At the Begining-a mayur ff (finished 14/5) - Page 6

Originally posted by: ashred12

its awesome yaar.. feeling sad 4 nup.. awww......dnt be everythng's gonna b fyn soon.😊 sometimes ur ff make me feel like i'm in her place.. thanx 4 keeping all parts together..ur welcum... pls continue soon.. can u pm me wen u update?.....sure hun

Originally posted by: Nishithini

Hey, very nice update. thank you 😳

I like your writing style. *bows*😊

Plzzzzzzz add me 2 ur pm list. sure thing

Are you Bengalee??????😃 I am also a bengalee!!!!!! yup..m a bengalee...hello fellow bengalee😆😆

May I please know your name? m gunjan n wat's urs?

Originally posted by: hgrhr

Nupur realized her feelings first! And she accepted them too...good for her.

Oh I felt so bad for her me too 😭...Mayank keeps with sheena the whole time! but it was necessary 4 nupur 2 realize her feelings...😃

lol...and Nupur has decided to play cupid between Sajan...aww...i've always wanted her to be perceptive and subtle....😆

Glad that at lease samrat, gunjan and benji noticed her fallen face....now they'll try to help her out and get Mayu away from Sheena. lets see what they do...u r gonna find out soon.....😉

oh and is this still a one-shot you are posting in parts...? i dunno...it can be watever u wanna call it...😆 So how many parts are left now...? i'd say about 2 or 3 more parts....

Btw thanks for PMing me...no problem😊

Great update!!thanx

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Awesome update....👏thank you 😊
please add me to ur pm list. sure

Originally posted by: xOxMwahxOx

oh gosh....this has put the BIGGESTTTT smile on my face ever...awww..... m happy den...😊 Sorry I don't know your name m gujan but YOUR A STARR!....thank you dear....i think im inlove with your ff 😳...cant nottt w8 for the next bit....its better than the real deal. 😳 lol I soo can not wait for actual nupur to start adding everything up in her head like this same here darling...i knw shes going to be slow...but i want her to start the adding up process in her head! let c wat happens

THANKSss....

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was nice update thank you shafoo 😊

Originally posted by: Hareem_M

Hi I just read the entire thing in one go..and I absolutely ADORE this fiction thank you dear 😊.. i love the style thanku thanku 😳😳..and At the Beginning is one of my favorite songs! mine too... It suits Mayur sooo well! I really like the first POV too. You've really captured their thoughts so well. The only qualm I have is that Sheena is smart 😆😆 and Mayank is friends with her..lolz.one thing led to other i guess... he's frnz with her coz she's smart..😆 But its okay, it at least made Nupur confess her feelings outloud. Can't wait for the next update and plz add me to your PM list. sure hun Thank you!