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Posted: 16 years ago
same to same....lol..........mjht my phaaaaboite nd mayur my jaaaannn.......why didnt u go 2 skul today?.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi sindhya. i m Mithila. I read ur FF yesterday late night. i was sleepy i couldn't comment. m so sory that read ur FF so late when u finished writing 5 parts. how could i miss such a beautiful FF. m sorry i m commenting late.
neways ur FF is amazing. u r a great writer.
n u potrayed mayur very well dear.
really nice FF . loved ur FF.
all 5 parts were awwwwwwwwwwwwwwesuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum.👏🤗
plzzz add me to ur pm list.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya_s

same to same....lol..........mjht my phaaaaboite nd mayur my jaaaannn.......why didnt u go 2 skul today?.......

highhh tidess in mumbaiii....
sadd na!!???!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

Hi sindhya. i m Mithila. I read ur FF yesterday late night. i was sleepy i couldn't comment. m so sory that read ur FF so late when u finished writing 5 parts. how could i miss such a beautiful FF. m sorry i m commenting late.

neways ur FF is amazing. u r a great writer.
n u potrayed mayur very well dear.
really nice FF . loved ur FF.
all 5 parts were awwwwwwwwwwwwwwesuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum.👏🤗
plzzz add me to ur pm list.

heyyyy thnnksss sooooooooo muchhh mithila....
urr chooooo chweeeeetttt....
ps- srryy yaar i dnt pm ne1!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Okay this is a part in which ive tried to include all the possible if members who i love.

Part 6-

Mayank slowly followed nupur down the narrow office corridor without making a sound. Thinking of what had happened now? When suddenly he heard someone call out his name. He quickly turned to see his old buddy from school, nidhi.

As soon as he saw her, he felt that familiar sense of long-forgotten love. Nidhi was one of the sweetest girls in his school. A girl who was always ready to help him out of piling up shit. In school she had been the heartthrob of all the guys, including him. But he had never openly told her his feelings. And then well life moved on. But now suddenly seeing each other after 6 years, just brought a huge smile on his face.

She had not changed at all, the same classy attire, open hair, sparkling eyes, caring and jolly tone. Nothing had changed, she was still the same except now she didn't wear a cute pony in her hair.

He quickly walked off towards her and hugged her tight as he felt the familiar sense of warmth rush in.

Nidhi- how are you doing dude?

Mayank- im great nidz. How are you?

He asked as he felt his excitement welling up in his eyes.

Nidhi- me.. im just.. just... great!

Mayank- nidz you wnt believe- where are your pigtails gone?

He asked as they both broke down giggling.

Nidhi- im not a kid you buzo.

She said punching him slightly on his arm.

Mayank- its so wierd seeing you all grown up!

Nidhi- oh tell me about it. Its so tough to see you this way fatty.

Mayank- oh please. I was never fat haan nidz.

Nidhi- achha gym jaake abs-shabs kya bana liye, apne school days bhool gaya?

She said pulling his cheeks.

Mayank quickly put his hand and felt his now red cheeks and said- teri cheeks pull karne waali habit abhi tak nahi gayee?

Nidhi- aur na kabhi jaayegi.

Mayank- haan bas ek difference hai. Ab tere nails aa gaye hai.

He said as nidhi broke down laughing.

Nidhi- god fatty tu bilkul nahi badla haan!

She said trying her best to control her laughter.

Mayank- very-

Nupur- interesting.

She said as she heard them talking.

She gave mayank a 'ill-handle-you-later' look and then turned to nidhi and said in matter-of-fact tone- nidhi tumhe aur koi kaam nahi hai kya? Jo yahaa baithke chit chat kar rahi ho?

Nidhi- ofo nupur. You know hes my-

Nupur- NIDHI CAN YOU GO DO YOUR WORK!

She shouted in front of the whole office, as everyone turned to see what was happening dumbfounded.

There was a brief pause between the two and then nidhi turned and went off, leaving nupur slowly burning with guilt.

Nupur turned to go when suddenly ruchi stopped her mid way.

Ruchi- tumhaari problem kya hai babe?

Nupur- ruch just-

Ruchi- no babe. Answer me. Whats got into you?

