At the Begining-a mayur ff (finished 14/5)

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gunjan

@crystal angel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ
plzzzz update soon.awesome part.😊

thank you dear 😊......................i'll update 2mrw.......

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

u knw i rilly like ur style of writtin.. its beautiful n mesmerizin.. go for it!

~sindhya~

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

its very good....pls update soon...

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gunjan

@crystal angel

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya
u knw i rilly like ur style of writtin.. its beautiful n mesmerizin.. go for it!

~sindhya~

thank you sindhya...............😊😊😊 it feels really great when your work is appreciated............lolz...

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gunjan

@crystal angel

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ashred12
its very good....pls update soon...

thank you ashred.........😊😊 i'll update tomorrow.......

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gunjan

@crystal angel

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

guys........please do comment...i have updated...

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Hey (this will be short, sorry) 😳

Ooooooh you are linking it to the song!!!!! 😳 I knew that!!!!! 😆

You started this one from Maynak finds out the truth right!?!??! I think i'm right!!!! 😆 Great part!!!! One think that is keeping me hooked and it definately will is your word choice / diction!!!!! I appreciate the usage of something more than the usual general words like 'good', 'bad' etc etc. *thumbs up*

I like how you are summarizing it in your own way while you keep the storyline of the show!!! You did it very smoothly and that is NOT so easy to achieve!!! Fab job!!!!

Great update and can't wait for the next one!!!

P.S. Thank you for the PM!!! *hug*