[FF] [Sajan+Mayur]-Sweet; blank pages. Note pg20 - Page 2

Originally posted by: mimi0295

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Mwahahah, I is first to comment! 😃

LOL! i KNEW youu would!😆

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Asthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mimiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!😆

You don't know how HAPPY I am to see this post! 😆 I think I was more excited about your FF then you were! LOL

AWWWEEHHH! and i was excited to read your komment again😆 Im kinda happy i posted this to😳

@everyone-Only I'M allowed to have exclusive updates (right Asthu?) *I just thought I should make it clear* 😆

Oh yes😆! I wrote another future sajan and mayur moment. Will pm. 😆 Tell me what youu thinkk! And yes part two is nearly done. Will post that too! 😳

And OH EM GEE I love your intro!! Pagal 😆 I think I've called you that in all our PMs. LOL

Im SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO happy you posted this yaar! IM JUMPING FOR JOY!

AWWWEEHHH mimii man youurr to sweet! Lovee youuu 😛

I already told you how UNIQUE your writing is! Your technique is soooooo hatke and AMAZING, am loving it! If I ever write another FF, I am sooooo chorifying your idea! 😆

Another idea to be chorieddd! Heyy Bhaggu. I need security😲😆 LOL naaa, just joking😉. Chori it is you want. I bet your FF would be wayy better man. Swear down your like one of the best FF WRITERS i know 😳! Damm your to good! Im gonna be jelling!😒

@ Also i want to Thank my new and great mate mimi. Im so glad to have found you babes. Your a sucha amazing person and not forgetting beautiful FF writer. Thank you so much for you support, your the reason that im posting this FF! 😳 Like to delicate this part to you. 🤗

^^😲

*faints*

*wakes up*

😲😲

*dies on the spot* 😆

DONT DIEEE! 😲
CALL 999! Ma equation buddy. I wont let anything happen to yu

DR. KP coming! 😉😆

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!! You're soooo sweet yaar!! Gimme some tissues, Im crying you a river!!! That is soooo sooo SOOO sweet Asthaa, Im speechless...

I'm glad to have found you! In such a short span of time, you've become one of my most treasured friends on I-F! Thank you so much for the dedication..*sobs*

AWWEHHH babes, No bigs!! I did mean everything i said. AWEEHH! your komment on me!
Im touched! *sobs* 😭

Okay!!! Now for the essay! 😈

*faints* 😆

@ Samrat Lucas Smith's intro- 😆 "Go away. GO HOME!" LOL And I already mentioned in the PM how I loved their names and the idea of them being a mixed bred (Gosh, it sounds like I'm talking about an animal) 😆

LOL! Animal🤣I mostly use the words GO HOME! when ma phone is buzzing. its like HELLO??? Trying to get some sleep here! DO you mind! GRRR! 😆😆

Ugh. Jonas brothers. 😆 I can feel his pain!!! (dont kill me, I know you love them)

🤣 COLD WATER? Hawee.... my poor Sammy, nobody lets him have his BEAUTY SLEEP! LMAO

I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE the fact that SaNu are twins 😳 I is SOOO excited to read about their scenes! hehehe

UGH and Sam going out with Dia 😡

Haww, Jonas brother are like AWWEEHH!! I wont kill you. ill leave you wid a warning😈😆
LOL yepp cold water. A good way of waking up someone! 😆😆 Its better then what ma mother use to do when i was little. She would grab ma small arms and drag me, like pull me out of ma bed. Until she realizes😆😆, half my body is on the floor wid her dragging me 🤣😆😆

i LOVE SaNu. Future Devar Bhabhi! Cute and masti filled friendship! In this FF same but as bro-sis. Twins! 😆😳

Oh dia.. Hmm sorry babes. Dont worry i might bring RV for dia soon! So no probs from Diaz side😉 And trust me im ever happy to have Dia in the FF 😈 MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!😆 Im evil. Kya kare!😳

@Nupur Ellie Smith's intro: AWEH! I wanna hug her! Tomboy 😳 Once upon a long time ago, I was a tomboy 😆 hehe, she skateboarding... OMG MayUr skateboarding scene 😍 (EVERYONE: IGNORE MY COMMENTS, I HAVE ALL THE SCOOPS) 😆

And I LOVE LOVE LOVE her for HATE HATE HATING Dia 😆
@SaNu: AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!! I lovee them Asthuu!! They hate and love each other! 😆 It's soo cutee! Esp their dialogues. "Sorry for telling the truth? NEVER!" hahaha

