At the Begining-a mayur ff (finished 14/5)

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Aweeeh, beautifully written hun! I was literally pissed off when the part(s) were over. =(

Please update soon, I'll be waiting!

-- Mimi

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Oooooooooooooooh!!!!!!!!!!!! Mayank and Sheena eh!?!?!? Hmmmm, if that had happened in the serial what would you call them!?!?!? Mayna!?!?!? 🤢😉😆

It doesn't sound anything like 'MAYUR' does it!?!?!? 😆 Nice twist, i actually wanted Sheena to befriend Mayank in the serial so that Mayur's story in the show moved forward becuase our pyaari Nupur can be soooo blind even though she has done a phd in love!!!!!! 😆

I hope now Nupur distances herself and spends more time with other guys like RV and Samrat!!!! *hint hint* 😳😉😆

Not really to make Mayank jealous but more becuase she needs some friends if Mayank isn't able to spend time with her!!!!! 😊 And let's just say she gets along better with guy friends than with girls for some reason!!!!! 😉😆

Good update and can't wait for the next!!!!! *hug*

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gunjan

@crystal angel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: mimi0295
Aweeeh, beautifully written hun! I was literally pissed off when the part(s) were over. =(
Please update soon, I'll be waiting!

-- Mimi

thnx mimi😳😳😳.............i'll update 2mrw....waise wen r u updatin urs??

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

*reserved*

Thanks for PMing me.

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Oh it was such a wonderful description of Mayank's feelings...

He loves her so much but is still unsure of what is right and what is wrong...!

LOL and that line "Samrat and Gunjan had made it the mission of their life to get us together!" 😆😆 Awesome!

And Sheena and Mayank...??Oh no...!! They're having debates....oh wow...now that's the polar opposite of the Sheena on the show!

And Nupur got second lead...😲...lol...

Oh I hope you're gonna make Mayank pay more attention to Nupur because just reading about those deate scenes and rehearsals are maing me feel bad for Nupur!

But GREAT job!!

Do update soon!

Nidhi

Edited by hgrhr - 16 years ago

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gunjan

@crystal angel

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: blackdaughter
Oooooooooooooooh!!!!!!!!!!!! Mayank and Sheena eh!?!?!? Hmmmm, if that had happened in the serial what would you call them!?!?!? Mayna!?!?!? 🤢😉😆 hmmmmmmm......MAYNA...nyc...neva thot of dat😆😆😆

It doesn't sound anything like 'MAYUR' does it!?!?!? 😆 Nice twist, i actually wanted Sheena to befriend Mayank in the serial so that Mayur's story in the show moved forward becuase our pyaari Nupur can be soooo blind even though she has done a phd in love!!!!!! 😆ya.........lyk nupur is totally andhi....😆😆

I hope now Nupur distances herself and spends more time with other guys like RV and Samrat!!!! *hint hint* 😳😉😆 tht's 4 me 2 know n u 2 find out.................. lolz😆😆

Not really to make Mayank jealous ya totally but more becuase she needs some friends if Mayank isn't able to spend time with her!!!!! 😊 And let's just say she gets along better with guy friends than with girls for some reason!!!!! 😉😆hmm........wat a coincidence..........😆

Good update and can't wait for the next!!!!! *hug* i'll update 2mrw*hugs back*

oi.........u commented b4 i cud pm u.............😆😆😆....m glad....

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gunjan

@crystal angel

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: hgrhr
*reserved*

Thanks for PMing me.

no probs hun..............😊😊

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reshmahn

@reshmahn

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

i was continuously lukin 4 ur update on page 4 ... dn realised dat its on 1st page .... fabulous update .... gr8 work ... keep updatin ... k...

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x.Heena.x

@x.Heena.x

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Oooooooooooooooooo i am lovinggggggggggggggg this track.......nupur realising her feelingss coz of sheena....i wish they actually did this in the serial...as in sheena friends with sam n mayu.....it wud give the 2 sisters sumin 2 bitch abt and make every1 realise their love for each other......i love the way you right....like im reading their private diary...you go in so much detailll...thanks for the pm. can't wait for the next update....
heena