Lost Love2[AR]!~Pt 16 p53 UPD 20/7

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piyasa

@asmani

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Hey dude awesome part..

Armaan Ridz and rain what a combination! ! yummy..😉

but feeling sorry for Ridz..😭

continue whenever u ll get time..

i ll be waitin..

piyasa

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#92

hey rohit it ws freaking awsome man......aw feelng really bad 4 ridz nd equally 4 armi...........hpe evrythng becmes normal sooooooooon.
-love anu

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aditi

@AngelsHeaven

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#93

oh my god....

i feel so sorry 4 ridz...

pooor girl....

she lost her father... & may b the reason 2 live... but how does rahul fit in the bill???????

continue soon

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blessing-beauty

@blessing-beauty

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#94

hey rohit

da part was exceptionally beautiful loved each n every line of it .👏

it was mindblowing

ridz emotions n armaanz feeling was very nicely written

cont soon...........

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anjie

@dmgaddict

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#95

hey rohit

haaaayyhh yeh barish !!!!!

loved the part

armaan took care of ridhima soo lovingly

oh nooo he died..you made her dad die🥺

cant wait for the next part

thanks a lot for the pm

~anjie

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Prit_0987

@Prit_0987

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#96

reserv bhai will read it tomorrow

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Zahra

@Xiahtic-5

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#97

Hey Rohit,

that was awesome yaar beautiful,

aw poor Ridz and where did Armaan went yaar,

and how Armaan behaved with her beast to angel good,

part was greap very nice.

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#98

Rohit Significant part dear..I love ur style to listen inner voice of one's own self.
less conversation yet lots of inner voices.

Ridhima's suffering was unbearable nd he found warmth in his arms.

"Absence diminishes small loves and increases great ones, as the wind blows out the candle and blows up the bonfire....."
~ Franois de La Rouchefoucauld
His double mind ,his confusion, shows a human nature .
Armaan reached out to her in her grief to console her.
Armaan love her from bottom of his heart but he committed a blunder to left her alone in the morning.
What was his problem?Why he left her is another question?
Ifelt pain for Ridzi he lost all he had her love, her father , her self respect .

I MUST SAY
Yaar tum jab be karte ho kamaal karte ho. Dil hi nikal lete ho.

Kabhi..
Jo Ehsas Ho..
Aapko
Mery Ehsas Ka..!
Mery Junoon Ka..!
Mari Mohabbat Ka..!
Fakat...! Itna Kar
Dena,
Mujhe aap
( Apna )
Keh dena....!!

u r going some where dear.?20 days mean?

thanks for pm
love n hugs.
ritu

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: kshanikaa
i got ur pm while posting comment...lol 😆Yup...i am always late...it takes time to pm so many people...naa...!!!

awesome part rohit....liked muskaan's blabbering and what a silly question armaan asked--why he made separate bathrooms???? too sillyyyyyyyy 😆

Yeah that was a Lame question...!! I am glad that you like it...!!!

and riddhima's part was veryyy well written. i completely visualized her during d scene in which she was broken down.

Awww...Thanks for compliments, i am glad if you could visualize it..

and armaan asked himself-"am i a beast?" i just spoke--yes you are... 😆

Yeah even he is..!!!

riddhima's final words to her were so painful as well as so tough.....
he just worsened her condition..... and he deserves her curses in return. liked armaan-muskaan's part too.
thanks for updating. waiting for next epi

Yeah they were and he would feel it all...!!!

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#100

neah ritu...in the mean time i would be updating other fic naa...?? thats why...Turn for this fic will come in probably 15-20 days....or may be early....badake batata hai...😆😆