The story goes on II - FF *Last Part* Pg 60 - Page 45

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Mind? Debs, you wrote me so sweet, and so entertaining! Why would I mind at all? And RadzAdi ki kahaani? What's their story? Debs!

I shall be back to edit this. Remind me? Send me a PM or something. Lol. It's 1am, and I need to sleep!

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: sejusej

your ff was kind of habit to me, i will miss it, really..... it was wonderful... but feeling sad, as it was your last update... please start a new one, with a new story of sajan and mayur...

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

You know me too well. I had to come back and edit this immediately after switching the laptop on. 😆
I am so glad you did; I was eagerly waiting for your comment. 😳

What a last part, no airs or frills about it, just the couples going on with their lives. I loved the realism of it, it gives the air that, this story is over, but their story, their lives, will still carry one. And it's the mark of a good writer I think. 😉 Kudos to you Debs!

Hey, thanks Radz! That's exactly what the motive was... I am super glad it came across well.

The SaJan bit was so realistic, because Gunjan is reserved, and she would not want the more vibrant and loud Sammy proclaiming to the world how he feels about her, because she still does not like so much attention, and the friendship between Gunjan and Benji was nicely portrayed her, very subtly. You handled the entire scene very well.

Once a sweetheart, always a sweetheart. 🤗 I had to put in Benji, some Uday, some Annie.. you know last part sentiments. 😳

Dia has done a lot of growing up in your fic, which is nice to see. I loved the underplay, the hint of a possible AbhayDia somewhere in the future, now that both have seen that there is more to the other than they initially thought.

Yeah.. she has grown quite a lot. From the overly possessive, manipulative girl to more mature, more sensible. I am sure they will get together sometime in the future. 😉 😆

MayUr was perfectly done, as always. You have a way with them, keeping the playfulness of the relationship and the argumentative streak in the two, and the romantic aspect of it all balanced. Loved the appearance of Mayank ki Mummy.

Mummy had to come in considering how important she is to them and their relationship. I am glad u liked their part since u know I am partial to them.

One thing I'm about to cry about is, what's RadzAdi's full story? How'd they reach that point? Debby! Tell me!

Yeah.. Radz Adi's story has way too much substance to be casually put down in a few parts or so. If I am motivated enough, I will write their story separately. Would you like to read it? 😛

I'm going to miss this FF. I do hope you start something new soon, and whenever you do, don't wait for me to find it, you add me to the PM list immediately!

Love,
Radz

Surely will do Radz. You've been loyal reader #1 of this story and more than you, I will miss hearing from you. I hope we will keep in touch even without this FF as a platform.
Love you lots. 🤗

Originally posted by: annie07

gr8, superb, mindblowing.................... do keep writing alwz..............

Originally posted by: ruky786

aww i cant believe u ended it i really liked this ff but great ending happy friendship day

Originally posted by: komal793

heyy

amazing ending.

just mindblowing.

will surely miss ur ff.

luv

Komal.