LOL! It was hard like i said before to think what name would suit wid nupur. Ellie it was 😳😳 AWWEEH! Were you. Same! When i was small. LOL ages back i found a picture of me when i was like that. WOW! Very different now! 😆😆 It seemed like ma lil twin😆😆😆 Oh yes more new scoops coming soon for yoouuu 😳 Hahahahahahha😆

@Mayank Sharma's intro: AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!!!!!! OMG I wanna hug him SOOO tightly and never let goo!! I love him and his mum, MORE OF THEM PLEASE!!! 😳

And he doesnt express his feelings.. that's gonna be a problem, but Im excited to see how you pen that down. Esp. when they're in love 😳

And I love the fact that MayUr are best friends! I IS SUPER EXCITED NOW!

AWWWEEEHHH! I LOVE mommy to. Oh yes deffo Mum and mayu scenes are deffo up! 😳😳 I got few plans. Eheheh! 😆😆

Yeah him not expressin and stuff. Wanted to mkae him a lil different doh right now in the show mayank is trying to stay away from nupur not that he doesnt want to tell its the reasons but we all know the confession is coming up! 😳😳 Todays episode was so adorable. Eheh mayank lines. And his feelings could be seen! i loved the way he was staring at nupur and saying your prince charming should love you the way you are not what your making yourself into! AWWWWW! 😳😳 And the bit when he is looking out for her. Protective toh hai. Thats why didnt let any guy look at her closely! Bleshh!

@Gunjan Natalia Samantha Daniles (I hope I got the name right) intro: Aweeeeeeeeh, I already PMed you like a paragraph saying how much I love her.. and I totally feel for her. Moving to a whole new country, starting over.. leaving everything behind. *sigh

I knoww! That is really horrid! Grr! But you cant do much now can youu! Eheh yeah you got the name right, just the Daneils bit 😆😳! LOL its funny cuz i use to spell it like Daniles before i got the real spelling right! Haha! Gunjan intro was ma fav. Even ma dad's LOL! 😆 I still crack up remembering that night! Remember?? Not spelling. Pen. Paper. Writing idea🤣

This is my favourite line: Aaron can't fit in this family photo since he doesn't complete i

You wrote that soo beautifully.. all those emotions in ONE line. 👏 Asthu, take a bow!

AWWEEEHHH! iM gladd you liked it. I did to! After all you cant blame gunji for NOT liking him. I got few things plans for Aaron and Gunji. ill tell you about it! 😛

Okay, this is my FAVOURITE part:

What the freaking bugs? Is my sister wearing my hoodie again? He stared at her surprised.
"What??" Nupur clicked her fingers, snapping samrat out of his thoughts.

"Nups, seriously stop wearing boy clothes, its not right for a girl and why?? Are you wearing my hoodie again? What part of DO NOT TOUCHE my stuff don't you get man, does the word privacy ring a bell"? Nupur rolled her eyes while samrat raises his left eyebrow.

" Two things twin; first this is my HOODIE. If your not forgetting I brought this first before you copied me and plus there is a difference in the sizes. Mine is certainly not BIG like yours since I don't weight tons. Are you still going to the gym? You have definitely put on weight and second, the day you stop TOUCHING my things, the word privacy will ring in my head OK!" Samrat closed my ears as nupur screamed her last word. Seriously she has one big mouth.

Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh!!! That's like LOL funny Asthu! *sigh I LOVE SaNu!!!

LOL! So Twins talks! HAHHA!! Got more scenes liket this! 😆😆 I LOVE SaNu tooo! *Hi5*

Amazing first part, you ROCK!

AWWW, Thanks! 😳

I know this FF will be even more successful than mine. All the very best babes, and add me to ur PM list: IM FIRST!

I doubt thatt. Your FF is like Wonderful + OUT OF THE WORLD + Freaking amazing = PERFECT! The list is long! 😳😆 Your the first one on the pm list Eheh! 😆

And, CONGO on your first part to your FIRST FF!! Isnt it exciting? MUAHZ!!!

LOL thanks again. Nahh its not first FF. probs 5th 😆😆 I hope i dont take forever updatin this! 😆 And it is exciting as its a new FF. So ideas are still there! MWAH!

-- Mimi

--Asthu 😆

Originally posted by: I.Love.Mohit

Nice FF! Do continue soon!