Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 24

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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 43: Recap: Raj told Angad how much he loves Neha & at the end Sunita comes & hugs raj. TODAY: Ra: Sunita, tum yaha kya kar rahe ho. Su: u stupid, donkey,kya keh rahe thi tum Angad se. Ra: hey relax Sunita aisa kuch nahi hai, tume pata hai na mai jo b kar raha hu humare dream project k liye jo hume us Ashram ki zameen par shuru karna tha, maine un logo ko bohat samjane ki koshish ki lekin woh log us zameen ko chodne k liye tayyar hi nahi thi, to maine socha k q na unka apna ban k woh zameen ko hasil karle jiske liye maine Neha ka istemal kiya lekin Angad ko mujpar shak ho gaya isliye usse yeh sab kehna pada maine tume apne plan k bare mein bataya to ha. Su: haan par jis tarase tum keh rahe thi muje laga ki tum sach me.. .Ra: what? Neha aur main o comeon Sunita she is not my type, tumne aisa soch b kaise liya k mai aur woh (he starts laughing). Su: wah kai tum bohat bade kamine ho, par tum jaise b ho i like u aur kya plan banaya hai tumne woh tum the jisne Ashram mein aag lag wai aur phir khudhi unke madat karne hero ban gaye. I sorry maine be waja tumpe shak kiya (aur camera darwaze ki taraf & we see neha has listen everything & her eyes were full of tears). Ra: ab yaha se jao warna agar neha ne tume yaha dekh liya to pure plan fail ho jayega (& they huged each other aur waise hi unhe bahar se flower pot girne ki aawaz aate hai to Raj darwaze ki taraf jata hai lekin waha koi nahi hota hai). Su: lekin muje Angad se woh sab q kaha (she comes towards raj & said that). Ra: kaha na qki usse mujpar shak ho gaya tha. Su: to is baat ki kya gurantee k woh kisi ko kuch nahi. Ra: tum Angad ko nahi jante agar uske samne do teen emotional dailouges bol do to woh khud hi pigal jata hai, acha ab tum jao. Su: ok bye (she kissed on raj cheaks & goes from there). Ra: are wah Raj tu to sachme bohat bada kamina usse pata b nahi chala k maine Angad se nahi usse jhut kaha tha (& then he rubed his cheacks) agar Neha ne muje yeh sab karte hue dekh liya hota to woh to muje maar hi daalte aur is Angad k bache ko to main aaj nahi chodu ga.(Neha was crying & runing inside her room & kripa saw that but neha has closed the door from inside & directly comes on the bed & was crying). Raj khidke k paas khad hoke neha k bare mein soch raha tha aur mosam barish ki tara hota hai aur hawa tez chalte hai. Song Pyar tune kya kiya. Ra: pyar tune kya kiya yeh pyar tune kya kiya, ek hi pal me achank de hai nayi duniya de hai nayi khushiya (he smiles). Ne: pyar tune kya kiya yeh pyar tune kya kiya (sad version) ek hi pal mein achank de hai nayi duniya de hai nayi khusiya. Ra: pehle dafa use dekh kar hone laga kuch aisa asar (woh apni flower shop hui pehle mulakat ko yaad karta hai) kudse hue hum bekhabar main hu yaha dil mera hai waha. Pyar tune kya kiya (2 times). Woh de raha hai ehsaas yeh jaise koi mere paas hai, jise badan ko chukar (a wind blows neha's hair) mere badan ko chu rahi hai hawa (the same wind touches raj). Pyar tune kya kiya...... (song over & neha's cell phone rings & she picked it up & listening something she is very shocked). Ne: nahi aisa nahi ho sakta, kuch nahi ho sakta unhe, mai abhi waha aate hu.. (neha is very shocked + sad & thats how the part ends). END .
Edited by afreenaamna - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
very well written......neha ne sab sun toh liya hai bas us sunita ki wajha se raj neha mein kuch hona nahi chahiye........gr8 update.....cont soon........luv aarti....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh such a big misunderstanding. Poor Raj n poor Neha. Raj said all that just to get rid of Sunita's ques but Neha misunderstood him. N now she'll leave him n he'll be heart-broken. Oh cant tolerate his broken state. I'm not sure either, he will knw the reason of Neha's exit or not. Oh they luv each other so much. Feeling really bad.

Anyways, pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Oh such a big misunderstanding. Poor Raj n poor Neha. Raj said all that just to get rid of Sunita's ques but Neha misunderstood him. N now she'll leave him n he'll be heart-broken. Oh cant tolerate his broken state. I'm not sure either, he will knw the reason of Neha's exit or not. Oh they luv each other so much. Feeling really bad.<br><br>Anyways, pls continue soon.<br>

chill yaar sumaiya they r the hero heroine of this FF & i think u have saw the intro. O god story batane ka mann kar raha hai that neha is going to........ Keep reading to know that there is a big suspence in the story & till now the story is not even half complete. Bye .
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aarti-

very well written......neha ne sab sun toh liya hai bas us sunita ki wajha se raj neha mein kuch hona nahi chahiye........gr8 update.....cont soon........luv aarti....

agar hero heroine k bech misunderstanding nahi hoge to woh misunderstanding solve kaise hogi, u don't know so hard it was for me to write that Neha is crying becoz is used to imaging what i write & how difficult it was me to even see her crying in my imagination like in half of the KTH i used to hide my face in pillow & just listen her sweet sweet voice that is why the thing i like most in Aamna is her voice. Thanks for reading & commenting. I will contd when every1 have finish commenting. BYE .
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: afreenaamna

chill yaar sumaiya they r the hero heroine of this FF & i think u have saw the intro. O god story batane ka mann kar raha hai that neha is going to........ Keep reading to know that there is a big suspence in the story & till now the story is not even half complete. Bye .



Hey I'm quite chilled after this. I wish I cud knw but still I wud w8 4 the suspence to cum. And if nothing of this sort happens then dear, I'm the happiest ryt now.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great going . Awesome update.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Great going . Awesome update.<br>

thanks yaar for liking the part. So keep reading, keep commenting & keep loving it. BYE .
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh ho............raj said these to keep sunita away but neha has heard it all.............looks like tough times for raj and neha...............cont soon dear............
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice update.. do continue soon...

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