Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 36

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

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Nice update.. liked Raj's reaction to Neha's past.. do continue soon...

Originally posted by: monikaseth

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Thankx for reading and commenting..

Originally posted by: swetha10

Nice update.. liked Raj's reaction to Neha's past.. do continue soon...

Hmmmm.. Yaar woh bechara kya karega uska past kaunsa acha hai k woh Neha k past pe angry reaction de.. Thankx for reading and commenting.. See U..

Part 51

Raj: Neha tum mujhe uske baare mein bata rahe ho ya nahi..(he stood up)..
Neha: haha..(she stood up and came closer to Raj)
Raj: oh hello ab tum aise has q rahe ho..
Neha: oh god Raj tum gusse mein kitne cute lagte ho..(she puled raj cheeks).. Mai toh bas mazak kar rahe thi actually tumhara reaction dekhna tha..
Raj: matlab yeh sab mazak tha..(with a cute smile)
Neha: hmm waise he jaise tumhari Sujal aur Kashish ki kahani jhuti thi..
Raj: lekin neha..
Neha: please ab yeh mat kehna k woh sab sach tha.. Toh chale mere train 5:30 ki hai aur paanch yahi pe ho rahe hai..
Raj: mai dekh raha hu tumhe kitne jaldi hai mujhse dur jaane ki.. Yeh train log banate hi q hai yaar, tum mere saat car mein chalo mai tumhe by car Pune pohcha dunga..
Neha: haan aur mere papa dekh le k mai ek ladke k saat ghar aaye hu..
Raj: toh kya hua waise b tum ghar jake apne papa ko mere bare mein bata rahe ho nah..
Neha: no way.. Mere papa ki haalat already kharab hai aur agar mai unhe yeh batao k mai most famous playboy Raj Singhania se pyar karti hu toh unhe toh heart attack aa jayega..
Raj: oh yah, mai aisa q tha, shit..
Neha: haan woh toh hai.. Agar tumhari mom ya behen hoti nah toh tum ladkiyo ki izzat karna sikhte..(listening to this raj felt bad that dont have any1 in her life.. Neha realise what she had said & felt guilty..)
Neha: Raj, i am sorry, mai tumhe hurt nahi karna chahte thi..(she starts crying as she really guilty..)
Raj: hey tum q sorry bol rahe ho, kuch logo ki kismat mein sirf khona hi likha hai un logo ko jise hum sabse zyada pyar karte hai.. Ek waqt tha jab mere paas b ek family thi.. Papa, ma aur mere choti behen..kehne k liye toh mere paas sab kuch hai name, fame aur Singhania ka itna bada business empire.. Lekin phir b mere paas kuch nahi hai, yaha tak k Singhania yeh surname b mera apna nahi hai..(neha looks at raj..)
Neha: Raj tum..
Raj: haan neha, mera naam Raj Singhania nahi hai.. Tum mere zindagi ka sabse ayehem hissa hi nahi balki tum hi mere zindagi ho aur tumhe mere bare mein jane ka pura haq hai.. Singhania uncle mere papa ki bohat ache dost thi.. Mai sirf 12yrs saal ka tha jab maine apna sab kuch kho diya tab Singhania uncle ne mujhe naya naam diya ek pehchan di lekin woh mujhse dur ho gaye, shayad mai kisi k pyar k kabil nahi..(tears start flowing from Raj & Neha eyes..)
Neha: Raj tum aisa q keh rahe ho I.. I Love U..(holding raj face in her hands she kissed on his lips with lots of love passion and emotion making her feel completely lost in her love..)
Neha: mai tumhe kabi chod k nahi jaogi, i promise..
Raj: ok my sweetheart ab roona band kar do warna bhaad aa jayege.. Mere dad..
Neha: Raj mujhe aise koi baat nahi janni joh tumhe itna hurt kare..
Raj: lekin yeh baat mai tumhe batana chahta hu qki yeh bate hum se judi hui hai.. Mere papa Indian police officer Veer Singh Sikhavat.. Mera pura naam Raj Veer Singh Shikhavat hai.. Mere samne un sab ki maut actually mere wajah se un sab ki maut hui.. Unki maut ek hadsa nahi tha balki humari car mein bomb rakha hua tha..aur mere kismat toh dekho mere maa papa aur behen k katil ko jante hue b mai kuch nahi kar paya..
Neha: kaun..
Raj: mere papa ek bohat hi coplicated case handel kar rahe thea drugs dealer Raghvan ka case..
Neha: kahi tum..
Raj: haan wahi Raghvan joh is waqt USA me Sujal Garewal banke apni zindagi jee raha hai..
Neha: toh kya woh kahani sach hai aur jab Angad ko pata hai k woh Sujal nahi hai toh woh sabko batata q nahi aur..
Raj: aur mai janta hu k tumhe bohat se sawal puchne hai lekin jaaneman aapki train ka time ho raha hai..
Neha: nahi ab mujhe tumse dur nahi jaana hai..(neha cell phone rang..) excuse me..(she went away from Raj.. And starts talking on the phone.)
Raj: kya yaar abi toh keh rahe thi k dur nahi jana hai aur ek pal mein dur chale gayi this is cheating..(he said to herself..)
Neha: tum, maine tumhe kaha tha na k mujhe phone mat karna phir tum..(neha said to the caller but she was shocked by listening to her reply..)
Neha: Raj, mujhe yaha se le chalo mujhe apne ghar jaana hai..(she was crying, her tears were endless and raj was scared looking to it..)
Raj: Neha kya hua, baat kya hai tum itna roo q rahe ho..
Neha: raj mere dad ko heart attack. Raj tum mujhe yaha se le chalo please..
Raj: thik hai hum abhi station jayege..(they reached station.. The train was there on the platform)
Raj: so tum jaa rahe ho, hey wapas toh aaogi nah..(he looked to Neha with eyes full of love for her and Neha was ab able to feel her love by looking into his eyes.. She was going to say something when the train horn rang..)
Neha: Bye Raj..(she gets inside the train.. The last time they looked eachother..)
Milke b hum nah mile tumse nah mile tumse nah jane q meelo ke hai hai yeh fasle tumse nah jane q.
(The train starts and Raj follow it as he wants to say the last few words to her)
Kaise bataye q tujko chahe yaara bata nah paye batein dilo ki dekho jo baki ake tujhe samjae Tu Jane nah.
Raj: I Love U..
Neha: i love u too..(train left)

