At the Begining-a mayur ff (finished 14/5) - Page 3

its awesome.... do continue k...

you described the story soooooooooooo well so far.....really got to the bottom of their feelings and captured it all and described it well....something i think the program has lacked a little interms of from nupurs side. I loved this...pleaseeeeee continue....i love the way you go back and forth from nuour telling the story to mayu....please pm me when you update!

lovin ur fanfic its an awesome idea keep it going and plz PM if u update <3 dia

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Hey (this will be short, sorry) 😳

Ooooooh you are linking it to the song!!!!! 😳 I knew that!!!!! 😆

You started this one from Maynak finds out the truth right!?!??! I think i'm right!!!! 😆 Great part!!!! One think that is keeping me hooked and it definately will is your word choice / diction!!!!! I appreciate the usage of something more than the usual general words like 'good', 'bad' etc etc. *thumbs up*......thank you thank you *takes a bow* 😆😆😆

I like how you are summarizing it in your own way while you keep the storyline of the show!!! You did it very smoothly and that is NOT so easy to achieve!!! Fab job!!!! i've deviated a bit from the original storyline in this part 😉😉....sorry dear....read the note first....or you might get a shock😉

Great update and can't wait for the next one!!! thanx hon😊

P.S. Thank you for the PM!!! *hug* aww ..........u r most welcum hunny...😊

Originally posted by: hgrhr

I just saw your fic and read it.

I don't know why no one already said this but you write beautifully!! Thank you Nidhi😊😊

I loved how you captured their emotins and thought though each phase...amazing!! awww.........😳😳

Now I'm gonna go read it again...😳😳

Please update soon, I really want to read more...i will try to update regularly

And if possibe, PM me when you do...sure hon

Keep up the good work!!

Nidhi

P.S. I just read the comment above mine and now I want to paste it here because it said everything perfectly!

Its really refreshing that you use newer words to describe everything.

And I felt like it was actually Mayank and Nupur's thoughts!

Originally posted by: sree_27

its really nice n captivating..keep up the good work gunja!!

Originally posted by: reshmahn

its awesome.... do continue k...

Originally posted by: xOxMwahxOx

you described the story soooooooooooo well so far.....really got to the bottom of their feelings and captured it all and described it well Thank you dear😊😳....something i think the program has lacked a little interms of from nupurs side.i'll keep that in mind the next time..😉 I loved this...pleaseeeeee continue....i love the way you go back and forth from nuour telling the story to mayu....please pm me when you update! i will dear...keep reading and commenting

Originally posted by: angelz

lovin ur fanfic its an awesome idea keep it going and plz PM if u update <3 dia