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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
really u were right u r receiving meny comments.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: DREAM GIRL


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<font size="3"><font color="#000000"><br>hmm goin good...........<br>well u'll surely receive good comments..😉<br></font></font>



LOL
Thanku Fariha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: DREAM GIRL

hey do add me in pm notification list..................<br>well 1st part was a bit short but good.<br>



Okay sure
Well,short tha buh m glad u liked it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
PART 3

next day of college has finished.

nupur sitting on da same stairs as da day b4

mayank is on his way to out of da college

wen ha sees nupur

Mayu:'tm aj phir nahi gaye..mujhey lagta tmhare uday bhaiya tmhari bolne ki adatse dar gayen hain'

Nup:'by god mayank tm bhi na main tou bilkul nahi bolti.wo ghar is aqt koi nahi hai tou main soch rahi the k ghar ja kar kya karun gi.by god akeli bore ho jai hun'

Mayu:'hmmmmmmmm. i c! um agar tm kaho tou main tmhaem mumbai ghumata hun!!'

Nup:'BY GOD MAYANK!tm kitne sweet'

and pulls mayanks cheeks

Mayu (touching his cheek wid a shocked xpression):ummmmmmmmm. t....t..tou chalen

Nup exclaims:haaan

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Nup:'By god! mumbai kitnaaaaa barha hai'

mayu n nup spend all their afternoon loitering in mumbai

other than showin nup around mayu had to lsn to nup's chitter chatter

Nup:'By god tm log tou ghum hi hojate hoge','morena tou iska adha bi nahi hai...'

Nup:'By god! mayank wont u ask if i wana eat sumthing'

Mayu:'hmmmm. chalo main tmhe mumbai mein morena dikhata hun'

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Mayu:'Dekha Nupur!Morena in mumbai!

Mayank brought Nupur to his fav pani poori wala.

Nup:By God! Pani poori tou mujhe bhe pasand hai.

& dey proceed towards the pani poori wala.

As dey r eating Nupur Sees da "Ice-cream Wala"

Nup:Ohh shit!!!!!Mirchey!!!

Mayu:Nupur pani peelo.Here

& he offers her da glass of water

Nup:Paani peene se kya hoga.Woh dekho ice-cream wala araha hai.

Mayu:Oh!tou ye drama ice-cream ke liye tha.Ruko,Lata ho

& goes to get da ice-cream

Nup 2 Herself:Aww!!He's so sweet

Mayanks gets ice-cream 4 dem.

While eatin:

Nup:Mayank!Late hogaye hai.I better get goin

Mayu:Haan Chalo mein tumhe ghar chor deta ho

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Again Mayur Walks towards Nupur's house

When it starts to rain.& Mayank Rushes Towards the house.Buh Nupur stays 2 njoy the rain.& drags Mayank in da rain 2.

Mayu:Nupur!!Tumhara dimag kharab hogaya hai.

Nup:Mayank,Dimag mera nahi tumhara kharab hai.Dis is the season's first rainfall Tou enjoy karo!!!

Answerless Mayank Does As Nupur says.It had been a long tym since mayank had fun in da rain.

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after The rainfall finishes,Mayur Drink coffee made by Nupur. Den Mayank leaves 4 his house whistling to himself

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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
muneefah
i m the first one to comment
it was sooooooo sweet and endearring👏😳
truly mayurish😆
i juss wanna suggest that in future can u make them really passionate😃
u r a ⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....its so chweet yaar
it was damn cute
he takes her out for mumbai darshan and then rain !!!..wow its supreb yaar
hmm..toh aage kya kar ahe hoo..i am waiitng eagerly for it now
thanx for pm
loved ur update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
sooooo muneefah.....MAYUR KE DIL YAHAN MILL RAHE HAIN....😆😆
i have read ur ff for d first time....and i loved it....jaisa aajkal hota hai...i mean mere saath to nahi hua but abhi to poori zindgi baaki hai...
ur ff is straight 4ward and which is very good...
thanx 4 d pm...
looking 4ward 4 d next part...
good job...👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
awesome job muneefa...it was such a sweet update...👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
good part....................mayur enjoing in the rain..........hmmmmmmm
haum bichare yahan to baaarish hi nahin hoti.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
lovedd this part munee, especially the last lines
it was a sweet and cute update overall, keep it up

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