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Hey Muneefah

Thanks for PMing me! I just read the entire fic!

I'm loving it really!! Mayank is really very sweet in this...hehe...he offered her to sit by him in class, dropped her home, and took her to see Mumbai...wow yaar!!

LOL....their conversations are great!! And when Nupur asked him why was he goig to library..."Kya GF se milne ka secret place hai..?"...LOL>..haha...

You're doing a Great job on it yaar!! My fav up until now was the Mumbai tour with the paani puri and ice cream and the rain dance!!

Do update soon and add me to the PM list!

Originally posted by: shinella

muneefah<br><font color="#0099cc" size="6" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i m the first one to comment<br>it was sooooooo sweet and endearring👏😳<br>truly mayurish😆<br>i juss wanna suggest that in future can u make them really passionate😃<br>u r a ⭐️</font>

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....its so chweet yaar

it was damn cute

he takes her out for mumbai darshan and then rain !!!..wow its supreb yaar

hmm..toh aage kya kar ahe hoo..i am waiitng eagerly for it now

thanx for pm

loved ur update

Originally posted by: falak01

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color=#0000ff size=3>sooooo muneefah.....MAYUR KE DIL YAHAN MILL RAHE HAIN....😆😆</FONT>

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color=#0000ff size=3>i have read ur ff for d first time....and i loved it....jaisa aajkal hota hai...i mean mere saath to nahi hua but abhi to poori zindgi baaki hai... </FONT>

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color=#0000ff size=3>ur ff is straight 4ward and which is very good...</FONT>

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color=#0000ff size=3>thanx 4 d pm...</FONT>

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color=#0000ff size=3>looking 4ward 4 d next part...</FONT>

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#0000ff size=3>good job...👏👏👏</FONT>

Originally posted by: cuppycake990

awesome job muneefa...it was such a sweet update...👍🏼<br>

Hey sweety,