Part 51 contd

Raj came to room & found Angad siting there..
Ang: toh Neha chale gayi. Tumne use apne bare mein bataya.
Raj: haan yaar bata diya.
Ang: toh tumne use yeh b bataya hoga k tumne london mein kisi ladki se shadi b kar chuke ho uske baad usne kya kaha.(raj looks angad & then lower his eyes.) Nahi bataya nah.
Raj: yeh bata ke kya faida hum alag ho chuke hai toh neha ko isse kya problem hogi..
Ang: kya tum?.
Raj: yaar tum teacher ki tarah sawal karna band karo. Waise tumhari teacher i mean Kripa tumhara bahar wait kar rahe hai.(raj interupts)
Ang: tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta..(he went out of the room)
Raj: Aur haan dude agar mere lovestory se zyada tum apne concert pe dhyan do to behtar hoga..
Ang: aur tum Neha ko sab batado toh behtar hoga.
(Raj is thinking as he know what Angad said is correct)
Raj: bas do din phir mai usse sab bata dunga.
(2 days passed Raj is all ready to go Mumbai to recieve Neha)
Raj: so finally aaj mai neha se pure do din baad miluga..(he was getting inside his car)
Neha: aaj finally mai Raj se milugi usse kitna kuch batana hai mujhe apne bare mein..(she was getting inside the train)
Song Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai..
hm hm hm, hm hm hm hm..(Raj was driving and singing the song of love)
Thoda sa pyar hua hai thoda hai baki..(Raj was driving & imagining Neha sitting next to her so raj stop his car)..
Thoda sa pyar hua hai thoda hai baki hum toh dil de hi chuke..(Neha closed Raj eyes from her hand)
hum toh dil de hu chuke bas tere haan hai baki..(she made raj close his eyes & she slowly brings his lips closer to Raj & placed it on raj cheecks & as he opened his eyes she disappeared.. He just smiled & start the car..)
Kaunsa mod aaya zindagi k safar mein bas gaya tu hi tu ab toh mere nazar mein..(Neha was sitting on the window seat reading book when she found sitting in front of her..)
Dil ki har ek dhadkan tujko pehchan ti hai mere chahat hai ab kya tu nahi janti hai..(Raj ek ladke ko dekhta hai joh barish mein bheeg rahe aur woh Neha hi hoti hai.. Raj is cofused k yeh haqeekat hai yah khwab hai but was unable to stop herself going close to her & was just watching her.. He was willing to touch her lekin darr tha k woh phirse kho na jaye..)
Mai tujhe jaan gayi ohh..(Neha imaginative Raj came closser to her & closed Neha's eyes..)
Tujhko pehchan gayi phir b tere haan hai baaki..(Raj kissed Neha & when she opened her eyes Raj disappeared..)
Thoda sa pyar hua hai thoda hai baki..(She stood up said this line loudly in train & every1 there was looking to her this made Neha feel shy..)
Thoda sa pyar hua hai thoda hai baki..(Neha is standing in the door where winds were blowing her hair..)
Aaj yeh kya hua hai dil nahi mera bas mein isliye sochte hu tod du sari rasme..(Neha was singing totally lost in Raj thaught..)
Umr bhar k liye tu aa mera saath de de..(Raj pulled his imaginative Neha closer to him & danced with her in rain..)
Haato mein haat sahi ohh tu mere saat sahi phir b tere haan hai baki..(imaginative Neha closed Raj eyes & bring her lips closer to Raj ears..)
