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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -simi-

great story so far 😃 builging up the suspence a lot... too much to handle now 😆 i have a feeling that Muskaan wasnt actually murdered by the rapist! Lets see what u have planned though 😊


thanksssss a lot simi for your comment.....I'm glad u r liking it.....About muskaan I can just tell let the mystery continue 😉😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rtjks

It means Muskaan is not killed by killer himself but he hiered someone. And at time of killing he is there with all.


It doesnt necessarily mean so....I told its a direct murder with little torture.....& a direct murder can be done in 15 mins 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear its really rocking one omg direct murder it so shocking Muskaan is dead now whose turn i wish soon he is traped Armaan save her plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm Happy New year



Thankssss a lot nidha for your lovely comment.....wish you the same....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

thankssss a lot...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: znbhusain

Am so sorry, dint comment since long but my IF was'nt working. its ok.....u need not be sorry.😊 Just readed all the parts and as always, hats off to you! You bring out each and every emotion live. I can feel it all while reading it. Your the best, Pinkyy! Thanksssss a lot.....😳

And OMG! @ Muskaan's death. Am too shocked. :| And just too confused. And too excited. And too angry at the Murderer. :@ i understaned you ended up feeling all the emotions 😆
Desperately waiting for the next part. will update tonight 😊 Happy New Year to all. thankssss & wish you the same....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

OMG! m spechless. ure so intelligent. i mean the suspense is jst going mre interstinger! m lovin it, bt hpe the suspense is cleared asap. anyways thx 4 d pm and cntd sn.


thankssss a lot for your comment......i'll update in sometime.......😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mar-

woow grt part continue sooon

tnx for the pm


thankssss a lot for your comment...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

hey pinky me back again miss u yaar pata nahi kaha gayab rehti ho chalo wowwwwwwwwwwww yaar its getting soooooooo much suspense yaar gosh yaar omg muski has been killd hmmm direct murder poor ruidz yaar kya hoga she ws so much crying terrefic seriously yaaar dnt no kya hoga nxt wo serial killer to murder pe murder kiye ja raha hai god yaar testing sooooooooo muc patience which i dnt have now i wanna knw yaar whoz d bloody killer cnt wait cont soooooon getting sooooooo much thrill uf
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna


thankssssss a lot yachu.....I'm glad u r back & caught up with my update.....dont worry just 2 more parts to wait for the killer.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Please do look at the important note I've written in ending.😊

RECAP:

Muskaan's death.Everyone mourning.Rahul hospitalized.Ridz-Inspector's conversation.They are shocked to know muskaan was not raped before murder.

PART 19-A:

Ridz & Inspector sat in silence for few minutes to analyse the situation.

In: ek baat samajh mein aati hai ki uss killer ne 15 minutes mein muskaan ko kaise maara hoga…..usne uska rape karne mein ya usse drugs dene mein time waste nahi kiya….usko thoda torture karke maar diya…

Ri: lekin usne laash washroom mein hi kyu rakhi??usse pataa tha uske paas waqt kum hai….isliye usne muskaan ka rape hi nahi kiya….fir itna risk kyu uthaaya….

In: us se bhi badi baat agar usko torture kiya gaya tha toh kissi ko khabar kaise nahi milli….I mean muskaan ko agar drugs nahi diye gaye the toh iska matla woh zaroor chilaayee hogi toh fir logon ne uski awaaz kaise nahi suni???

Ri: haan woh dinner time tha….sab log udhar hi the….kissi na kissi ne toh awaaz suni hoti…

In: iss killer ne humme aur confuse kar diya hai….kya muskaan ko maarne ke peeche uska koi motive ho sakta hai?

Ri: haan tha na….woh mujhse badla lena chahta tha….

In: nahi mera matlab hai koi aur baat…jaise ki muskaan ko uske baare mein kuch pataa chal gaya ho ya fir kuch aur….

Ri: mujhe nahi lagta muskaan ko uske baare mein kuch pata tha warna woh mujhe zaroor bataati….woh hamesha ki tarah normal hi thi….

