes going bumped into the door
ammy: (running to her) tum tikh to ho na pehle who seeriyon se girna ab yeh lagta hai bad luck din hai
ridzi(thinking about the whole day. First her in his arms and then the dance) NO WAY mera to aaj good luck din lag raha hai mujjhe
ammy smiled knowing what she was talking about
he went sat back on his chair till ridzi went into the kitchen
as they all sat on the dining table wating for the food muskaan ran downstairs.
muski: urm.. Sorry who meri tabyat kuch tikh nahi thi(she was staring at rahul who was staring right back at her)
anjy tried to start a convo with ammy but he was to busy waiting for ridzi
anjy: urm.. tumhe kya kya karna pasand hai?
ammy: kuch bhi
anjy: tum kaha se aayo
ammy: yahi se
anjy: tumhare parivaar mein kaun kaun hai?
ammy: mein akela
anjy tired of his short answers stopped asking him questions.
ridzi came with a tray in her hands serving the food. Ridzi smiled at ammy as she was serving him. Not realzing she put too much chawal in his plate.
ridzi: urmm. Sorry who..
ammy: koi baat nahi mein kaah lunga
ridzi: sure isn't it too much
ammy: koi baat nmahi tumne parosa hai to khaana parega(he winked at her)
ridzi: smiled and went to serve others.
as ammy took a spoon out of his daal chawal he was extremely surprised that daal chawal can taste soo good
ammy: yeh kisne banaya hai
ridzi: urm.. maine kyun ache nahi hai
ammy: nahi to'..
ridzi loked dwon in embarrassment
ammy: bahut baut bahut ache hain aise daal chawal to maine kabhi taste hi nahi kiye waah waah waah
apna haath do
ridzi: kyun
ammy: do na
ridzi stepped forward nervously and gave him her hand
he kissed her hand laevung everuyone surprised
ammy: aise haathon ko to chumna chaiye kya jaadoo hai inme
ridzi blushing: thankyou
as everyone finished eating they all got up and sat on the sofa
rhaul: waah kya kana tha maza aa gaya
muskaan was just day dreaming
atul was smiling and staring at anjy
anjy was angry
ammy also had a wide grin on his face
ridzi was cleaning the table
seeing this ammy went to help
he took the things out of ridzi hands and took it inside the kitchen himself
ridzi just stood their smiling at him. She was feeling on top of the world. She never thought shell find a great friend like him
after ammy helped ridzi cleaed up they all sat down tired thinking of what to do next
atul: ab kya karein(excited)
ridzi: koi game khelte hai
rahul: yaa par kaunsi
ammy: idea
everyone including anjy and muskaan: what?
ammy: chalo to
he took everyone back to the dining table and sat evryonoe down
ridzi confused: par yahan what game I don't get it
ammy: wait to karon
he went inside the kitchen and found a glass bottle which he broght back to the table
ammy: dekho ab hum truth and dare kehlenge
rahul: u mean truth or dare
ammy: NO I mean truth and dare
anjy: who kya hai
ammy: dekho jispe bhi yeh bottle land karegi usko ek truthfully sawaal ka answer dena hoga and ek dare karni pareghi so itll be more fun so TRUTH AND DARE
ok?
ridzi: ya ok(excited)
atul: ya sounds like fun
anjy: ya lets play then
ammy: first spin mine
as evertyone sat down comftably on their chaits ammy spinned the bottle . everyone stared at the bottle to see who it will land on. Everyone heart going thud thud nervous incase it lands on them. As the bottle slowed down it landed on....
GUYZZ hw wz itt??
please comment or criticze
BTW PLZ TELL ME IF ITS TOO LONG OR TOO SHORT???
Edited by armaanno01fan - 16 years ago
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