Nupur- ruch im so sorr-

Ruchi- nidhi was just talking to her old school buddy. Whats that got to you?

Suddenly it dawned on nupur, there was nothing going on. They were just genuinely talking. But somehow everytime she saw mayank talking to someone, it just made her so insecure and jealous. And she hated it.

Ruchi- tera na babe din bar din gussa naak pe chade ja raha hai. Control yourself, before you lose all your friends. Got that?

She said as walked off leaving a teary nupur alone with mayank.

Mayank- next time please-

Nupur- fine mayank.

She said as she felt a tear roll down her cheek.

She quickly wiped the tears and went off towards her cabin leaving mayank alone.

***

As soon as nupur entered her cabin she saw 4 of her closest buddies from the other group, sana sarwar, nishithini, aditi gupta and anna iqbal waiting there with a cake in their hand.

They had decorated her entire cabin with flowers and balloons and teddies.

Nupur slowly approached them with a confused look on her face- ye sab kya hai?

Sana- this is for you darling!

Nupur- par-

Nishithini- i think you dint hear-

Nupur- hear what?

She asked her tone raising with excitement.

Aditi- well ab tum itna force kar rahi ho to-

Anna- adi cut the crap! Your getting PROMOTEDDD!

She said as nupur started jumping around her in high.

Nupur- how do you guys know?????

Sana- well actually hum logon ne deodhar ko tumhaare promotion ke bare mein bakshi se baat karte hue suna tha!

Nupurs face suddenly lost color as she said- bakshi kabhi nahi manega...

Nishithini- thats what you think! But bakshis really impressed by your project you know!

Nupur- but nishi-

Anna- ofo nupur. Hes become really sweet you know!

Nupur- no way!

Aditi- ya and he actually said good morning to me! Can you believe that?

***

Mayank slowly walked down towards annes cabin to find anne already sitting there waiting for him.

Mayank- oh anne im so sorry you had to wait.

Anne- thats not a problem, main to-

She stopped as she heard someone knock on the cabin door.

Mayank turned around and said- come in please.

As soon as he said this a neatly dressed simple business suited girl came in with a file in her hand.

anne- hi zoe, how come your here?

Zoe gave a curt nod as she said- pleasure. Deodhar asked to see you in his office after hismeeting at 5oclock. Be there.

She said giving a quick glance at mayank and then she walked out ever so elegantly.

***

Zoe quickly went out of the room where her 3 friends palak, nikhila and piyu were standing waiting to hear from her.

Zoe- hes..... HOTTTT!!!

***

Nupur quickly walked down the narrow corridor to nidhis cabin, where nidhi sat with a slightly bent expressionless face.

As soon as she entered the room, she was met by a angry growl from 3 co workers and friends of nidhi- ruche, falak and somu.

Before she could say anything falak and somu quickly got up from beside nidhi and marched towards nupur.

Falak- what do you want now?

Nupur- falak you know what im getting a promotion.

Somu- nach phir!

She said her tone having a high sarcasm quotient.

Ignoring them both she quickly walked towards nidhi and sat down beside her and said- nidhi im so sorry yaar. I know i was rude, par mera mood bahut kharab tha. Aur.. main-

Nidhi- aur tune socha ki nidhi ko sabke saamne embarrass karegi,uspe chilayegi aur tujhe sukoon mil jayega! Right?

Nupur- nahi nidhi-

Nidhi- your disgusting nupur. Pata nahi why i even thought kit u meri dost hai!

She said as nupur rose up and ran out leaving the world badgering behind her as she felt tears rolling down her cheeks.

All she wanted to do was talk to anne right away. She was the only one who understood her completely.

As she was running towards annes cabin she was stopped on the way by two of her friends ananya and shinella.

Ananya- hey kya hua? Why are you crying?

Nupur- kuch nahi ananya-

Shinella- bol na kya hua? Kisi ne kaha? Bakshi ne to-

Nupur- nahi aisa kuch nahi hua hai please ill explain later.

She said jogging off.

As soon as she reached annes cabin, she saw that her door was already ajar.

She peeped in and what she saw shook the daylight out of her.

Mayank stood there holding annes hands in his as he said-

I LOVE YOU ANNE!

And suddenly the whole world started spinning around her.

Hope u lykd it

Luv n luck

Sindhya

Ps- plzzz comment n press d like tab!

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Posted: 16 years ago
guys in this part ie includedd...-
-nidhi-hgrhr
-ruchi-ruchimayur
-zoe- cutemayur
-sana di- sana sarwar
-falak- falak01
-somu-371786(gt d no rite??)
-nishi-nishithini
-aditi-adi_gupta
-anna- mohseena
-shinella- shinella
-ananya-ananya_s
-palak-palak5
-nikhila-nikki028
there'd b more people cumn inn like this in the nexxtt feww updates...
srttaaa lyk a gift to all mayurians... for cmpltin 100 paradises...
congo guyzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG..!!!!!!!! 😲😲😲 Sindhya!!
I've got a role in your FF...!!!!!!!
And that too as Mayu's best friend!!!!!
*faints*.....😳
I'd almost fallen off my chair when I read that....!!!
Yaar...you're soooo SWEET!!! *pulls your cheeks*😃😃
I'm dancing right now!!
yipeeeee....Mayu hugged me..!!!! LOL..
And Nupur got jealous of me...!!!! Mere saare dreams poore ho gaye yaar!!!!😃
.🤗 Mayur hugs to you!!!!🤗
hehe....omg...omg...omg...I can't stop smiling!!!😃😃😃
And then ruchi came to the rescue...!!😆😆😆
Somu, falak, palak, nikki, everyone was in it yaar!!
ufffff....wow....i was so surprised!
THANK YOU for including me in it!!🤗🤗
ok coming to the update...
😲😲😲 Mayu said ILU Annie!!!😲😲😲
yeh kya hua...??? Kaise hua..??
what a cliffhanger!!
I can't wait till the next update!!
I can't imagine Nupur's reaction....wow....she'll blow off....mayu kya soch ke yeh bol raha tha!
Update soon...!!
And once again...thank you SO much!! Mujhe pehli baar kisi FF mein role karne ka mauka mila hai!! and that too...mayu ke crush ka!!! uffffffff...isse accha aur kya ho sakta hai!! I'm on 7th heaven....LOL...
Edited by hgrhr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
i hopee u lykd d part u plaayed nidhi?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

i hopee u lykd d part u plaayed nidhi?

edited...
"Liked it..??????"😲😲
OMG...I LOVED IT!!!!!!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hgrhr

OMG..!!!!!!!! 😲😲😲 Sindhya!!

I've got a role in your FF...!!!!!!!
And that too as Mayu's best friend!!!!!
*faints*.....😳
I'd almost fallen off my chair when I read that....!!!
Yaar...you're soooo SWEET!!! *pulls your cheeks*😃😃
I'm dancing right now!!
yipeeeee....Mayu hugged me..!!!! LOL..
And Nupur got jealous of me...!!!! Mere saare dreams poore ho gaye yaar!!!!😃
.🤗 Mayur hugs to you!!!!🤗
hehe....omg...omg...omg...I can't stop smiling!!!😃😃😃
And then ruchi came to the rescue...!!😆😆😆
Somu, falak, palak, nikki, everyone was in it yaar!!
ufffff....wow....i was so surprised!
THANK YOU for including me in it!!🤗🤗
ok coming to the update...
😲😲😲 Mayu said ILU Annie!!!😲😲😲
yeh kya hua...??? Kaise hua..??
what a cliffhanger!!
I can't wait till the next update!!
I can't imagine Nupur's reaction....wow....she'll blow off....mayu kya soch ke yeh bol raha tha!
Update soon...!!
And once again...thank you SO much!! Mujhe pehli baar kisi FF mein role karne ka mauka mila hai!! and that too...mayu ke crush ka!!! uffffffff...isse accha aur kya ho sakta hai!! I'm on 7th heaven....LOL...

hehe... lol.... gladddd u lykdd d rolleee nidhhii....
n guess whatt ull b havngg a permanentt role in this ff....
as mayus best friendd... n of course love of madhav...
=D
oopppsss i revealeeddd toooooo muchhhh

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