In: uske mobile mein bhi kissi private number se koi sms ya call nahi tha….par mujhe lag raha hai ki usne muskaan ka murder kissi aur motive se kiya hai…agar woh sirf tumse badla lena chahta toh I'm sure woh muskaan ka rape zaroor karta aur uska mms banaakar tumhe bhejta jisse dekhkar tum aur dukhi ho…Par usne bahut jaldbaazi ki hai…yaad karke bataao jab tum dubaara washroom jaane ke baad apne doston ke paas gayi toh kya baaki sab wahin par the?

Ridz tried to remember.

Ri: haan…shayad….nahi armaan wahaan par nahi tha….

Ridz realized what she said.She had given the inspector another reason to doubt armaan.He was giving her 'I-told-you-its-armaan' look while she was giving him 'don't-start-again' look.

In: mujhe batao armaan ke shoes ka number kya hai?

Ri: shayad 7….kyu?

In: kyunki humme kuch shoes ke print mille hai jo shayad uss killer ke hai….aur uss print ke hisaab se woh killer bhi saat(7) number ke shoes pehanta hai….kya ab bhi aapko armaan par bharosa hai?

Ri: mujhe armaan par pura bharosa hai…main apne pyaar ko pehchaan-ne mein galat nahi ho sakti….saat number ke shoes kitne saare log pehante hai….

In: aapko yeh nahi lagta armaan ka iss case ke saath kuch connection hai…jahaan shaq hota hai wahaan armaan hota hai….Yeh kuch zyaada hi co-incidences nahi ho rahe?

Ri: aapko jo samajhna hai samjho….armaan killer nahi ho sakta….woh muskaan ko apni behan maanta tha….koi bhai apne behan ka khoon nahi kar sakta….

In: shayad issi liye usne muskaan ka rape nahi kiya….seedha maar diya….yeh bhi toh possibility ho sakti hai….

This was the last straw.Ridz got up in frustration.Her chair fell down with loud bang.She was boiling with anger.

Ri(shouting): TUMHE JO KARNA HAI AUR JO SAMAJHNA HAI WOH SAMJHO…..YAHAAN KI POLICE KITNI EFFICIENT HAI YEH MAIN DEKH CHUKI HOON…..BAS EK BAKRA CHAHIYE JISKE SEER PER AAPLOG SAARA ILZAAM DAAL SAKE…..IN STUPID CHOTE CO-INCIDENCES KI WAJAH SE AAP LOG ARMAAN KO ARREST NAHI KAR SAKTE……AGAR ISSI TARAH AAP LOG ARMAAN KE PEECHE PADHE RAHE TOH DO DIN BAAD WOH KILLER MUJHE MAARKAR YAHAAN SE CHALAA JAAYEGA….FIR APNI STUPID THEORIES RAKHNA APNE PAAS….AB MAIN JAANTI HU KI MUJHE APNI JAAN KHUD HI BACHAANI HOGI…ISLIYE GOODBYE.

Saying this she stormed away in anger.The inspector was shocked with her sudden outburst.Then he told himself'love is blind,deaf & dumb…..She'll only believe when armaan will kill her too.'

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PART 19-B

NIGHT TIME:

Everyone were standing surrounding rahul's bed.He had gotten up in evening.Since then he hadn't talked to anyone.He was in his own world.He had finally accepted muskaan was no more.He didn't feel like talking about it to anyone.They had left him alone in evening but now they were determined to make rahul talk.He cant remain silent for lifetime.

Ar: rahul hum jaante hai jo hua galat hua…..muskaan ke jaane ka ghum hum sab ko hai….par kissi ke jaane se life nahi rukti samrat….

At: haan rahul tumhe aage badhna hoga…..iss tarah se tum sabse dur akele nahi reh sakte…

Ri: tumhe apne liye nahi toh muskaan ke liye yeh karna hoga…muskaan tumhe kahin se dekh rahi hogi…usse tumhe dekhkar bahut bura lag raha hoga….tumhe iss sadme se baahar aana hoga rahul….iss tarah se chup rehkar tum usse bhi rula rahe ho…

An: tumhe ab tumhaare aur muskaan dono ke sapne poore karne hai….

So: tumhe unn sapno ke liye iss bed se uthna hoga…..jab liza ki death hui thi tum sab ne milkar mujhe uss ghum se baahar nikaala tha…aaj main tumhe wahi baatein yaad karaana chahti hu rahul…jiss tarah se main aage badhi ab tumhaari baari hai…

Rahul started crying hysterically…..He quickly hugged armaan who was closest to him.Everyone started crying with him.