Raj: Thoda sa pyar hua hai thoda hai baki..(raj looked here & there.. End of Raj imagination)
Neha was praying for Raj when his cell rings & raj name flashed on the screen..
Raj: hi neha kya kar rahe ho..
Neha: kuch yaha ek bridge anewala hai jiske neache gehra samadar hai toh kuud k pata laga ne ka soch rahe hu k paani kitna gehra hai.. Toh ussi bridge ka wait kar rahe thi..
Raj: madam hume apki batose darr lag raha hai.. Mai koi Superman batman nahi hu mai common man hu agar tumne aisa kuch kiya nah toh mai tumhe bacha nahi paoga..
Neha: haha, mai tuhare liye dua mang rahi thi..
Raj: acha toh kya manga mere liye..
Neha: yahi k tumhara sara dard mujhe mil jaye, tum par aanewale har musibat mujhpe aa jaye aur..
Raj: bas itne daranewale wish q maang rahe ho.. Agar mere liye kuch mangna hi tha to khudko mere liye mang lete..
Neha: aahh!
Raj: kya hua..
Neha: kuch nahi kish se takra gayi thi, bohat ajeeb aadmi tha.. Acha mai tumse baadme baat karte hu station aa gaya hai..
Raj: what, VT station itne jaldi aa gaya..
Neha: VT nahi stupid Karjat station aa gaya hai.. Ok bye..
Raj: yah bye..(raj saw a flower shop so he stoped there & Neha sit somewhere..)
Lady: Arrey woh aadmi toh apni bag yahi bhul gaya..
Neha saw a small boy standing as he was not having place to sit..
Neha: tum yaha baitho, mujhe kahi jana hai waise b yeh mere place nahi ..
Boy: thank u didi..(the boy kissed Neha & went from there and stood near the door)
Neha: ahh, raj ko phone karte hu..
(raj cell was ringing in her car but he was buying flowers for Neha. Neha was contionuously calling Raj lekin Raj toh car mein tha hi nahi..)
Neha: itna attitude ab toh mai tumse puri zindagi baat nahi karugi..
(The small boy to whom Neha has gave saw the bag & thaught k woh bag Neha ki nahi. Without knowing k us bag mein time bomb planted hai. He was saw neha & neha too saw him just 5 sec aur neha ko raj ka phone aata hai she recieved it..)
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oh my god what happened.................hope neha is fine.............raj was married but what happened then...................raj's real name is Rajveer singh Shikhavat...........looks like this is a blend of sujal n rajveer.............cont soon dear........

Originally posted by: spvd

oh my god what happened.................hope neha is fine.............raj was married but what happened then...................raj's real name is Rajveer singh Shikhavat...........looks like this is a blend of sujal n rajveer.............cont soon dear........

Hey tum itne jaldi kaise read kar lete ho yaar..
Raj is married aur jab yeh pata chalega k uski wife kaun hai toh usse b bada shock lage ga actually jab maine socha tha nah tab mujhe b shock laga tha..
Raj name is Raj aur uske dad ka naam Veer Singh Shikhavat hai..
Bechari Neha mujhe bohat roona aa raha hai qki woh Aamna haina yaar lekin Sonia b toh hai..
Thankx for Reading and Commenting dear friend..

hey thanks for the pm n update
n hated this part coz of the death
pls continue soon
love Sanam