FF DV-FANNAH(VEER PRIYA)Part 26 updated

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Nima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

waiting for the next part dear....

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maheen malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

SHORT NOTE FOR MY REGULAR READERS

Dear Readers,

I hope all of you are doing good.First of all, I am really grateful,that you people loved reading my fan-fiction.Your encouraging comments were a great strength for me.Thanks once again.I hope that you all will read my ff in future as well.

Now the main reason behind this short note is that, I read couple of comments in which each of you have written about the meeting of Veer-Priya.I could feel that you all are very anxious for the part containing Veer-Priya's meeting.The thing is,that veer-priya will meet after two more parts(it also includes Veer's Intro).And one more thing, I want to present a good story to you and so I can't jump from one part to another quickly,I am doing it step-by-step.So guys have patience😊.Hope you all understand. I will send the next part soon. Regards

Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sweet_1

SHORT NOTE FOR MY REGULAR READERS
Dear Readers,
I hope all of you are doing good.First of all, I am really grateful,that you people loved reading my fan-fiction.Your encouraging comments were a great strength for me.Thanks once again.I hope that you all will read my ff in future as well.
Now the main reason behind this short note is that, I read couple of comments in which each of you have written about the meeting of Veer-Priya.I could feel that you all are very anxious for the part containing Veer-Priya's meeting.The thing is,that veer-priya will meet after two more parts(it also includes Veer's Intro).And one more thing, I want to present a good story to you and so I can't jump from one part to another quickly,I am doing it step-by-step.So guys have patience😊.Hope you all understand. I will send the next part soon. Regards

It's ok dear.no problem.U continue ur ff as u wish and as the story needed.No hurry .I understand.

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: sweet_1
SHORT NOTE FOR MY REGULAR READERS
Dear Readers,
I hope all of you are doing good.First of all, I am really grateful,that you people loved reading my fan-fiction.Your encouraging comments were a great strength for me.Thanks once again.I hope that you all will read my ff in future as well. Now the main reason behind this short note is that, I read couple of comments in which each of you have written about the meeting of Veer-Priya.I could feel that you all are very anxious for the part containing Veer-Priya's meeting.The thing is,that veer-priya will meet after two more parts(it also includes Veer's Intro).And one more thing, I want to present a good story to you and so I can't jump from one part to another quickly,I am doing it step-by-step.So guys have patience😊.Hope you all understand. I will send the next part soon. Regards

No problem dear..take ur own sweet time buddy!

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maheen malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Thnk u all for understandn' me😃

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweet_1
Thnk u all for understandn' me😃

Welcome dear😳.

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sweet_shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

wowww...lovely ff....pls continue soon... 😊

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Nima

@nims23

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: sweet_1

SHORT NOTE FOR MY REGULAR READERS
Dear Readers,
I hope all of you are doing good.First of all, I am really grateful,that you people loved reading my fan-fiction.Your encouraging comments were a great strength for me.Thanks once again.I hope that you all will read my ff in future as well.
Now the main reason behind this short note is that, I read couple of comments in which each of you have written about the meeting of Veer-Priya.I could feel that you all are very anxious for the part containing Veer-Priya's meeting.The thing is,that veer-priya will meet after two more parts(it also includes Veer's Intro).And one more thing, I want to present a good story to you and so I can't jump from one part to another quickly,I am doing it step-by-step.So guys have patience😊.Hope you all understand. I will send the next part soon. Regards

hey hey hey..sweety.....its ok yaar...we will wait dear....

woh to kya hai na hum sab veer ki love life mein jyaada interested hai..so raha nahi jaata...😆

but u take ur time.... we will wait for it....😳😳😳

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priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: nims23

hey hey hey..sweety.....its ok yaar...we will wait dear....

woh to kya hai na hum sab veer ki love life mein jyaada interested hai..so raha nahi jaata...😆

but u take ur time.... we will wait for it....😳😳😳

ya seriously😆

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maheen malik

@sweet_1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#70

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV

VEER & PRIYA

Priya Proves To Be Wrong:

Priya walks towards her chamber. As she is going, a man stops her, the man is actually the minister of Dharam's kingdom, who handles the kingdom affairs with Dharma and in his absence, he looks at Priya with tense expression,Priya looks at him with confused look;

Priya: Uhh...who are you?

Minister: I am sorry; I did not mean to scare you. I am the minister of this kingdom and handle all affairs, since Dharam became the king.

Priya in her mind: It means that this person might know the reality of Dharam, maybe he can be a big help for me in this regard.

Minister: What happened?

Priya (coming back from her thoughts): Nothing. I wanted to investigate about something from you.

Minister: Sure.

Priya: But not over here, please come in my chamber. I want to.... (Just then, Dharam calls the minister)

Dharam: I am going out of the kingdom for some urgent work, I will be back in 2-3 hours. Take care of everything. (Saying this he leaves with a bodyguard.)

The minister then, goes in Priya's chamber. He knocks at the door;

Priya: Come in.

Minister: Madam, you wanted to ask me about something.

Priya: Oh yes. Actually I wanted to investigate about Dharam, from you.

Minister: Yes please.

Priya: You have been with Dharam for such a long time, I mean since he took over his father's throne. Am I right?

Minister: Yes.

Priya: So can you tell me about his over all nature and habits, which he possesses?

Minister becomes silent;

Priya: Listen, please speak up. It is the matter of my life, please.

Minister: Well, madam, you are destroying your life over here.

Priya: What do you mean?

Minister: Dharam is very cruel, he does not have any good qualities, he tortures each of us, if something goes wrong by mistake. Just like you he has trapped many other princesses as well by his fake persona of being extra-kind and generous.(Priya was shocked to a great deal.)

Priya: Where are they now?

Minister: He killed a few of them, while the remaining girls are locked up in the prison.

Priya: Can you take me to the prison?

Minister: Sure.

The minister takes her to the prison. The prison was situated in the basement.Priya walks down and sees a brown steel door with a real heavy and solid lock, Priya is surprised to see 13-15 girls tied with a thick brown rope and white paper sticker on their mouths. The girls were crying . Priya orders the minister to close the door of the prison;

Priya: I'll free them. I'll tell each and everything to my parents and expose Dharam.

Minister: But it is not an easy job, he is very dangerous.

Priya: Don't worry I will handle him. Now I want you to collect all the evidences against Dharam.

The minister collects all evidences, whereas Priya called her parents.

Someshwar: What happened beta, why did you call us over here? Is everything alright?

Priya: I want to tell u the truth of Dharam,I want tell you that what kind of a person

Dharam is.Dharam is a womanizer,He takes alcohol and...(Just then Dharam arrives)

Dharam: Greetings uncle.(with an artificial smile.Someshwar gives a slap in response,Dharam is shocked)

Someshwar: You are such a dual personality.I trusted you.And you betrayed me.

Dharam: This is not true.

Priya: It is father let me show you some evidences.

She takes her to both the cupboard in which wine bottles were placed and the prison but there was no sign of them,instead Dharam's father remains were placed in the cupboard and wild animals in the prison. Priya was shocked and Dharam gives her cunning smile.

Priya: The girls were here. I saw them with my own eyes.If you don't believe me ask the minister of Dharam who has been with him since very long time.

But the minister gives a statement opposite to what he told Priya.And she was embarassed and started to cry.

Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago