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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Nikki yaar it was rocking! And look, I wasn't the last to comment! LOL. Missed you! Akshay was jealous of Rahul.... GOOD! Hona bhi chahiye. Akhir itna gorgeous hona koi ahsaan baat nahi hoti. lol. I'm glad she went for lunch despite her laziness. Ab jaldi se eik aur update karo! Dying to know what happens next with the letter! Eik question... did you kinda sorta switch Akshay and Rahul's roles. NTJNH mein Akshay's character was more like how u made rahul and Rahul was the sweet guy. Yahaan toh poora ulta lag raha hai. Or am I jumping to conclusions too fast? khair, waiting for ur next part! Love you!!!

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rapi_c

@rapi_c

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#62

that was a very interesting update.. dunno much abt d movie but ur FF is superb. 👍🏼
a few things that i loved in this part:-
the letter rahul wrote for reply: was so honest and innocent. made me smile wide. Lolz

sanya teasing rahul!! that provided d real spice 😆....besides showing d bond b'n bro-sis.

instant chemistry b'n RM.. their spontaneity was obvious.. a hint for d future 😉
looking forward to next turn of events.. 😳

oh yes, really liked how u showed d contrast here :P He hugged sanya and waved to muskaan, whereas akshay hugged muskaan and waved to sanya. 😆

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sweety

@sweetsugar

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#63

omg!!namu...lovely ff yaar...i have not seen the movie i guess or may be i have but i dont remember much abt the movie ...but this FF sounds really interesting .....oh god this akshay😡.... ..such a flirt...he is checking out muskaan ....oh akshay stay away😈 only rahul has the right to do tat

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Lali

@.lali.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#64

wohoo... lol hey add me to ur pm list if u have fun n do continue soon im like soo into this...

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lovebapu18

@lovebapu18

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

wonderful part namrata!!

do update soon!!

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-Nayab-

@-Nayab-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Hi!

Namrata... Loved your update! It was GREAT! Loved how Rahul asked Muskaan to share the chicken... It was like they've known each other for ages! 😆...

Update soon please! 😊...

Take Care

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Really nice part and Rahul is sanya's bro... That's a good part!!!!

Thankss for commenting Radhika

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: fizzazaza
awesome update ive been waiting for this haha :D
ohh nice looks like the start of some drama :)

Hahah thanks, sure it will lead to some drama😆

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Sab93
This is really good Namrata, its so cute how Rahul and Muskan shared the chicken, and ugh I hate that Akshay guy for liking Muskan, but that goes with the storyline, so wat can we do, lol. Waiting for the next update!!!
~ Saby

LOL there will always be a devil in the story na?? Dont worry i wont make Akshay like her too much.

Thanks for the comment

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: divyashaz

Hey Namiii...wonderful update yaaar👏 👏 reallly luved it 😳 😳 😳 awww Rahul an Muski sahred the chicken aawwwww soo sweeett 😳😳😳.....hahah luved the part where aksahy got jeaoulse..😆

do update soonn will be waiting for next part 😳

Thankss 😊

Aww divuuu!! Thankk uu

Haha thanks once again

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