The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12 - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hazel94

omgshhh rhis is sooo scary

mindblowing mann
plz add me to the pm list
update soon
i cant w8

thankssssss a lot for your lovely comment......glad to know you liked it.......will update by tomorrow...........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tazy_rahul

hey i hav been a silent readerof this ff its jus fantastic i lov each n every part of it

plz update soon
and add me to the pm list

thankssssss a lot for your sweeeeeeet comment.........glad to know you are not a silent reader anymore......will surely add you to my list.......will update next part tomorrow........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Pinky-Hats off 2 you.👏
You got me addicted to this story.
I'm really loving it.
Please updated it soo.-cant wait😛
Thankyou very much.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

RECAP:

Nups gets a call from the serial killer.She is afraid he may harm her friends.Everyone except her goes for jogging.She receives an envelope & is shocked.

PART-7:

Nups opened the envelope & was shocked.There was a letter in it & 3 photographs.She was shocked to see they were her own photographs.All 3 of them were in the night gown & were taken during the night time after her practices.These 3 night gowns were the ones she wore at night after freshening.One was black,second one was red & third was light pink.All of them were sleeveless & tightly fitting to her slim body making her look very sexy.She looked at the photographs & wondered how could someone take these photos.They were taken during the night time.To her horror as she turned the photo's she found something written behind each of them.The psycho had written everything with blood.Behind the black it was written: beautiful & gorgeous.Rate: 9 on 10.Behind the red one it was written: sexy & hot.Rate: 9.5 on 10.Behind the pink one it was written: innocent & soft.Just ready to crush.Rate: 8.5 on 10.She stared at photos not knowing how to react.First he started the sms & calls & now he even has her photos of night time.She wondered how could he keep an eye on her even during the night time.She got more scared as she saw shining blood behind each photos.She just realized he had written everything with blood.Already she was so stressed thinking about him & here he sent another shock.She looked at the envelope & saw a paper still lying in it.She opened it & was shocked to see again blood all over it.There was a message in the paper."23 DAYS LEFT TO YOUR DEADLINE.You look beautiful & sexy in all three gowns but none is a perfect 10.Your deathday must be perfect.I'll give you a perfect gown for your perfect death because before your death my night will be made memorable by you.I want you to be sexy,hot,beautiful,gorgeous,innocent & soft all in one when I make you mine.GOSH!!!!!you are very irresistible.You always make me hungry.Wonder how your loverboy has resisted you or have you two already been in bed???I hope not because I always search for fresh meats.Till I know your profile you belong to a very well mannered & honoured house & wont do anything in their disgrace.See you are making me so hungry.Now I'll have to hunt someone tonight.I have to select my next target now.Have to do lots of planning for her.Lets see if you can save a model tonight.I would have told you her name but I haven't decided till now.Dont worry you'll come to know by tonight when one more model will leave you all.And yes do sleep well tonight.Dont stress your self so much like last night.You could help yourself by crying less."She read & re-read the letter.If she was shocked about the photo's it was nothing to what she was feeling now.Her hands were trembling & sweating.Her eyes had widened on reading this.Her entire face was wet with sweat.She fell on the floor.Each & every word of the letter was coming in front of her eyes.She didn't know his letter could also leave her in such a state just like his calls.Nervousness filled her body.She didn't know what to feel shocked about: the photos or his cheap comments or the fact that someone is his new target tonight or that he knew she cried a lot last night.More to scare her the blood came back in her mind.She has always been scared of blood since her childhood when she had seen her dad's almost fatal accident.But that time her prayers had done miracle & her father survived.But after seeing her dad in that state she had always been scared of blood.No one except mayank knows this truth.She sat there wondering did the killer know how much she is scared of blood or was it just a coincidence.Also one thing she registered that the entire letter was written in English.This means that the killer is definitely an educated person.But how can a educated person be so cheap?But right now what mattered most was that tonight a model is going to die.She has to do something.After thinking a lot she decided she'll tell mayank that she got a message that tonight someone will die.She decided not to tell anything about the letters or photographs to armaan because its no use.The killer will keep sending such threats & she cant tell mayank about everything.Also she has to stay little far from everyone till she is not sure of what to do.

IN THE GARDERN:

Everyone was jogging except sonia.She was tired & sat on a bench for a while.Samrat-gunjan were totally in romantic mood & so others decided to give them some space.Hence mayank was left only with RV to jog with.Mayu was constantly talking about nups & love while jogging.Just then dia crossed their path & looked at RV.Even RV looked at her paying no attention to mayu's love theory.Mayu was constantly jogging & bickering when he realized RV was no longer jogging with him.He turned behind & saw RV standing a few paces away.He saw RV looking at the retreating back of a girl & realized at once that it was dia's.Smiling to himself he thought this was the best opportunity to ask RV.He went to RV & clicked his fingers in front of his eyes.RV at once came back to the present world.He looked little embarrassed to be caught by mayank.Both of them started jogging again.RV was quite silent.Finally mayu spoke.

