The story goes on II - FF *Last Part* Pg 60

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Rukhsar Ahmed

@ruky786

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#121

oh no wats gna happen now i hope she accepts nupur loved the update thanks

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

*is in shock* OHMYGOD. Debby, how could you end it there?? I wanna know what Mommy is planning! I mean, she's thrilled that the two are finally together, but then here she pulls this stunt?? *takes a deep breath* You'll have to explain, varna - *takes out belan*

The beginning MayUr scene was too cute, I cannot wait for Mayank to meet Nupur's Bauji. *giggles*

And the SaJan scene! Truth or Dare, and some flirting on Sammy's part. Is Dia becoming a better person? Love story with Abhay coming soon? And what is Adi's deal? I love me. *smirks* Why am I - meaning Radz - so confused about Adi's short vacation?

Waiting for more Debby!

Love,
Radz

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Anshul

@anshuls

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#123

superb part👏🤗
THANX!!

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#124

wo debby u r tooo gud maaza aagya plss cntinue saja nwere also really nice and i liked mayur tooo

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reshmahn

@reshmahn

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#125

luvd the update 😊 .... and u really know how to keep the readers on the edge of the seat !!!!!...

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komal793

@komal793

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#126

heyy debby

very nice update.

pls continue soon.

pls pm me if possible.

luv

komal.

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kinnari2295

@kinnari2295

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#127

hey debby

nice part.

pls continue soon and pm me if possible.

luv

kinnari.

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#128

@Radz: The belan sounds scary! LOL, the tables will turn on the plotter next update..I will be safe. 😉 Yeah, Dia is realizing that her losses are all due to her manipulations.. More of Abhay will be coming up soon.. And about you, well, you aren't really confused. Maybe you had just thought he would stay for a longer time.. Thanks a bunch Radz!! 🤗

@ruky: Yeah, I hope so too! Thanks a lot..

@anshuls, ynaiita, komal, anjalika, kinnari: thank u soo much guys!

@pragya: I'm glad you liked it dearie.. thank you!

@reshma: hey, thanks a ton! 😃

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

oh gosh debby, i am not so late in commenting this time. oh gosh it was just wonderful, the way you captured the moments and how i wish the mayur in the show were like this man. debby it was just fantastic, it was soo relatable, exciting and magical, it was just the best. please update soon, i wanna know what happens next, i ams ure mum is just kidding hai na. excellent update. bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Tanya

@TINAMALHONTRA

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#130

Firstly Hi Debby!!!
Was waiting for the update. I must say, you delivered a smashing one! With loads of Mayank, Nupur, Sammy and Gunjan...Par yeh kya have u thought of opting for the cliffhanger endings too....I know u used to do it par i thought u had stopped it...anyways this would make me wait more for the next update....😭
The update was perfect....Sajan ka part acha tha aur Mayur ka toh rocking tha....Mayank bechaari Nupur ko kitna pareshaan kar raha tha par jab ma ke saamne aaya toh bol hi diya par suddenly yeh ma ko kya hua....Kahi Dia ki aatma isme aur unki aatma Dia main toh nahi aayi😆....Kyunki Dia bhi suddenly achi hogayi.😉..Thank god for it
Over all a 5⭐️ perfomance
Waiting for the next bit!
Love, 🤗
Tina