The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ
its awesome yaar.truely awesome.can't wait for next part.can't wait for MN romancing again.oh god................awesome ff.😊🤗😳pm me.

thanksssssss a lot for your sweeeeeeeeeet comment......i'm glad u liked it........sorry theres no pm service but i'll leave a note before updating next part........😊

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Originally posted by: Shafoo
heyy it was cool part plzz contuied soon

thanksssss a lot......will update pretty soooon......😊

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hey...

plz dont discontinue

readers will hook to ur FF soon

sumtimes it takes time ...there are many silent readers

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Sorry for the late reply but I just read the first part!!

It was AWESOME!

You write very good yaar...I liked their interaction between Mayank and Nupur. It was very sweet and romantic...

Also, your concept is so different from the other fics...and with a mytery plot!

I'm looking forward to the next part very much!

Do update soon!

Nidhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey this is awesome, please do conitune soon man.

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Originally posted by: ruchimayur
hey...
plz dont discontinue

readers will hook to ur FF soon

sumtimes it takes time ...there are many silent readers

yes i know there r many silent readers & i'm hoping some of them will start commenting in cuming parts.....thats the reason i told i'll update some more parts to see if response is improving else i'll have to discontinue.......😊

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pinky gandhi

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Originally posted by: hgrhr
Sorry for the late reply but I just read the first part!!

It was AWESOME!

You write very good yaar...I liked their interaction between Mayank and Nupur. It was very sweet and romantic...

Also, your concept is so different from the other fics...and with a mytery plot!

I'm looking forward to the next part very much!

Do update soon!

Nidhi

thanksssss a lot nidhi for your lovely comment......i'm glad u liked it so much.....will update next part soooooon.......😊

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Senny
hey this is awesome, please do conitune soon man.

thankssssss a lot......will update pretty soooon.....😊

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pinky gandhi

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NOTE:

I'll be updating next part in 3-4 hours......😊

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RECAP:
Nupurs peformance on stage.Some MN scenes.MN going to london for the fashion show.
PART-2:
Mom: nupur beta saari tayaari ho gayi???
N: jee maa maine sab kuch le liya.
M: chal to fir neeche aa jaa….tumhaare papa dinner par wait kar rahe hai…
N: aayi mom…..
Nupur went downstairs.She looked at her dads(Surya bhushan) stubborn face.She knew her dad didn't want her to go but he didn't even want to stop her.He couldn't live 1 month away from his daughter.He always wanted her in front of his eyes.But naina(his wife) reasoned with him that someday she has to go forever.She has to marry.However he was still not convinced as he was afraid that something might happen to her.Just few weeks back a model had been raped & murdered & the police are no where near in catching the real culprit.Since that news a fear has come in his heart.After all his daughter is a super model & there are so many crazy fans wandering around.But thinking of mayank his fears would go away.He knew till mayank is there with her nothing can happen to her.Hence he didn't stop nupur but nupur knew he was not happy.
N: papa kya aap mujhse naraaz ho????
S: nahi beta…aisi koi baat nahi….
N: aapko bura lag raha hai ki main aap ko chod ke jaa rahi hoon?????
S(sighing): beta jaana toh tumko ek din hamesha ke liye hai mujhe chod ke…..main toh bas isliye pareshaan hoon ki tum wahaan akeli kaise rahogi???
N: main akeli kahaan hoon….mayank bhi toh hai mere saath….
S: main jaanta hoon….par mujhe darr hai kahin koi anhoone na ho jaaye….kuch din pehle neha ke saath jo hua….
Just then mayank came running.
M: aur ek…..aur ek murder….police ko abhi laash milli….news mein bataa rahe hai….
He quickly switched on the news channel.Everyone got glued to tv forgetting their dinner.
TV REPORTER:
"Jaise ki aap dekh rahe hai ek aur model(Sapna desai) ka murder hua.Sapna ki laash bhi ushi haalat main milli hai jaise neha ki thi.Dono ka pehle balaatkaar hua aur phir sir par sharaab ki bottle se vaar karke maar diya gaya.Dekhte hai police ka is baare mein kya kehna hai.Inspector kya yeh sach hai ki dono ladkiyon ki maut ek hi shaks ne ki hai?
In: dekhiye abhi hum kuch bhi bataa nahi sakte.Haan jis tarah dono maut hui hai lagta toh yahi hai ki kissi ek insaan ne hi ki hai par jab tak saboot nahi milta hum daave ke saath kuch nahi keh sakte.Abhi forensic jaaj ki jaa rahi hai.
Re: kya neha ki murder ka koi suraag milla?
In: jee dekhiye yeh khooni bahut shaatir hai….woh sab kuch soch samajhkar karta hai…woh poora plan banaa ta hai aur fir hamla karta hai…Usne neha ke baare mein saari jaankaari nikaali uske baad poora plan set kiya aur fir uska khoon kar diya…shayad sapna ke saath bhi yahi hua hai…
Re: par kya koi bhi suraag nahi milla????
In: nahi par humme itna pataa chala hai ki woh pehle apne shikaar ko bahut daraata hai….usne neha ko email bheja ki woh bahut jaldi marne waali hai….uske mobile pe gandhe msg mille…usni neha ko poori tarah daraa diya tha…par iske pehle ki neha police protection leti usne uska kaam tamaam kar diya…
Re: agar usne itna sab kiya toh aap ko koi suraag kyun nahi milla?
In: kyunki maine aapko bataaya na woh shaatir hai….usne neha ke saath apna email-id bhi bandh kar diya….isliye hum uska record track nahi kar sakte….aur jis number se usne sms aur call kiye woh ek private number hai…..phir bhi hum apni tarah se usse dhoondhne ki poori koshish kar rahe hai…
Re: aur kya….
In: no more questions…mujhe investigations karne jaana hai…..
Re(facing camera): toh suna aapne kis tarah ek aur model mar gayi….ek mahine mein yeh doosra murder hai….saari models saavdhaan rahe….agar aapko koi bhi call ya sms mille toh turant police protection le kyunki agar yeh dono murder ek hi insaan ne kiye hai toh abse koi model safe nahi hai….Ravi Jain ke saath,star news,Mumbai.
Everyone went silent for few minutes trying to digest.The photo taken of the dead body was too scary.She lied naked in a pool of blood.Nupur at once looked at surya.
N: papa main nahi jaoogi…
Everyone looked shocked at her sudden statement.
N: aap theek keh rahe hai….mujhe wahaan nahi jaana chahiye…
S: nahi beta ab toh main chahta hu tum wahaan jaao…
N(surprised): par….par…kyu?
S: kyunki yahaan tumhe khatra hai…..woh pagal darinda kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar sakta hai…tum is sheher,is desh se jitna dur rahogi utna hi safe rahogi….yahaan rahogi toh khatraa tumhaare sir par rahega…(smiling) tum jaaogi na beta???
N: jee papa
S: mayank nupur ka khyaal rakhna…
M(smiling): yeh koi kehne ki baat hai uncle?aap uski chinta mat kariye.
Just then nupur gets a call.She receives it.
N: hello….jee….oh….ha….main bhool gayi…par abhi toh raat ho gayi hai…achaa theek hai toh mere ghar aa jaoo…theek hai..
She cuts the call.
S: kaun aa raha hai beta?
N: woh news channel ki reporter…..actually show se pehle woh mera interview lena chahti thi par kissi ke paas na aane ke tension mein (eyeing at mayank) maine usse rukne ko kahaan aur fir main bhool hi gayi…
S: toh kal dena….
N: kal main London jaa rahi hoon aur aap jaante hai dad main kissi ko diya hua promise todti nahi…isliye maine usse abhi ghar bula liya hai…woh live show karna chahti hai kyunki unhone news par already bataa diya tha ki aaj mera interview dikhaaya jaaega….