M: toh tum usse pyaar karte ho???

At once Rv stopped jogging & so did mayu.

RV: nahi aisi koi baat nahi?..

M: agar tum na bataana chaho toh mat bataoo but atleast apne dost se jhooth toh mat bolo.Tumhaare chehre par likha hai ki tum dia ko bahut pasand karte ho.

R: main tumse jhooth nahi bolna chahta?..haan yeh sach hai ki main dia ko bahut pasand karta hoon.Par woh mujhe pasand nahi karti?.

M: yeh tum kaise keh sakte ho????

R: kyunki main usse bahut saalon se jaanta hoon?.uski har baat jaanta hoon.Kabhi woh meri achi dost hua karti thi?..

M: thi???

R: haan ab toh woh mujhse baat bhi nahi karti?..aur ismein uski koi galati nahi hai?.

M: par tumhaare jaisa sweet ladka uski jitni arrogant ladki se kaise pyaar kar sakta hai???

One look on RV's face told him he shouldn't have told this.He felt slightly offended however he replied calmly.

R: woh arrogant nahi hai?.yeh toh bas tumhaara nazaryaan hai?..

Mayu cocked up his eyebrow at this.

R: tum kuch nahi jaante ho uske baare mein??woh kaisi hai sirf main jaanta hoon?.waqt aane par tumhe bataooga ki sachaai kya hai?..aur yaad rakhna ek din tum asli dia se zaroor milloge??.par tab tak kya yeh baat humaare beech reh sakti hai???

M(smiling): ofcourse?..yeh ab humaara secret hai.Chale???

& they resumed their jogging.

Mayu waited impatiently for nups.She didn't turn up & he got little worried for her.He decided to check on her.Hence after telling others he went in search of nups.On his way he saw her coming running down the stairs.He saw she was very worried.She was still in her night gown.He hurried towards her.A panting nupur held mayu's hand tightly.The worried look on her face told him it was to do something with the killer.He saw others casting a curious look in their direction & so before she could speak he took her to his room.He made her drink a glass of water.She calmed down & started speaking.

N: mayank...woh.woh....usne kahaan

M: kya kahaan usne???

N: usne kahaan ki aaj raat woh ek aur shikaar karega.

Mayu's fist cletched in his hand.His eyes burnt with anger.

M: HOW DARE HE!!!!!!WOH SAMAJHTA KYA HAI KHUD KO??PEHLE TUMHE DARAATA HAI AUR AB AUR LADKIYON KE SAATH??.BAS EK BAAR USSE PAKAD LOO?..

N: humme police ko bataana chahiye?.

M: haan main jaise hi inspector aata hai usse bataa doonga?..par pataa nahi woh kab tak aayega?..aur aaj raat India se reports aane ke baad pataa chal jaayega ki woh serial killer hai ki nahi?..

N: par humme sabko saavdhaan karna padhega?.

M: hum aisa nahi kar sakte?..pehle toh woh manager hi humme yeh karne nahi dega kyunki usse darr hai ki sab yahaan se bhaag jaayenge?.aur jab tak humme saboot nahi milta ki woh serial killer hi hai hum kissi ko kuch nahi bataa sakte?..

N: par mayank koi toh raasta hoga?..

M: kya kahenge hum sabko ki tumhe usne message bheja hai ki aaj raat koi aur marne wala hai???bhulo mat riddhima hum usse nahi jaante?..woh koi bhi ho sakta hai?..pehle toh koi humaari baat par bharosa nahi karega aur agar kissi ne kar bhi diya toh har waqt tum par taras dikhaayega?.kya tum chahti ho logon ko pataa chale ki usne tumhe apna nishaana banaaya hai?

N: nahi...

M: toh ab bas yahi ek raasta hai ki hum police ko bataa de.....woh apne taraf se sabki security kar denge......

Nups nodded her head slowly.Mayu bent on his knees & cupped her face in his hands.

M: tum he darra lag raha hai???

N(looking into his eyes): haan.....

M: mujhpe bharosa hai???

N: koi shak??

M: toh bas chinta mat karo?.main tumhaare saath hoon?..sab theek ho jaayega?..

