Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 33

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey afreen sweetheart!! gr88 parts!! just read the previous 2 parts n loved it completely!!! finally un dono ke beech ki galath fehmi door hogayi aur ab woh phirse aik ho gaye!! am soo happy 2 knw that...n i just love hw they both get 2 knw each others thoughts without the other saying a word....aur is part ka kya kahun it was awesome....loved hw she kissed his cheek 2 cheer him up....aur phir raj ki wish ke woh yahin rehjaye...loved his line about pizza hut delivery...waakay mein woh bhi itni fast nahin hogi...lolzzzz n then the cute romance following jahan pe woh bacha sab dekh raha hota hai n raj saying that why kids always cum between them...hehehe soo sweet n then Raj getting naughty woh bhi bache ke saamne..sahi kaha us bache ne ke koi sharam nahin hai inko..hehehe but loved that part...n then the last part couldnt have been perfect...aik tho humari jodi..upar se perfect location aur saath mein baarish...kya baat hai...lekin yeh end kahan pe kardiya...now cnt wait 4 the next part...so do update soon sweetheart!!!!...gr88 parts once agen...luv summi xxx


Hey Summi aka Kashishdabest i am glad u like the parts.. Actually it's happening from my starting parts that they read each other mind without talking so i thought to do that in this part too.. And Raj is correct kids always come between Raj N Neha us bus wale scene ki tarah.. Hey thay pizza hut scene just came in my mind while writing this part so i thought challo likhte hai.. Thankx for Reading and Commenting Summi and Kashishdabest for me..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aarti-

hey dear it wassuch a cute and lovely update.........very awesome....plz do cont soon...luv aarti.......


Thankx for Reading Commenting and Liking this part Aarti..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lilmizz_Rahela

yaar u roxed de prt
u have no word
keep rockin sweety


Thankx for ur shoooo sweet comment dear..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: palluluvsarmaan

haye i miss those days sujal kashish..awesome pair..nice update.continue soon


Yaar we all RAians miss them alot.. Just hope to see them together.. Kabhi bi, kahi bi aur kaise bi.. Thankx for Reading and Commenting dear.. Will contd tommorrow..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wow nice part.. Neha's train late n Raj is really happy.. do continue soon.. will b waiting for the next part..


Thankx for Reading and Commenting Swetha.. Will contd tommorrow for sure..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mast ud thi yaar...pizza hut se fast service..hehe ye Raj to bada badmash hai...lamba comment likhne ka tyme nahi hai abhi, sorry par it was gr8..
cont soon nd thnx for d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Mast ud thi yaar...pizza hut se fast service..hehe ye Raj to bada badmash hai...lamba comment likhne ka tyme nahi hai abhi, sorry par it was gr8..
cont soon nd thnx for d pm


Thankx for ur short and sweet comment Sur ji.. Sorry that i have not updated for a long time actually i am writing 2 ff + Ramzan is going on + my exams r going to come.. See U..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 48..

