The story goes on II - FF *Last Part* Pg 60 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
great update!...i enjoyed all the scenes....its so unlike nupur to be nervous in any situation....as she handles everything with her nonstop talking....anyways, it was quite fun to see her nervous and to see mayank take advantage of her situation.
sammy and gunjan were sweet as usual...wow, dia is changing?...thats a surprise.
i m sure mayank's mom is just joking and she will be more than happy to accept nupur....cant wait to read furthur.
keep writing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG OMG!! debby ..... u cant stop the story here.... plz plz plz continue soon... it was soooooooo awesome!!!!

loved everysingle bit of it.... 😃👏
i am BIG fan of ur ff ... and plzz update it soon!!
and plz pm me wheneva u update the next part (which i hope is soon)
TC
lotsa love
ganga 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Helloji debbyjee!!
Ki haal chal twada? lol was jus talking to my grandma on the phone hence my punjabiness. Haan te chal huni main tere part 60 te comment kardiyan. O btw wow yaar you're at part 60!! How exciting is that!! Shows what a great FF this is. Waah waah *zor se pats Debbyjee's back*
O wait...one thing I forgot to mention about part 59...I loveddd this line "They knew their dreams could not be as great as the reality they were living in..." something like that sorry if I got it wrong par yeah just had to tell ya I loved this line.
Part 60 was awesome Debs!! I really liked the Sam and Gunjan part. It was really well written yaar. O and I like Dia's forgetting and letting go scene. It makes sense in your story this way. O and the MN classroom scene was cute as always. hmmm...I'm now forgetting all I wanted to say as I was reading cuz I had a phone call w/ my grandparents beech mein...o ya what's Adi's deal yaar? He's leaving already? Hunne te aya siga story wich 😕. I hope he finds some excuse to stay. Though I'm sure it'll be a great story by you either way.
Aww it was so cute how Nupur was so nervous. And LOL at Mummy's reaction i.e. your ending!! 😆😆 Total ekta serial type haina? With their shocked faces in the end? Zoom wala camera effects and all? lol I LOVE Mummy!! Aww poor Nupur ek toh she was already so nervous. I can't wait to read on yaar!! Mummy better not be serious!! Kya kahengi woh??? *bites nails frantically* Pleaseeee jaldi likh age ka part aur batah!!!
Thanks alot Debbyjee how am I going to sleep tonight?? 😡 😆😆
hehe love you nonetheless!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Debby excellent update..!! Im sorry i couldnt comment on your previous update...But others said it all..!! you are the BEST..!! and the main thing i like about your FF is that you understand all the characters so well...and till now nothing has gone OTT...esp when it comes to Mayank...!!! you have done fulll justice to his character..where even people who actually created his character couldnt do it.. *sigh* ...it feels nice reading your FF...!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
@arpita: Yeah, Mum is the best.. haha.. *hugs you back* thanks soo much sweetie! 🤗

@shafoo, jyothi: thank you!

@nihu: Hey jaani! Thanks so much yar... really happy you liked it.
Love you. 🤗

@maaria: Yeah, Dia has always been grey, not really all black.. keep reading ya! Thanks so much.

@disha: Kaisi chal rahi hai teri tayyari? All set to rock ur boards? Thanks for liking the update Dishu.. 😊

@ganga: Hey! You made my day.. thanks a million.. Sure, I will continue soon.. Lotsa love.

