Pablo's Muse [I] -AR- Pt. 25/Pg 143 May 9, 11 - Page 98

Originally posted by: Suvarna....

Good one ... but many open ends and sorta getting woven into a web. Waiting for the threads to unentangle.

Originally posted by: esquisse

As odd as it may sound, to readers, I am begining to see that now😆 I feel like no one else would have been as perfect for this cameo ;)

And I'm back! 😃

Yes, I did say mid-December, and yes, I know I'm late. But hopefully, I'm only forgivably late. 😛

As always, I loved the part. (I never get tired of saying that, but I do wonder if you ever get tired of hearing (or reading) it). I think the fact that there wasn't any major AR interaction was really very important for this part. After all, they are on a break of sorts.

And I think the distances between them are going to act like a catalyst in bringing them closer, cheesy though that sounds. By having some 'alone-time,' they've both had time to think and reflect about everything…their past, their present and their future.

In fact, I particularly enjoyed those passages of reflection. You beautifully penned down what each of them was thinking and very subtly showed a movement in their thoughts from reflection to resolution, where they both decided what they needed to do. They needed to talk to each other.

And what's even more amazing is that by giving each other space, and reflecting as individuals, they've actually come to the same conclusion, and are now on the same page. And I loved that about this part…the way they both took different routes, but ended up in the same place.

And the last bit where they're both in the hospital was so symbolic of that. Riddhima ended up there to think, and Armaan got there on impulse. But ultimately, they were both there, together.

But how can I comment on the FF without a special mention to NJ? I was smiling the whole way through her bit, there's so much edge to her character, and I love how you brought that out. (The pepper spray incident, no doubt, helped in doing that!)

To sum it all up, I thoroughly enjoyed the update, right from NJ's liveliness to Armaan and Riddhima's quiet pondering.

Hope to read more of it very soon! (And in case I don't speak to you before then, Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year! 😃)

Nikhi

Originally posted by: Nikhi...

And I'm back! 😃

Yes, I did say mid-December, and yes, I know I'm late. But hopefully, I'm only forgivably late. 😛

It's okay, given how much time I have taken to finally get to responding to your lovely comment, my aplogies for this delay.

As always, I loved the part. (I never get tired of saying that, but I do wonder if you ever get tired of hearing (or reading) it). I think the fact that there wasn't any major AR interaction was really very important for this part. After all, they are on a break of sorts.

Nikhi

And I think the distances between them are going to act like a catalyst in bringing them closer, cheesy though that sounds. By having some 'alone-time,' they've both had time to think and reflect about everything'their past, their present and their future.

Absolutely NOT! I will never get tired of hearing (or reading that) on the contrary my friend, it just makes my day everytime. And yes, glad you agree on that bit about AR, they are on a break of sorts and therefore as little of them as possible, although I doubt either one will be able to keep that up for much longer😆

In fact, I particularly enjoyed those passages of reflection. You beautifully penned down what each of them was thinking and very subtly showed a movement in their thoughts from reflection to resolution, where they both decided what they needed to do. They needed to talk to each other.

Glad to know, you enjoyed those bits. But its clear to them both that they need to talk it out. That was never the issue was it, it was more about how to initiate the conversation that would undoubtedly lead towards the inevitable unplesant family history that they share :(

And what's even more amazing is that by giving each other space, and reflecting as individuals, they've actually come to the same conclusion, and are now on the same page. And I loved that about this part'the way they both took different routes, but ended up in the same place.

And the last bit where they're both in the hospital was so symbolic of that. Riddhima ended up there to think, and Armaan got there on impulse. But ultimately, they were both there, together.

Armaan couldn't stay away for long, let's see what surprises the morning brings ;)

But how can I comment on the FF without a special mention to NJ? I was smiling the whole way through her bit, there's so much edge to her character, and I love how you brought that out. (The pepper spray incident, no doubt, helped in doing that!)

A word for the darling celeb I see, although I have to agree, she's brought in a spark to the whole place...I suppose that's just typically NJ :D

To sum it all up, I thoroughly enjoyed the update, right from NJ's liveliness to Armaan and Riddhima's quiet pondering.

Hope to read more of it very soon! (And in case I don't speak to you before then, Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year! 😃)

Thank you! It's always a pleasure to read your comment, and leaves me with a huge smile on my face :) And Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year to you too. I have the next update almost ready, as a christmas gift to all you guys :) Will be updating soon.

Nikhi

Originally posted by: asma_227

When r u gonna update??

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

hiiii
sorry 4 da late comment
went abroad
i love ur ff
Awesome update
Loved it
Can't wait 4 problems 2 sort out

loved armaan
con soon
thanks 4 da pm