S: theek hai tab tak tum log khaana kha lo….
AFTER DINNER:
Bell rang & the reporter came followed by the cameraman.The reporter looked at nupur's beautiful house & her family.She was about to faint on looking at 'THE MAYANK SHARMA'.She had a huge crush on him & began to blush as soon as she saw him.It was first time she had seen him in real.She started eyeing him from head to toe.Mayank felt embarrassed on realizing that she is checking him out.Nupur saw the girl looking at 'HER MAYANK'like this & was fuming with anger.
N(in high pitch): chaalo kare interview?
Re: jee….zaroor…..(to mayank)kya aap bhi interview mein humme join karenge please…
M(nervously): I'm sorry main nahi kar sakta…woh….mujhe kal ki tayaari karni baaki hai….nupur ki toh saari packing ho gayi par abhi tak baaki hai…main jaa raha hoon
Saying this he actually ran away before the reporter could tell anything else.Nupur tried to hide her laughter at his behaviour.
Re: kya yeh saari ladkiyon ko dekhkar aise hi bhaag jaate hai????
N: jee nahi….main alag hoon….mujhse kabhi door nahi bhaagta….chaliye ab interview shuru kare?
Re: yes….ofcourse…(still looking upstairs where mayank left).
The camera went on & the interview started.All general talks regarding nupur's hobby,her favourite clothes,colour etc.& ofcourse her relation with mayank.
Re: to kya aap ke aur mayank sharma ke beech koi chakkar chal raha hai?
N: jee haan kaafi saalon se…..par main iske baare mein koi baat nahi karna chahti…its quite personal.
Re: aur kya aap dono London mein hone waale fashion show mein jaa rahe ho???
N: haan hum log kal hi nikal rahe hai….
Re: kya aap ne neha aur sapna ke saath jo hua woh suna?
N: jee haan maine tv par dekha…
Re: toh kya ab aapko bhi darr lag raha hai????
N: nahi mujhe koi darr nahi kyunki mere saath mayank hai…
Re(jeolous): oh…ofcourse…aapka mayank….
N(smiling): yes mera mayank.
Re: toh aapko kya lagta hai aise insaan ke saath kya kiya jaana chaihye??
N(blood rising in her body): maut bhi aise insaan ko naseeb na ho…..kamse kam seedhi faasi toh nahi…aise insaan ko bahut tadpa tadpa kar maarna chahiye…beech raaste khadaa karke usse aisi harkat karwaani chahiye ki usko khud ke hone par sharam aaye…usse aisa sabak sikhaana chahiye ki usse dekhkar har insaan ki rooh kaap uthe…kabhi koi kissi ladki ka balaatkaar karne ka soch bhi na sake….aise logon ko toh….toh…(raising her hands in anger)….shabd nahi hai mere paas bataane ko….
Re: jee shaant ho jaaye…zaahir si baat hai har aurat aap ki tarah hi soch rahi hai…agar aapke saath aisa hua toh aap kya karengi???
N: maine kahaan na mere paas mayank hai….uske hote hue mujhe kissi baat ka darr nahi…
Re: jee zaroor…aapke samay ke liye shukriya….toh is hi ke saath hum interview khatam karte hai aur dua karte hai ki aap ka London ka show successful ho….
Somewhere like many people someone was sitting in front of tv watching this interview.It was a man.He smirked after seeing the interview."Toh Miss nupur bhushan ko darr nahi lagta.Beauty with brains & bravery.Very rare combination.Is machli ko toh mere paas aana hi hoga.Isse pakadne mein badaa mazaa aayega.Jab yeh darregi aur mere saamne apni izzat ki bheekh maange gi toh mujhe bahut achaa lagega.Par isse main itni aasaani se nahi pakdooga warna mazaa nahi aayega.Isse toh main ek lambe samay tak daraoga.Isko itna tang karooga ki bichaari darr ke maare pagal ho jaayegi.Har mode par usse jataaoga ki aage kitna khatra hai.Yeh London jaa rahi hai toh jaane do.Bechaari ki zindagi mein ab sirf ek mahina bachaa hai aur yeh ek mahina uska kitna daraawna hone wala hai usse andaaza nahi hai.Main bhi aa raha hoon nupur.Aaj se theek ek mahine baad jab tumhaara show hai us hi din main tumhaari life ka aakhri din likhooga.Lekin meri bhookh ek mahine tak nahi ruk sakti.Is ko toh dekhkar hi abhi ke abhi apna shikaar banaane ka mann kar raha hai.Par mujhe control karna hoga.Par kaise?Isse toh dekhte hi main deewana ban gaya hoon.Ek mahine tak roz isse dekhooga par choo nahi paaoga.Kya karoo ki meri bhookh ek mahine tak rukh jaaye?Arrey haan bhookh mitaane ke liye khaana chahiye.Wahaan toh bahut saari models hogi.Jab bhookh lagegi kissi ko bhi apna nishaana banaa sakta hoon.Is tarah se nupur ko ek mahine tak darra bhi sakta hoon aur apni bhookh par control bhi kar sakta hoon.Dekhte hai iska confident lover mayank isse kaise bachaa sakta hai.Zaroor woh itna darpok hoga ki jaise hi usse pata chalega ki nupur aglaa nishaana hai woh usse chod dega."He went to the table.There were photos of many models.He searched little & found nupur's photo."Itna sunder shikaar mere aankh se chook kaise gaya?pehle dekha hota isse toh ab tak neha ki jagah yeh hoti.Koi baat nahi abhi der nahi hui.Bahut mazaa aayega.So mission 'NUPUR' starts now.All the Best nupur.Let the cat & mouse game begun….. "
Nupur was on her bed thinking about mayank & smiling when she got a call.The ID said 'PRIVATE NUMBER'.
Okay here's second part.I'm extremely sorry since there are no MNscenes in this part & I realized this part is kinda boring but it was important.But next part onwards lots of MN scenes as the trip begins.
Silent readers atleast press the thank you button if you don't feel like commenting.
Next update will be on Saturday.

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