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Posted: 19 years ago
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i cnt wait for the first part either!!...plz start soon 😃
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interestin cery interesting plz start the fanfic soon!!!
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not even 1st episode

disappointed.... 😭
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Originally posted by: touchmenot

not even 1st episode

disappointed.... 😭

just a few more minutes! 😛

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come on plzzzz contt 😭

give me 10 more minutes! 😉

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ya neha contineu yaar
we cant wait ne more
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neha plz post the first part soon,i can't wait
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Part One Pyaar Ka Pal...

"What the hell is this?" Screamed Damani Kapoor with a violent voice. All her worker stood in front of her with there head bowed down. "Now do you guys have any answer or should I fire you?"

"Ma'am…" The first employer whispered

"Shut-Up?" She squealed back.

"Damani, what's the problem?" questioned Damani's husband. Damani turns to her tall husband wearing a black suit, on hand in his pocket.

"Dilip, our company is facing major losses. We have lost over 1 million pounds in the past one week, and 3 tender to the same company."

"To who Damani?"

"Some company named Suraj Fashion House!" Damani and Dilip Kapoor have been married for twenty-six years now; they have a beautiful daughter Kirpa Kapoor, 24. Dilip was a very poor man when he arrived in London 3 years before he met Damani. They got married and started of with a small fashion house which today is the largest fashion house in London, England. They became so successful that they forgot their daughter Kripa Kapoor, who hates them for this reason now. And speaking of Kirpa Kapoor, where is she right now?

The crowd at the shopping mall is crazy as a new college year is about to start, and out of all these people out stood one girl. Holding about fifty different bags, she walks down the mall trying her best not to trip over anything or crash with anyone there, she's almost out of the mall when suddenly her phone vibrates in her back pocket, she freaks out from the vibration and her bags fly all around her, the whole mall pauses and looks at her. Her soft chocolate brown eyes are embarrassed and her cheeks turn a cheery red. She slowly bends down and starts to pick up her bags. And at this point there is no way she can pick up all the bags at once. "I'm going to kill this person on the phone!" Kripa gets up and kicks her bags and picks the phone up. "Who are you and what do you want?" She screams, as once again everyone passing her looks at her, she puts the phone on hold and looks at the guys across her and points her figure towards him and asks him to come to her. The guy walks to her with a gleeful smile!

"Hi sexy!" He chirps. He motions to puts his arm around Kripa when she gives him a tight slap. "What the hell was that for??"

Kripa stands there for a few seconds looking at the guys angry face and then talks, "Well, that was to teach you a lesson, so next time when you see a girl or anyone in problem you will help them instead of laughing at them like an idiot!" The guy stands in front of a smiling Kripa with one hand on his cheek. "Now what are you staring at, come on darling pick up my bags and help me!" The guy is shocked at Kirpa's behavior. "I think u didn't hear me? I said pick up my bags!" The guy slowly bends down and picks up the bags while Kripa puts the phone on her ear. "Hello"

"Kripa… yeh sab kya tha?"

"Kya sab kya tha, and who is this?"

"Kripa, this is your mom!"

"Oh! Mom, aapko mera yaad kaisa aaygi aaj, lagta hai koi appointments nahie thi aaj?!?!"

"Just stop it Kripa, human tumahra liya kya kya nahie kiya, aur tum humasha humko taana deti retha ho." Said Damani in a stronge voice.

"Mom if sending me to school, feeding me, and giving me a shelter is what a parents have to do, then I'm sorry to say, why did god make parents, I think I am capable enough to do that myself now." Every word out of Kripa's mouth was a dagger. And before Damani could say anything Kripa talks once again, this time almost in tears turning away from the guy standing in front of her waiting for her with full patients. "Don't worry Mom, I remember that we have a business dinner at home and you want me to be there in my best outfit and make-up, I will be home by time, don't worry. Bye Mom." Kripa ends the call with shaking hands and wipes her tears and turns around. She takes the bags from the man giving him a faint and depressed 'Thanks.' All her bags hung from both her arms and she carefully made her way out the mall. She made her way to her sexy silver color, Aston Martin. She opened the back door and threw all her bags inside and then made her way behind the wheel. She attached her cell phone to her steering wheel and started the car. Kripa got home about thirty minutes later, and she was at no surprise when her servant Teddy told her that her parents weren't home. She sighed and went to her room. She threw the door open and puts her bags on the bed and sits down in front of her mirror taking her jewelry off. Kripa was leaving to London University in three days. She didn't want to. Kripa had applied to about twelve different universities, hoping to get into Oxford, but to her disappointment she was rejected due to some reason. She was going to London University based on a full 8 years scholarship. The reason she applied for one because she didn't want to depend on her parents for her education. She sat there looking at her self and then down at the rejection letter she received from Oxford University 3 months back telling her that she has been rejected but is on the "holding" list, if any one were to drop she would get the spot. But at this point three days before starting graduate school she didn't have any hope. She opens her closet which was pretty empty now, just a few pairs of clothes; she takes out a fresh pair of jeans and a black tank top. She's about to step into the bathroom when she hears a soft knock on the door. "One can't even shower peacefully in this house." she mumbles in an angry voice. She sets her cloths down on her bed and opens the door to find Teddy standing in front of her. "Teddy? What's up?" She leans on the wall and talk again, "What brings u here?"

