Lost Love2[AR]!~Pt 16 p53 UPD 20/7 - Page 38

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: loyal-kashian

yayyy rohit...

nice to see your update...
loved it a lot....
you are really doing a great job...
well written and the way you expressed...
fantabulous..
now, i will go back and read the part again...
waiting for the next part to come... Update whenever you are free coz work comes first and we all will wait for yur update :)
luv
deepu :)




Thanks for the comment deepu, i am glad that you like it😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

hey rohit omgggggg yaar whnever i read ur prt i dnt knw how whn but i gt so invold in ur prts gosh yaar it ws jst brilliant yupdate the way u hv expressd his feelings towards her specially ryan hhe he ws soooooooo cute yaar getting into his thoughts ws mindblowing jst like his mom nd ar became soo happppppppppy to have him in his arms it ws jst beautiful yaar but soo emotional dammmmm emotional he ws totaly broke down in angie nd atul he ws blaming himslf she hates him but angie mke him realizd tht she lv him if not thn why did she gave birth to his child awwwwwwwww tht ws written beautiful it ws emotionless yaar i cnt express it through words jst brilliant i wnt to read more n more i realy appreciate yaar ur busy but still ur giving us luvly luv u yaar........
dnt worry abt pm's....hehe
cont sooooon
luv yachna




Thanks yachna for the compliment, i am glad that i can get you involve in it so much, it always a pleasure as a writer.
Yes it was emotional but was needed.
He nneeded that guidance from them, lets see what will happen now😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Steff_DMG

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What a lovely part...a lil progress...I am waiting for Riddhima to accept Armaan....😃
it will happen soon, i hope!!

Ryan is shhhoooo cute😳
i Just hope Armaan firmly decides to tell her how much he loves her or prove it to her...i am so waiting for that...sorry...for the
looooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggg Delay😳😳😳*holding ears*

It really okk...!!!

Thanks for the PM....

Continue wen free😉

Love
Steff🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks Ridzi, arrora, teju, shilpa, susha for the comment. i am glad that you all like it
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey rohit omggggg yaar how i missd u nd ur ff yaarg osh i hv been out since15days giod yaar but seriously maza aa gaya update padke seriously lv it u knw somthing u r the best ar expressions his son giggling playing chewing him hehehe sooooo cute yaar lvd it soooooooooooooo much ridz ws shockd to see them hmm hota hai nd ar ws jst seeing her continuously awwwwwwwwwwww he wntd to hold he rto lv her to marry her confess his feelings but atak gaya nd finally he got some courage nd blutted out nd right der u stoppd argggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhh thts wht i hate most yaar tum writer log na bas suspense bahut create karte ho yaar gosh i jst cnt wait yaar cnt wait plzzzzzz cont soooooooooooooooooon..............
tc
thnks fr dpm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Dear ~!
Ko0o0l Part Yr !~

Y U Saying To Shut That Off So0o0n !~
Please Don't Do0 That HuN !~

And U Ended The Part At Such Thing ~!
Oh Goshh ~!

Waiting For Ur Next Update Eagerly Dear ~!

Take Care ~!

-Walo

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Posted: 16 years ago
HEY ROHIT
AWSOME UPDATE N AFTER A LONG TYM...
REALLY LOVED IT...
PLZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOOOOOON...
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey rohit...........first of all, dont even dare to finish this ff soon. If there is any problem with no. of comments, then the time gap between two updates is responsible for it. Am not complaining at all but just informing you.Even i had to read the 14th part to get in flow with the story.
now coming to the part......
"why would i care if he does too".......... THE ARROGANT RYAN MALLIK!!!!!! 😉
"all busy in giving a bath to the bluetooth stick" 😆
whole scene of juice was adorable.......😳
RYAN was cute, sweet and lovable like always......
and i still need to read some more parts to convince myself as a reader that armaan deserves riddhima.....thanks to the plentiful sins of him. But ending was shocking for riddhima.
Loved armaan-ryan's bonding.......
try to update soon.......

😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks sooooooooo much for the pm
love this part especially the ending
now i cant wait for the next
i soooooooooooo wana know what will she do
pls continue soon
Love Sanam
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Posted: 16 years ago
HEy Rohit....
sorry for da late comment...
but i loved the part...
Loved how ryan and armaan bonded with each other..
Ryan is just too too tooo cute...
nd da ending...
Finally he asked ehr to marry him...
bah wat will she say...
waiting for her response...
plzz plzzz plzzzzz cont. ASAP!
nd thank u verymuch for da pm!
Luv SAZ!

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