Neha: kya hua tum mujhe aise q dekh rahe ho..
Raj: Aaa.. Woh kuch nahi yu hi. O god barish Neha chalo yaha se chalte hai.
Ne: Raj u r so unromantic.
Ra: Dekho tumhe train mein travel karna hai (he looked to the sky) aur agar barish tez ho gayi toh tum (he looked down and found neha was not there).. O No ab yeh kaha gayi. Neha (he shouts)..
(And the he saw her having fun in rain dancing with kids around. Raj eye's were stucked on her as she was looking very innocent after sometime raj came out from his dreamworld and looked around her).
Raj: o god yeh Neha bhi na.
(Raj goes towards Neha).
Neha: hey Raj tum.
Raj: haan main.
Neha: tum achanak kaha gayab ho jate ho.
Raj: what main gayab ho jata hu. Aur waise tum yeh kya kar rahe ho. Bohat barish ho rahe Sab.
Neha: Wahi toh sub toh yahi hai.
Raj: woh toh hoge hi nah tum unhe free ka show jo dikha rahe ho.
(Neha stop's dancing and looked left and right).
Neha: yeh sub toh.
Raj: yah tumhe hi dekh rahe hai.
Ne: toh tum mujhe yeh baat mujhe pehle nahi bata sakte thi.
Raj: tum kisi aur ko bolne ka moka hi kaha dete ho.
Neha: lekin.
Raj: chup ab tum kuch nahi kahoge waise b tumne mujhe yaha kisiko muh dikhane layak nahi choda.
(Neha looked to Raj from top to bottom).
Neha: q aisa kya kiya tumne.
Raj: maine, ok fine yaha barish mein pagalo ki tarah dance b maine kiya ab yaha se chalo.
Neha: chalo q ab tak toh humne pani puri b nahi khai hai.
Raj: nahi hum yaha se jaa rahe hai tumhe aur kahi jana hai toh chalo lekin yaha.
(Raj was angry becoz still now every other man was looking to Neha and he was feel very possesive).
Neha: Raj aaj maine jaa rahe hu aur tumne mujhe daata aur ab tum mujhe ek pani puri bhi nahi khilai. U r so kanjus.
(Saying this she walked away alone from that place).
Raj: o no gusse mein toh main bhul hi gaya tha ke Neha aaj ja rahe hai.
(A idea came in Raj mind).
(Neha was walking alone in the way when Raj came).
Raj: Arre neha tum akele kaha ja rahe ho. Tumhe pata nahi hai kya ke ek akele ladke khuli tijori ki tarah hoti hai. Ok baba i am sorry yeh lo tumhari pani puri aur ice cream.
Neha: wow yeh to mera fav flavour hai lekin yeh tumhe kaise pata.
Raj: qki jab toh uski pasand na pasand jaan lete hai. Chalo ab apna muh kholo.
(they feed eachother and loved eachother company).
Raj: toh ab ice cream aur pani puri kha li so ab hum chale.
Neha: nahi ab b ek jagah baki hai.
(raj was confused).
Neha: wahi jaha mujhe is baat ka ehsaas hua tha ke tum mujhse kitna pyar karte ho.
Raj: kaha.
Neha: tum bhul gaye Lover's point jaha humne ek dusri ka haat pakad ke paani mein jump kiya tha.
Raj: woh jagah ko main marke b nahi bhul sakta toh chale.
(After sometime they reached that place. At the top of the mountain from where they can see whole Shimla).
Neha: pata nahi is jagah mein woh kya baat hai ke main har waqt yaha aane ke baare mein sochte hu pata nahi is khamosi mein kausa raaz hai pata nahi kisa pyar hai chupa hai yaha joh mujhe yaha ke mera dil har waqt yaha ko chahta hai.
(Neha looks at Raj).
Neha: mujhe pata hai tum yeh soch rahe hoge ke main yeh kya bol rahe hu haina.
Raj: Tum purn janam mein beleive karte ho.
Neha: noways, kya tum karte ho.
(Raj just smiled).
Raj: neha tumhe pata hai ke jab b koi yaha aata hai toh unhe aisa q lagta hai ke is jagah mein kisika pyar chupa hai.. Main janta hu.. Yaha bohat saalo pehle ek prem kahani ka annt hua tha.. Unki maut se.. Yaha un do shaks ki maut hui thi joh ek dusre se had se zyada pyaar.. Ek dusri ke saat jeene marne ki kasam khai thi. Aur woh do shaks the Sujal aur Kashish.
Neha: yeh dono kaun hai.
Raj: un dono ko janne ke liye tumhe un dono ki puri kahani sunni hogi.
(Neha was just listening to Raj).
Raj: toh sunno. Sujal Garewal aur Kashish Sinha ki. Woh dono ki pehle mulakaat ek chemist shop mein hui thi (KTH SK 1st meet).
(Raj kept on saying the story to Neha. The story of Kahin to hoga as flash back. Neha was listening to the story carefully and the story came where Sujal (rajeev) dies).
Neha: o toh is kahani mein Sujal ki maut ho jate hai. Mujhe aise log bilkul nahi pasand joh beach raste mein saath chod dete hai.
Raj: Sujal kaha Kashish se dur hona chahta tha woh toh kismat ne.
Neha: nahi Sujal chahta toh un loga ko nahi chodta aur waise b waha sirf teen log thea.
Raj: aur yeh baat tumhe kaise pata. Is kahani ki yahi toh kaasiyat hai ke jab b hume lagta hai yeh khatam ho chuki hai yeh phirse naye sirre se shuru ho jate hai.
(neha was cofused that how she know about it).
Raj: Sujal wapas aata hai ek naye chere ke saat.
(Raj kept on saying the story of KTH from Sujal death till KTH end).
Neha: toh kahain khatam ho gayi Swayam ki maut ho gayi aur Sujal aur Kashish b mil gaye.
(raj just smiled).
Raj: maine kaha tha nah ke jab b hum lagta hai yeh kahani khatam ho chuki hai yeh phirse churu ho jaate hai..
END..




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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 48..

