Lost Love2[AR]!~Pt 16 p53 UPD 20/7

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shonaveer

@shonaveer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

sorry for such an extremely late comment..

lol...

having exams.. so, reserved !! 😛

Coming to the part, it was fantabulous !!

Please do continue as soon as possible !!!

Waiting for the next part to come !!!

You are doing an amazing job !!!

Poor riddhima lost her dad 🤢

Continue soon

and u did an amazing job !!

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Edited by loyal-kashian - 16 years ago

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cutie_shalzy

@cutie_shalzy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

awwwwwwwww rohit yaar main kya kahu u alwys do this alwys lft us speechless it ws jst emotionless prt specially yaar tlks kum or thoughts ke sath zyada ghumte hai hehehe alwys tlk in their thoughts wowwwwwwww but thts why i lv ur ff soooooooooo much truthless seriously yaar so much passion in their luv ar wntd to tke all her pain away how romantic the way u hv describe their emotions nd their thoughts jst beautifull yaar it ws beautifully u hv potrait lvd it ech n evry bit of it 😊sad fr ridz her fathr also lft her awwwwwwwwwwww😭nd ar also not der wth her side but whre did he gone oh god yaar thts why she lft him nd he ws suffering frm all pain he gave her i ws also crying yaar ridz cried her heartou😭t nd ar cnt saw her in tht state nd gv herluv wow how romantic😛😛😛lvd it sooo much yaar cnt wait fr d nxt prt but hv to wait yaar plzzzzz ab contract marriage bhi update kardo tom mon ya tues plz i know ur vry busy nd appreciate it but plz yaar its been long time since readed ur tht ff plz i am dying to read tht tooooooooo plz try to cont it soooon as possible..........thnks
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

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Anisha Sharma

@MrsMallikGrover

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

hey rohit loved the part!!

riddhima lost everything..

they suprisingly love each other? but dnt know iht yet?

and her father is there in the hospital god wat will happen?

haha riddhima and the rain! so true major connection!

please continue soon!thanks

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bella livingstone

@glam.bella

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

it was simply awesome.. poor riddhima,, cant wait 4 da nxt prt!!! 😛 😳

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

Hey Rohit;
The part was really great, I completely loved it;
I felt very sad for her.
I wonder where did he go, if he would have not gone she will be with him now and not far away for him.
But yeah I guess he needed this because even though he was far from her, he hasn't changed much in the present.
Anyways the part was really great and at the last scene I felt even more sad for ridzi, she has lost everything.
Pls continue soon and thnx for the PM.

Kashish

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

OMG....ok...now that was wow....n not enuf.....ok ok...m kidding.....😉

u were ummm...wow...coz i cant get anything else out after reading this....👏

i am stunned u kno stunned na ...totally gaping....gosh...i hate u man .....u can write well and u made delibrate mistakes in the past parts...but here...shit...u were....ROKCING.....FANTASTIC...
i feel bad for Riddhima...😭

i feel u could just have elaborated a lil more wen she cried on him and all....but no complaints ya.....superb....why did she cum in a red saree but...?😕

anyway excleent...keep it up...man how do u manage dat many FF's...????😲

Thanks for the PM

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Steffi