Mayur FF:Hum Tum(NOTE Page 97)*FF ENDED* - Page 78

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988

hey munee darling!!!!!!!!! a big huge n love-filled congrats 2 u for d BEST FF WRITER award!!!!!!!! 👍🏼
thnx

m so very pru of u dear....may god bless u wid more such awards n fame...... 👏

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sory 4 late commentig...i was busy wid yet anothr colg trip of mine...tk cr...

np
n plz if ya can,do write d sequel of HUM TUM....luv u dear...god bless ⭐️ 🤗

SURE!!!i will..thnx

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

GR8 going 👏👏👏.... my mayur r married with a daughter .... ( u know i always imagine them ending up with a daughter .... Mayu will just go crazy over his daughter 😳😳😳...)

i imagine da same-LOL

so sweet the way he confessed👏 ...i love happy ending 😛😉..... and ur censored stuff 🤣....
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muneefah u r not even 16 as yet ??? whats going in ur mind !!!😆
LOL!!!U remind of my mum-She says da same😉

lovely FF .👏..and very sweet and happy ending .👏👏
thnx
👏👏..i do hope r real Mayur will also end up with a daughter who would have Mayu's intelligence and Nups intesity of living every moment of her life
inshallah
....beautiful ending 👏...... specially ur censored stuff ..talks ... such a cute daughter 😛😛
😳

Originally posted by: -chocolateboy-

awwww mann muneefah...

that wuz a mind blowing ff yaar...
😳

ab soch raha hoon

main bhi apna haath chala ke dhekta hoon ffs pe...

who knwwss.??? achha bhi ho saktaa hai yaar...

mayb-u neva know

lol.. thnks yaar pm karne ke liye,,,
np

bahuutt hi mazaa aaya yaar...
😳

enjoy school yaar..
thnx

love yuvi

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

😲 last part?!!! 😲 *thunder* *lightning*

lol

oh nooooo i jus started to read yur ff muneefah and got really hooked on and now yu'v ended it?!!! 😭 aww i understand yu'll be busy!! but will miss yur ff!!!! 😭

AWWW-huney*gives a tite hug*

okay back to the update....

Absolutely brilliant!!!!! 👏👏👏

i think this was the best part!!!!! 😃
😳

Loved it sooooo much!! 🤗

Ooo party aur woh bhi mayank lol good idea!! 😉
lol

Awww i loved the way mayank proposed to nupur 😳 the lines were sooo "awww i could hug yu right now" 😳

*HUGS BAK*
and her reply was mind-blasting!!!!! Shoo shweet!!! 😳
😳

Ooooo i like how yu put it as a story at the end 😛 and wow mayur got a girl!!! 😳
hehe-yea

I absolutely adored the last part...all the dialogues were fantastic and so funny!! 😃 esp

Mayank:haan!!woye tou!!Aya he nahi!!SNEHA tou asmaan se utar gaye!!
Sneha:Mummy!!Kya ye censored hota hai???
hahaha good lines!!! 👍🏼

All in all a beautiful well written part!!!! 👏

Thanks for writing such a wonderful ff!! Yur a ⭐️

Gona miss it!!

Hinna xx

Originally posted by: sheena_12

Awwww......cute part!! really loved it!!

Hope u cud have continued but i understand!!

Schoolz reopening-Tough time cuming honey be ready!...LOL!!

Originally posted by: Senny

oh no muneefa i didn't know that you are ending this, understand that you are busy with school man.
🤢

but please do start off the sequel soon man.
ill try
about this part and ff wow it was amazing, i have read and every update of yours with immense love, expectations and enthusiasm, not once have you disappointed me, you are such an animpactful writer who writes sooo brilliantly man, do write the next part, take your time, we will wait. all the best, God bless.

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats

hey Muneefah! ths wz so cute!

😳
the ending cudnt have been better than ths!

hey plz start another ff! gonna mis ths surely! nd keep it up!
ill try huney

Originally posted by: Kanky

Excellent job Muneefa!! 😊

thanku🤗

And the ending . . . omg twas so very hilarious! 😆

😆

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

ending part.....superb...sneha lovely daughter....censored part scene.....ha ha ha ha i loved reding it.....but u ended it very soon yaa....

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Good fourth part.
Mayu n his mom, humesha un k dimaag me koi na koi khichdi pakti hi rehti hai.
Mayu is getting so helpful to Noops kya baat hai?
Sahi kaha Noops ne ki humesha se hi aise the ki abhi achanak ho gaye ho?