The Unsolved Mystery(AR) EPILOGUE PG-101 02/05 - Page 58

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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 19-C

29th NIGHT:

11:55 AM

Ridz was trying to get some sleep.She was anxious & nervous not knowing what the following day would bring for her.She had just received a sms from private number saying that its her last night so she gets a beautiful sleep.She was afraid not because of the killer but because she had been getting a nagging thought that something was going to go wrong.She did her prayers & asked god to give her strength.Yet somewhere her 6th sense was telling her the plan is not going to work.She had always afraid such intuitions.Generally her such intuitions would come true.Since childhood she was afraid of such intuitions & now her intuition told her a dreadful danger will be coming.She tried the entire day to calm herself down.She tried to justify & pacify herself.Yet she couldn't make the feeling go.Someone knocked at ridz's door.Ridz opened the door slightly.She found armaan standing outside.She opened the door fully.

Ri: armaan tumne toh mujhe darra hi diya tha….tum itni raat ko yahaan kya kar rahe ho?

Ar: tumhe kuch kehna chahta hu…

Ri: kya?

Ar: main nahi jaanta kal kya hone wala hai…humaara plan kaam karega ki nahi…par main tumse kehna chahta hu main tumse bahut pyaar karta hu….agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh main khud ko sambhaal nahi paoga…main rahul jitna strong nahi hu….tumhaare bina main nahi jee paoga…

Ri: tum chinta mat karo….mujhe kuch…

Ar(cutting in between): baj gaye baarah…chalo time paas khatam hua….

Ridz confused.He was tensed a minute back & now he is smiling.

Ar: woh…actually main baarah bajne ka wait kar raha tha(showing her the watch)…woh main paanch minute jaldi aa gaya toh kuch toh time paas karna tha na isilye woh ghise peete puraane dialogues bol raha tha…

Ri(folding her hand in anger): aur tum baarah bajne ka wait kyu kar rahe the?

Ar: apni aankhen bandh karo….

Ri: dekho armaan main iss waqt bilkul mazaak ke mood mein nahi hu…

Ar(placing his finger on ridz's): sssssshhh….

He took out a ring & sat on his knees.

Ar: aaj humaari 10th anniversary hai…aaj se theek dus saal pehle humaari pehli mulaaqat hui thi….tab hum ajnabee the…ajnabee se dost aur dost se humsafar kab ban gaye pataa hi nahi chalaa….har saal hum iss din ko akele manaate hai….uss din tumne mujhe shaadi ke liye propose kiya tha par maine theek se jawaab nahi diya tha…main chahta tha jab main tumhe propose karu koi special din ho par tumne khud hi mujhe propose kar diya…mere proposal ka wait hi nahi kiya….aaj humaari 10th anniversary par main tumse poochna chahta hu kya tum aaj bhi mujhse shaadi karna chahti ho?

Ridz had tears in her eyes.Her dream of armaan once proposing her for marriage had finally come true.

Ri: tum jaante ho armaan mera jawaab kya hai….fir itna formally kyu propose kar rahe ho?

She kissed him on cheek.

Ri: happy 10th anniversary…

Ar(kissing her cheek): not just 10th anniversary…even engagement…

He slid the ring in her finger.She looked at it excitedly.

Ri: thanksss armaan I love you…

Ar: I love you too…

He kissed her on lips.Not too passionate.Both just trying to express their happiness.

Ar: I'm sorry ridz….

Ri: kis baat ke liye?

Ar: woh….actually main tumhe sabke saamne propose karna chahta tha…main humaari 10th anniversary sabke saath manaana chahta tha….main jaanta hu tum chahti thi ki main tumhe sabke saamne propose karu par jo muskaan ke saath hua uske baad humaari anniversary manaane ko dil nahi karta….kitna galat lagega agar hum aaj ke din ka jashna manaaye aur wahaan humaare dost udaas aur tension main hai….unhe kitna bura lagega…

Someone opened the door saying "bilkul theek kahaa tumne…."

IMPORTANT NOTE:

Okay all my friends have been crying after reading the previous parts….Most didnt want muskaan dead…Now I seriously want to know how many of you want muskaan back???I know it'll be little ekta style but I write this ff to entertain everyone.This ff doesn't go at the cost of my friends tears.The main reason to show muskaan's death was to make ridz stronger when she punishes the killer.But if you all want then I don't mind bringing muskaan back…..I'll take the final decision of muskaan's comeback after counting what the majority favours…This even includes my silent readers….So my silent readers can atleast reply to this….I'll be waiting to know everyones response.

Edited by pinky_5 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
first one to comment.........yay......
i want muski bck............😛
n thnx 4 a long part
n a very happy new year..........
i hope nxt prt will open up few suspence n also the last line
i thnk is said by muski........if u bring her bck..........

Edited by luvkaranmadly - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy...i am a silent reader...but to tell u the truth i really love this ff...so much suspense yaar...plzzzzz update the next part sooooooooooonnn...n yes i really want muski bakk...
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Posted: 15 years ago
we want muskaan back.awesome storyline.
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Posted: 15 years ago
plzzzzzzzzz bring muskaan back😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
silent reader. no. 1
i really want muski back... cant even imagine muski out of show n rahulll.......not able to believe it still... i always was thinking that u would give some twist in the story bringing muski back... n finally that u r asking us....
really, pls bring muski back.
Sush
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
sorry for beeing the silent reader for some time
but the story is going gr8
loved it very much
i was sad about mushkan's death
it wud be very interesting to know how you bring her back so i wud loved to read that
hope ur exames went well
once agine i am sorry for not comenting.....
nruti
Edited by arluver15 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMGG! This is getting so excitinggg! Lol!
I simply loved this part. Specially the last AR bit. Awww! <3
For once, when Armaan said that its 12:00, i thought he is the killer and my heart literally stopped beating. LOLLLL!
And, um, i think i do want Muskaan back. Um, yeah! :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsum prt! i loved it! cho chweet! to b honest, yh i do love muskaan and i ws schocked by her death, bt carry on the stry wid her death, dnt change anyfnk- i dnt wnt d stry to b even ruined slightest wid any changes. i love it jst lke it is, plus I m AR fan, so it dnt mke alot of difference 2 me and this IS AR FF, NOT RM. :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey pinky wowwwwwwwwwwww yaar awesom part yaar ye guthi to ulajti hi ja rahi hai yaar nd ridz gave 1 hint too hm lts see yaar hm so she made plan lts see if she wll get success in this hmmmmmmmmmm ye serial killer gosh yaar i ws so wsad abt muski death but how wll u bring her back yaar it would be soooo much grt to get her back yaar plz bring her back i luv couple kam ho gayi hehehe lvd it soooooooo much poor rahul felt sad for him yaar cnt wait plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooooooooon
thnksf r dpm
luv yachna

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