Neha: kya hua tum mujhe aise q dekh rahe ho..
Raj: Aaa.. Woh kuch nahi yu hi. O god barish Neha chalo yaha se chalte hai.
Ne: Raj u r so unromantic.
Ra: Dekho tumhe train mein travel karna hai (he looked to the sky) aur agar barish tez ho gayi toh tum (he looked down and found neha was not there).. O No ab yeh kaha gayi. Neha (he shouts)..
(And the he saw her having fun in rain dancing with kids around. Raj eye's were stucked on her as she was looking very innocent after sometime raj came out from his dreamworld and looked around her).
Raj: o god yeh Neha bhi na.
(Raj goes towards Neha).
Neha: hey Raj tum.
Raj: haan main.
Neha: tum achanak kaha gayab ho jate ho.
Raj: what main gayab ho jata hu. Aur waise tum yeh kya kar rahe ho. Bohat barish ho rahe Sab.
Neha: Wahi toh sub toh yahi hai.
Raj: woh toh hoge hi nah tum unhe free ka show jo dikha rahe ho.
(Neha stop's dancing and looked left and right).
Neha: yeh sub toh.
Raj: yah tumhe hi dekh rahe hai.
Ne: toh tum mujhe yeh baat mujhe pehle nahi bata sakte thi.
Raj: tum kisi aur ko bolne ka moka hi kaha dete ho.
Neha: lekin.
Raj: chup ab tum kuch nahi kahoge waise b tumne mujhe yaha kisiko muh dikhane layak nahi choda.
(Neha looked to Raj from top to bottom).
Neha: q aisa kya kiya tumne.
Raj: maine, ok fine yaha barish mein pagalo ki tarah dance b maine kiya ab yaha se chalo.
Neha: chalo q ab tak toh humne pani puri b nahi khai hai.
Raj: nahi hum yaha se jaa rahe hai tumhe aur kahi jana hai toh chalo lekin yaha.
(Raj was angry becoz still now every other man was looking to Neha and he was feel very possesive).
Neha: Raj aaj maine jaa rahe hu aur tumne mujhe daata aur ab tum mujhe ek pani puri bhi nahi khilai. U r so kanjus.
(Saying this she walked away alone from that place).
Raj: o no gusse mein toh main bhul hi gaya tha ke Neha aaj ja rahe hai.
(A idea came in Raj mind).
(Neha was walking alone in the way when Raj came).
Raj: Arre neha tum akele kaha ja rahe ho. Tumhe pata nahi hai kya ke ek akele ladke khuli tijori ki tarah hoti hai. Ok baba i am sorry yeh lo tumhari pani puri aur ice cream.
Neha: wow yeh to mera fav flavour hai lekin yeh tumhe kaise pata.
Raj: qki jab toh uski pasand na pasand jaan lete hai. Chalo ab apna muh kholo.
(they feed eachother and loved eachother company).
Raj: toh ab ice cream aur pani puri kha li so ab hum chale.
Neha: nahi ab b ek jagah baki hai.
(raj was confused).
Neha: wahi jaha mujhe is baat ka ehsaas hua tha ke tum mujhse kitna pyar karte ho.
Raj: kaha.
Neha: tum bhul gaye Lover's point jaha humne ek dusri ka haat pakad ke paani mein jump kiya tha.
Raj: woh jagah ko main marke b nahi bhul sakta toh chale.
(After sometime they reached that place. At the top of the mountain from where they can see whole Shimla).
Neha: pata nahi is jagah mein woh kya baat hai ke main har waqt yaha aane ke baare mein sochte hu pata nahi is khamosi mein kausa raaz hai pata nahi kisa pyar hai chupa hai yaha joh mujhe yaha ke mera dil har waqt yaha ko chahta hai.
(Neha looks at Raj).
Neha: mujhe pata hai tum yeh soch rahe hoge ke main yeh kya bol rahe hu haina.
Raj: Tum purn janam mein beleive karte ho.
Neha: noways, kya tum karte ho.
(Raj just smiled).
Raj: neha tumhe pata hai ke jab b koi yaha aata hai toh unhe aisa q lagta hai ke is jagah mein kisika pyar chupa hai.. Main janta hu.. Yaha bohat saalo pehle ek prem kahani ka annt hua tha.. Unki maut se.. Yaha un do shaks ki maut hui thi joh ek dusre se had se zyada pyaar.. Ek dusri ke saat jeene marne ki kasam khai thi. Aur woh do shaks the Sujal aur Kashish.
Neha: yeh dono kaun hai.
Raj: un dono ko janne ke liye tumhe un dono ki puri kahani sunni hogi.
(Neha was just listening to Raj).
Raj: toh sunno. Sujal Garewal aur Kashish Sinha ki. Woh dono ki pehle mulakaat ek chemist shop mein hui thi (KTH SK 1st meet).
(Raj kept on saying the story to Neha. The story of Kahin to hoga as flash back. Neha was listening to the story carefully and the story came where Sujal (rajeev) dies).
Neha: o toh is kahani mein Sujal ki maut ho jate hai. Mujhe aise log bilkul nahi pasand joh beach raste mein saath chod dete hai.
Raj: Sujal kaha Kashish se dur hona chahta tha woh toh kismat ne.
Neha: nahi Sujal chahta toh un loga ko nahi chodta aur waise b waha sirf teen log thea.
Raj: aur yeh baat tumhe kaise pata. Is kahani ki yahi toh kaasiyat hai ke jab b hume lagta hai yeh khatam ho chuki hai yeh phirse naye sirre se shuru ho jate hai.
(neha was cofused that how she know about it).
Raj: Sujal wapas aata hai ek naye chere ke saat.
(Raj kept on saying the story of KTH from Sujal death till KTH end).
Neha: toh kahain khatam ho gayi Swayam ki maut ho gayi aur Sujal aur Kashish b mil gaye.
(raj just smiled).
Raj: maine kaha tha nah ke jab b hum lagta hai yeh kahani khatam ho chuki hai yeh phirse churu ho jaate hai..
END..




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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank You Very Much dear for this part and pm.

I Love This Line So Much

maine kaha tha nah ke jab b hum lagta hai yeh kahani khatam ho chuki hai yeh phirse churu ho jaate hai..

Awesome . mind blowing ff thanks a lot dear

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