"Ma'am there's a letter for you!"

"Thanks Teddy! You can go."

"Yes Ma'am." He says in an obedient voice.

"Teddy" Teddy turns around and looks at Kripa, "You can call me Kripa" Teddy smiles and Kirpa and leaves. Kripa closes the door and looks at the sealed letter, and sets it aside for now, and goes into the bathroom and takes a nice warm shower.

Thirty minutes later she comes out of the shower wrapped in a pink towel and her wet hair hand down her fair back. Kripa walks to her window and draws the curtains then quickly changes into her outfit, she applies nothing more than a nice pink gloss and then gets ready to go down stairs to make something for her when her eyes set on that letter again. She picks it up and very carefully opens it. She unfolds the letter and scans through it. And her eyes freeze when she read the words 'You have been accepted into Oxford University as a wild card entry, congrats!" Kripa jumps up in joy and runs down stairs to tell her parents, until she realizes no one is home. She quickly throws the depressing thought over her head and picks up her cell phone and calls Josh, Kirpa's close friend though her parents and his parents. But unlike her parents, Josh's parents were very supportive of him and his decisions. Josh was secretly in love with Kripa but never told her, because he knew she would never approve. Josh was completing his last year at Oxford in Business Management. Josh's phone kept ringing and he wouldn't pick up, now Kripa decides to go to his house. She quickly slips into a nice warm jacket and grabs her purse and cell and leaves for his house, driving 70 MPH. SHe reaches Josh's beautiful mansion and waits for the colossal ivory gate with patterns of different symbols of royalty and power around it. Finally the whole gate opens and drives in Kripa around beautiful green garden and parks next to a gorgeous water fountain and runs into the home throwing open the tall doors, and there she finds Josh sitting peacefully reading a new paper. Kripa runs to him and jumps on the soft next to him.

"JOSHHHHHHH Guess what!!"

"Kripa breath! Ab batao kya hua?"

"Josh, I got selected for Oxford, mujhko aaj hei letter mila."

"Good for you! So that calls for a celebration, we should go out tonight."

Kripa sits back disappointed and in a soft somber voice she says, "I wish I could Josh, lakin ajj sham ghar par koi dinner hai, I have to be there, Mom chati hai main kisi sa milu."

"Oh really!" Josh says in a naught voice!

"Oh shut-up Josh, like I would ever say yes in the first meet!"

"Well you never know, aagar vo meri thara handsome, hot, aur, successful ho then you would, wouldn't you?!"

"Josh, darling, who told u that you are Handsome and Hot?!"

"It's a fact sweetheart! College main har ladki mujhk par marthi hai! Aur ek main ho jo sirf ek ke peecha ho!"

"Kyun hai vo kismat wali!"

"Tum!"

"What?!"

"Of course, you're the only lady in my life, aur koi ha he nahie!"

"Tho dhoondho, kyun tum mujhk dara raha ho"!

"Kripa chill man! Main sirf maazak kar raha ho!"

"I know! Waisa aunty kaha hai?"

"Dad aur Mom bahar gya hai, bas aata hoy ga"

"Well tell them 'Hi' Main chalthi ho."

"Ok! We'll see you tonight!"

"Tonight?!"

"Haan main bhi us party main hoga, with my Dad! Aur phir maybe you can help me select a girl!"

"Very Funny! Cholo main chaliti ho!" Kripa gives him a quick hug and runs out of the beautiful place and back home!

Edited by neha9 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow, that was really good. Continue soon. please
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awesome part!!!!!!!!!!! i lubb kripa's charcter 👏 👏 👏

JOSH IS NOT GOING OUT WITH KRIPA

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