The whole day went with everyone busy in their routine.Entire day nups wondered who could be the next model to die??She did realize one thing that the police security had indeed tightened.That meant mayank had talked to the inspector.They would remain on high alerts tonight.She just hoped the killer would fail this time & be caught.She shuddered at the thought of the model being herself or any of her close friend.She rememberd his last night convo & wondered if he was serious about hurting gunjan.All in all she remained close to her friends & didn't want to leave them alone especially gunjan.She was afraid the psycho would hurt gunjan.Evening came & everything was growing dark & so were nups fears.Her fear was increasing with each passing minute.The inspector arrived & had a long conversation with mayank & the manager.Finally all the practices got over & everyone went to the washroom to freshen up before dinner.But a sudden announcement was made on the speaker asking all the models to assemble in the main hall for a serious notice.Nups was however still in the washroom & knew what the announcement had to be about.As mayank had told earlier it was to declare if the murderer is the serial killer or not.She was very much sure that the person is indeed the serial killer & didn't need any evidences.The entire washroom was empty except for nups who stayed back to wash her face & remove her fears.The announcement proceeded & since it was on mike it could be well heard even in the washroom.The manager was doing the announcement.

Manager: you all are called here to give you some important news regarding the murder of elissa.

On the other hand nups got a message from the private number."ROOM NO.301.COME & SAVE HER IF YOU CAN".Nupur's eyes widened as she read the message.He was killing someone now.She ran in search of mayank at once.

Manager(continued): After all the reports & investigations it is concluded that the murderer drugged elissa first which didn't give her any strength to shout or scream for help.He probably scared her first & then injected her the drug which was making her loose her senses.

Somewhere in a room a ruthless laugh could be heard while a girl was pleading for her safety.The man took a injection & injected her which made her loose her senses.However she was still crying.The man removed a knife & bought it near the girls neck.Then with one stroke he tore her dress.The girl begged knowing something wrong is happening with her but couldn't do anything except begging.

Nups reached the main hall & tried to spot mayu among various heads.But the crowd was too large & she couldn't spot mayank in it.She was too anxious.She was jumping on her heels to find mayank.From behind someone called her & she turned at once thinking its mayank but it was samrat.

S: nupur kya hua???tum itni pareshan kyu ho??

N: mayank kahaan hai???

S: woh shayad men's loo gaya hai?.kyu sab theek toh hai na???

Without answering nupur ran towards the men's loo.

Manager(continued): The man likes to see girls crying & begging for their life?..as soon as elissa lost her senses he took a bottle of alcohol & sat to drink it while watching elissa crying?

In the room a man opened a bottle of alcohol & sat on the chair while the clotheless girl sat in front of him begging him to leave her.The man laughed & enjoyed as if he was watching some comic movie.

Nupur reached the men's loo & went inside at once.She searched for mayank there but he was no where to be found.Time was running out & now she had to do something on her own.She ran upstairs to save the girl on her own.

Manager(continued): As soon as he finished drinking alcohol he went towards her & raped her & then.....smashed the bottle on her head & killed her?.

In the room the man approached the girl & raped her while the girl kept on crying & after raping her he gave a cold viscious laugh looking at the girl & smashed the bottle on her head.

Nupur was running & going upstairs when she bumped into someone.It was mayank.Mayank looked at her dishelved & panicked state.

M: nupur kya hua???tum aise kyu bhaag rahi ho???

N(pointing upstairs): Mayank....woh... woh.....usse maar daalega.....jaldi chalo.& both of them began to run upstairs.They reached the room & a scared nupur opened the door to walk into a worse nightmare.

Okay finally done.I'm really sorry for the delay but I was out of town.Anyways please comment/criticize.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: adefgh

Pinky-Hats off 2 you.👏

You got me addicted to this story.
I'm really loving it.
Please updated it soo.-cant wait😛
Thankyou very much.😊

thankssssss a lot for your lovely comment........i'm glad u liked it so much........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh god.....now iam damn sure...its mayank.......why pinky....????samrat ko murderer bana deti.........😭
awesome part pinky.....i really love ur ff......please update soon....please pm me.😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
yaaar juldee cont karo!!!plzzzzz!!!!pata nahi im scared wat if this guy is mayank himself:(.i hope asia na ho!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part pinky!!!!!!.......hey nxt time add sum mayur romantic scenes......bt i surely do hope dat its nt mayank......it cant be........nyways awesome updt!.......plz updt soon dis time....
luv ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi pinky!
it was really scary. but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont make mayank the murderer. plz plz plz . if mayank is the murderer then I will feel really bad.
anyways, amazing update.
continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
ohhh great update.....mayank nooooooooo...
till i believe mayank is not the killer....
may be i will wait instead of guessing anything stupid....
ohhh sooo sad poor nupz cant help herself...
good work me waited long time for ur update....
thx for the update....go on.....

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