Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 34

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Thank You Very Much dear for this part and pm.

I Love This Line So Much

maine kaha tha nah ke jab b hum lagta hai yeh kahani khatam ho chuki hai yeh phirse churu ho jaate hai..


Awesome . mind blowing ff thanks a lot dear


Thankx for ur sweet comment monika..
Actually when KTH ended i was like kaash Rajeev Kth mein wapas aa jata aur yeh Gupreet Sujal na hota..
And then i got that story which Raj is going to say to Neha.. But i am already writing 2 ff updating it so late so i drop the idea of KTH part 2.. But then tommorrow it came to my mind that i can connect that story in this ff..
And don't fuhget Angad is a Garewal is u have read the intro dear..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey wow.....nice one. Raj told Neha the story of Sujal n Kashish. Thats interesting. And yes, I liked the line of Raj's "Jab humein lagta hai kahani khatam ho chuki hai to wo dubara shuru ho jati hai".....kitna mysterious and interesting line hai.

And yes, its an unexpected turn in the story. N am glad to hav it. Btw, the first bit of Raj neha n Raj giving ice-cream n pani-puri to her....it was also cute.

Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hey wow.....nice one. Raj told Neha the story of Sujal n Kashish. Thats interesting. And yes, I liked the line of Raj's "Jab humein lagta hai kahani khatam ho chuki hai to wo dubara shuru ho jati hai".....kitna mysterious and interesting line hai.

And yes, its an unexpected turn in the story. N am glad to hav it. Btw, the first bit of Raj neha n Raj giving ice-cream n pani-puri to her....it was also cute.

Pls continue soon.


Thankx Sumaiya for commenting..
U don't know how much ur comment means to me as u were the 1st one who started to read my ff..
And yah the SK story actually yaar when KTH ended i used to contd the story in such a way ke Rajeev as Sujal wapas aa jaye..
And yah that line it came to my mind suddenly so i wrote it..
Waise maine next part ke liye 2 lines soch ke rakhe hai Raj ke liye and that's terrific yaar..
See U..
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Posted: 15 years ago
the beginning scene was nice n cute.................n dear i loved the Sujal kashish story..............i can never forget them..................n the last line was very interesting...............cont soon dear............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update.. wow Raj told Neha Sk story.. thts so nice.. enjoyed the line maine kaha tha nah ke jab b hum lagta hai yeh kahani khatam ho chuki hai yeh phirse churu ho jaate hai.. do continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey afreen sweetheart!!! fantastic part!!!! simply superb!!!! i just loved it completely...there's so many moment in this part which i love...loved the beginning wen Neha just wanders off leaving Raj n wen he goes 2 her she says 2 him ke tum kahan gayab hojate ho...lolzzz soo funny...gayab hoti hai woh aur bol Raj ko rahi hai...she is soo cute n innocent...i loved Raj's posessiveness, hw others staring at her were making him angry...n wen Neha realised she stopped...then woh ghussa hoke chali gayi as he wasnt getting her pani puri..hehehe n she called him kanjus....hehe aur woh ghusse mein wahan se chali gayi...but i love hw Raj pacified her...kitne pyar se manaya...pani puri ke saath saath ice cream bhi..wah kya baat hai..n soo cute they both fed each other...n then loved the last part where they go 2 the lovers point...that place is special to all RAianz as it was a special place for SK...n we saw such beauiful moments between them...n then loved hw u added Sujal and Kashish's story in the ff...i just loved this idea of ures...anyway dear do update soon..waiting 2 read the next part..luv summi xxx

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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 49:

Neha: what ab kya bacha hai.. Swayam ki maut ho gayi, SujalKashish ki shaadi ho gayi toh ab kya ho sakta hai.. Aur waise tumhe yeh sab kaise pata hai..
Raj: Mujhe yeh saare baatein Angad ne batae hai..
Neha: Lekin Angad.. Oh yah Angad Garewal.. Toh Angad, garewal family ko belong karta hai..
Raj: Ha Angad, Varun aur Shivangi ka beta hai.. Shivangi joh..
Neha: yah pata hai Mr Aluwalia ki beti..
Raj: Wah tum mere baatein itne dhyan se sun rahe thi..
Neha: Ab contd karoge k woh kya sach tha..
Raj: Woh sach yeh tha k jis shaks ko woh apna Sujal samaj rahe thi woh uska Sujal tha hi nahi, jis waqt Sujal us bridge se neach gira tha us waqt Delhi mein ek Gangster Raghvan encounter mein maara gaya tha..
Neha: Oh no it means woh Sujal nahi Raghvan tha.. Toh phir Sujal ka kya hua, kya woh us waqt us bridge se neache girke mar gaya tha..(neha looked at raj with a confused look and raj just smiled looking at her)..
Raj: Ek sacha pyar karnewale ki maut itne jaldi nahi hoti.. Woh Sujal phir wapas aaya apni Kashish k liye. Raghvan ko is baat ka pata chal gaya tha aur phir woh din jab issi jagah pe unse Sujal aur Kashish ko maut dede. Tumhe pata hai jis bullet par Kashish ka naam likha tha woh Sujal ko lag gayi aur joh bullet Sujal ko chunewale thi usse Kashish ne apne naam kar diya..(a tear falls from Raj eyes).
Neha: Toh kya har lovestory ki tarah SK ki lovestory ka happy ending nahi hui aur woh yahi khatam ho gayi..(raj turned towards neha).
Raj: Maine kaha tha na k jab b hume aisa lagta hai k yeh kahani khatam ho chuki hai yeh phirse shuru ho jate hai..(neha got confused).. Woh Sujal aaj ki dhadkane aaj b chal rahe hai sirf is intezaar mein K jis pyar ko usne barso pehle kho diya hai woh pyar aaj b Kahin To Hoga.. Aur tumhe pata hai k tumhe aisa q lag raha k tum yaha aa chuki ho.. Qki tum hi ho Kashish.. Sujal ki Kashish, mere Kashish..(Neha got shocked listening to it)..

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Posted: 15 years ago
wowowowo awesome part dear raj told her wowow waiting for next part . thanks a lot for pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow what a turning point...................very interesting.........cont soon dear.............
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

wow what a turning point...................very interesting.........cont soon dear.............


THANKXX FOR READING AND COMMENTING..

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