FF DV-FANNAH(VEER PRIYA)Part 26 updated - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Wow, dear.It's really very good part.Uff, iye dharam is very cruel man.Aab kaya hoga priya ka.Hope veer jaldi se aajaye.Pls post next part soon dear.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
wow gr888 part dear
thank u
plz cont sn
veer ko bulao na jaldi se
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
Thanks for the update buddy..this dharam is really cruel..I will kill him he made priya cry...ohh veer kaha ho tum Pls. priya ko aakar bacha loo!⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction

Veer & Priya

Veer's Introduction:
Priya was just standing & crying.
Priya: Father, mother, this man is not telling you the truth. Infact, he is the person who told me each & every secret of Dharam, in the morning today.
Someshwar: Just stop this non-sense, behave yourself.(replies in complete anger).Dharam,(he goes to him) beta I am really sorry, I shouldn't have raised my hand on you. Please forgive me.(he joins both his hands infront of Dharam).
Dharam in his mind: This is just the beginning uncle, I will destroy your daughter's life alongwith yours. Just wait & watch.(with an angry look)
Someshwar: It is only my daughter's fault. She has a doubtful nature, foolish girl.
Dharam: It is perfectly alright uncle, it happens with all girls.(looks at Priya,with a serious expression)but uncle you raised your hand on me without any reason, I....I am very sorry to say but I did not like it at all. As far as your daughter, Priya is concerned I will make her understand that things will not be the way she wants.(he realized what he was saying) I..I mean to say that, I will try to convince her, that she should leave her doubtful nature. It is good neither for me nor for her, or else it can cause a big trouble.(he gives a cunning look to Priya)
Someshwar: Absolutely. Ok I beg leave.I have an urgent piece of work to do. Bye. Lets go Nivriti.(he goes out)
As Nivriti was going, Priya, who was still crying, stopped her;
Priya: I am not telling a lie, believe me mother, please believe me.
Nivriti: I know my child, may be whatever you were trying to tell us is right. I believe you, you have got to be strong, ok? I will talk to Someshwar. Take care of yourself.(kisses on Priya's forehead and leaves)
Dharam looked at Priya with a sarcastic expression;
Dharam: So, you found out my reality, right? do I look like a dumb person or a complete idiot from head to toe, that I wouldn't figure out anything that, what is going on in your bloody mind, how you came to know about my each & every hidden secret, you thought you will trap me, you thought that you will use my minister, & I wouldn't find out. The truth is that when you were talking to my minister, I heard your conversation with him by standing beside the door of your chamber. And I went out of the palace intentionally, so that I could know your plans, that you were making against me.
Priya: WHAT??
Dharam: Yes, and when the minister showed you the lock up & bottles of wine, I came in between, I hid the girls and wine bottles somewhere else and bribed and warned my minister,not to tell the truth infront of your damn parents. So next time be extra-careful & extra cautious sweetheart! (he gives a flying kiss to her & laeves)
Priya sees a temple and goes over there, she kneels down, joins her hands & prays;
Priya: Oh God, please save me from this hell, please take me out of these problems, give me that much stength, that I can fight this ruthless man, and send somebody who loves and can take care of me please send somebody.
At a little distance from the kingdom of Arya, there is situated a small village of the shramiks. It was not well maintained, but was uneven with a rocky ground. There is large population of slaveCs, who work day and night. The scene goes like, it is lunch time and all the slaves are sitting on a blacket,covering the rocky ground. All are preparing for lunch.
Slave To Rahul: Where is our leader please call him.
Rahul: He is busy,I'll call him(Rahul is the best friend of Veer, with whom Veer shares each and every problem)
The leader is in his room doing hard excersise, he did 50 push ups with his 8 PACK Abs wearing a sports trouser and sleeveless V-neck shirt of black color,Sweating could be seen travelling from his forehead to his arms. Then he sat on a chair and did excercise with his 10 KG dumbles equally on both his arms round about 30 times.Then he drank a glass of milk which when he drank was pouring out from his lips to his neck.He emptied the glass and watched his face and massaged his hair. He stood up and tied a bandana on his head and did sword fighting on the open field he defeated his opponent and suddenly Rahul called VEEEEERRRR.