Ra: tum log theek keh rahe ho….mujhe muskaan ke liye jeena hoga….muskaan mujhe kabhi aise nahi dekh sakti….agar muskaan ke saath nahi jee paaya toh kya hua uske adhure sapno ke saath toh jee sakta hu….Uske sapno ko main zaroor pura karooga….par ab main modeling nahi karooga….iss modeling ne mujhse muskaan ko cheen liya…sirf do din baaki hai….inn do dino mein uss killer ko zaroor pakdooga jisne mujhse meri muskaan ko cheen liya…main usse choduga nahi…

Ri: hum sab tumhaare saath hai….Muskaan ko maarne ki sazaa hum sab milkar usse denge…

Everyone joined their hands in union.

An: par hum uss tak pahunchege kaise?

Ri: ab hum uss tak nahi woh khud humaare paas aayega….

At: kya matlab?

Ri: Parso aakhri din hai…parso raat ko fashion show ke baad woh mujhe maar daalega…..iske liye usse khud chalkar mere paas aana hoga….aur uss hi samay hum log usse pakad lenge….

An: par woh nahi aaya toh?

Ri: Woh zaroor aayega…woh mujhe maarne ke liye India se yahaan tak aaya hai….usne meri maut ke liye din bhi pehle se soch kar rakha hai….woh mujhe itni aasaani se nahi chodega….woh mera khoon karne zaroor mujhe pakad lega….par uss din tum sab ko sambhaal kar har pal mera peecha karte rehna hoga taaki agar woh mujhpar hamla kare toh tum log peeche se usko pakad lo….woh jo kehta hai woh karta hai….aur mujhe pura yakeen hai woh mujhe paane ki koshish zaroor karega…usne iss din ka wait ek mahine se kiya hai…woh mujhe chodega nahi….bas ab humme yeh show hone ka intzaar karna hai…yeh show ke saath-saath iss killer ka bhi The End hoga….

At: Excellent!!!!!humme police ko bhi iss plan ke baare mein bataana chahiye….

Ri: nahi…mujhe yahaan ki police par bilkul bharosa nahi hai….woh ek baar already sab mess kar chuki hai….unke naak ke neeche se woh killer chalaa gaya aur woh kuch nahi kar paaye….iss baar sirf hum milkar uss killer ko pakdenge….

So: par humme koi proof dena hoga police ko…I mean woh pakde jaane par zaroor kahega ki woh killer nahi hai aur police without proof usse killer nahi maanegi…

Ri: Shooting…..uss killer ko mms videos banaane ka bahut shauk hai….iss baar bhi ek video banega jo uske liye faasi ka fandaa banega…kya kissi ke paas camera hai?

An: haan mere paas hai….

Ri: toh tum log woh camera apne paas rakhna…..jab woh mujhpar attack kare toh usse shoot kar lena…hum usse sab sach ugalwaayege aur usse aur uss video ko police ke hawaale kar denge…

Ar(speaking for first time): kya tum jaanti ho ridz iss mein tumhaari jaan ko kitna khatra hai?

Ri: jaanti hu armaan but its time to act….muskaan ke saath jo hua uske baad main aur bhi determined hu…..Main jaan na chahti hu usne gunjan ko kyu maara…

Ra: apne shauk ke liye…..jiss wajah se usne aur bhi masoom ladkiyon ko maara…

Ri: nahi yeh sach nahi hai…usne muskaan ka rape nahi kiya tha…

Everyone were shocked to hear this.She explained them about her conversation with inspector.

At: isska matlab uska koi motive tha muskaan ko maarne ke peeche???

An: aur ussne muskaan ko maara…uske kapde nikaal diye aur fir laash washroom rakh di jisse humme lage ki muskaan ka rape hua hai…

Ar: par usne muskaan ki laash washroom mein hi kyu rakhi?

Ra: aur hum mein se kissi ne muskaan ke chillane ki awaaz kyu nahi suni???wahaan par kitne saare log the…

Ri: inhi sab sawaal ke jawaab mujhe bhi chahiye….aur yeh sirf uss killer ke paas hai…

An: chahe jo bhi ho jaaye hum sab milkar usse zaroor pakdege.

Ar: main bhi saath hu…I'm proud of you ridz….

Ra: we all are proud of you….

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