@amber: What about 'others'? I value ur comments jaani.. thanks for dropping in! I am so glad you think I have been able to do justice to the characters, considering its been a long time and you were one of the first readers. Love you. 🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
@Ipshitaa: You know it thrills me every time I see someone interested in what I write..Thanks so much for going through it and being sweet enough to comment! 😊
A big hug for liking the beach part; its very close to my heart. Yeah, I thought Mayank isnt the type who can sit and frame articulate avowals of love..esp in front of Mum. He is the more intense, passionate types who balance everything in life.. LOL @ the ending. Actually I had been waiting to write abt this official declaration part and just wanted to make it a little interesting.. Thanks so very much Ipsy.. it really matters a huge deal to me. 🤗

@Kiran: Yeah, its unlike Nupur to be nervous so Mayu would obviously milk the situation.. glad you liked the update... keep reading and thanks SO much! 😊
Edited by debby - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
@Pallo:
59: Finally your exams are over. Congrats and welcome back jee.. I missed you! Yeah, Mum is so cute na? She is the best onscreen Mum I have ever seen.. I am so glad my FF wali Mum has also appealed to you.. LOL. Abt Lonavala: yeah, there sure is such a place. Its a hilly place near Mumbai and ever since I have heard stories of my cousins who went there last year, I am all eager to give it a visit. I had wanted them to go to Shimla/Mussoorie but then I realized they'd be too far from Mumbai.. maybe Lonavala's proximity is the reason you see it in other shows.. makes for easier shooting.. 😉

60: Oh, say my Hie to your granny next time you talk. Haan yar.. part 60! Kitna arsa ho gaya ab.. u think I will get to celebrate 100 part party? 😆 Adi needs to leave as his college is reopening.. lets see what happens further on that front.. Abt the ending: oh you bet! It will be shot in dramatic style but not overdramatic. No Kekta background music and triple camera zooms/freeze.. just Mayank's confused look and Nupur's shocked one.. TV par dekhke phir batana.. 😆
Oh yea, hope your post exam sleep was refreshing.. I just have today to chill and need to start my final round of revision for the finals from tomorrow.. Anyway, thanks a bunch Pallojee..you are the sweetest! I love you loads! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Debs🤗🤗
kaise ho?..u know i am taking 5mins break and then reading FF but decided to read ur when i was most tired ...coz i know i'll be in full form after reading it😃😃
my mouth remainded wide open after reading the last two lines.....yeh kya kiya yaar?????/..mayur ko judaah.....nahinnnnnnnnnnnnnn😭😭😭
culd easily identify with nupur dropping thngs down...hahahaa...devdhar sir bhi mere prof. jaisa hai ,😆😆 mayank was a total tubelight then....and nupur's reply was supreb👏👏..it cracked me
i am still chucking on remembering it ....total nupurish lingo😆😆😆
kya yaar..mayank becuming naughty-naughty now !!!..KYA SE KYA HO GAYA, TERE PYAAR MEIN
the way u depicted nupur's tension was mindblowing....totally floored by it ⭐️⭐️
mayank trying to change topic😡..bacch gaya bechara, agar mummy nahin hoti , then she wuld have killed him that time😆😆...MUMMY KI JAI
when i came to the last two lines,..the only word which came out of my mouth were'' OMG, chappal''
hahahaaaa....i know yaar tujhe bahut chappal mill gayi hongi from mayurians by now😆😆..dont be sad ji..''jab ruhi hai toh kya gham hai''...we can start with CHAPPAL SHOP😆😆😆...tere paas bhi aachi collection ho gayi hai aur mujhe bhi professor chappal maar raha hai [ for cuming late] 😆😆..we can start with it..............lolz.. [i know u r ready to kill me now...😳]
par u dont worry ji...mujhe pata hai, tera dill mayur ko judaah nhain kar sakta hai,...tere aandar ka mayurian tujhe karne nahin dega.....mummy ke dimaag mein kuch toh chal raha hai [ mein conc. kar rahi hoon...fortune-teller😆😆]
hahaaa...gng now
awesum update...mindblowing
MATA DEBBY KI JAI👏
luv u lot
ruchi😳
thax for the pm ji..do continue with it🤗🤗
Edited by ruchimayur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
good one i know mom is joking but yes nupur ko heart attack jaroor a jayega.

do continue dear
bye
sumi
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey debz...graet update..behna...
oh god i can imagine nupur's face expression....
im dying to read the next update...
love ya

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