VEER turned with a dashing look.......
Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Thanks for the lovely update dear..wow kya entry hai veer ki..mazaa aa gaya padhkar..pls. post the next part soon..me waiting!⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Wow dear.It's lovely update.Oh, veer aagaya,Hamra intejar complete aur may be priya ka bhi.Oh cannot wait for next update.Pls post next part soon dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
hurrayyyyyy 🥳 [:D/] ...veer ki entry ho gayi...as usual..zhakaas entry...... 😳
so priya's father didnt trust her..poor girl.... 😒 ..what type of father is he?? apni hi beti ko narak mein chhod ke chale gaye... 😡
anyways...abb veer aa gaya hai na..sab thik kar dega..maseeha....!!1 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
thank u soooo much dear
yaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🥳🥳🥳
veer ki entry ho gayi🥳
thank u thank u thank u
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV
Veer Priya
Veer-Priya Meet (i)
Veer comes towards Rahul unties the bandana and passes his hand through his silky hair;
Veer: Rahul, what are you doing over here?
Rahul: I just came here to inform you that all the slaves are waiting for you at lunch, including me. So now if you are done with your exercise and stuff swe go and eat our lunch.
Veer with a smile: You just carry on. I am taking a shower first & then I will eat. Ok?
Rahul: Suits me fine, but hurry up, you consume alot of time in taking a bath.(and he goes.)
Veer: Idiot.(he smiles)
On the other hand, priya is really depressed & shattered by his father's statement of calling her foolish & blaming her for the sins she didn't commit, after praying in the temple, she goes in her room but, as she is going, the minister stops her again. She is very angry to see him infront of her;
Priya: Now what do you want to say? (asks him aggressively)
Minister: I just want apologize from you for, what I have done today?
Priya: You don't have to be sorry, because the damage has been done by you. Now I can never reveal the truth of that ruthless man infront of my parents. And it is all because of you.
Minister: But madam this time, I assure you that I am here to help you in any manner I can.
Priya: Why should I believe you. You betrayed me just like your master. No wonder that you are his minister.(She was about to leave, when the minister kneels down and asks for forgiveness) what are you doing?
Minister: Please madam, forgive me. I beg you please. Honest to God, that this time I will sincerely help you.
Priya thinks for a while & says;
Priya: If you are desperate for my forgiveness and if you are sincerely going to help me, then ok I forgive you.
Minister: Thank you so much madam.(he leaves)
In the slaves village; Veer comes out of his room after taking shower(now guys,i don't want you ppl to imagine veer in that white V-neck sleeveless shirt and shalwar,bcoz i don't like em in dat so m givin em a modern touch), wearing a blue jeans, a black vest and a black front open full sleeves collar shirt over it,and wet hair combed back;
Rahul: You are half an hour late buddy.
Veer: How many times will you say this to me, you repeat the same sentence everyday.(with a cute smile)
Rahul: You can get rid of this if everyday you come out of the bathroom on time. You are not less than a prince, do you know that?
Veer: Now shut up and have lunch.
Rahul: I forgot to tell you that there is no water for us. Can you go to the well to collect water.
Veer: Idiot! why did not you tell me before? Ok I am going. Just wait.(he goes)
On the other hand, Priya wanted to collect some berries so she tells the minister to keep an eye on Dharam and she leaves.(The well is situated at a small distance from the tree of berries and the same route on which Veer was going to collect water.)
Priya is going with a basket in her hand,suddenly two bad guys come from behind and start fiddling with her,she starts crying;
Priya: Please leave me.
Bad guy: No, what will you.(bad guy holds her arms tightly and the other is staring at her shamelessly)Now who will save you.(As they are doing this, some body grabs his hair from the back and gives a punch)
Veer: I will.(he kicks the other guys on this stomach and both run away.) VEER comes and gives her the dupata. Are you ok?
Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
OMG
THANK U SOOO much dear for this part
kya meeting thi veer -priya ki😍
im loving it
yayyyyyyyy🥳

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