The Heartbreakers2-Epilogue UPG:13 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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jst read it as my exams wer on plz contd soon waitin 4 sk part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow adi a beautifully described part cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: lalala10

Hi, hey
Nice update. thanks The emotions were very well described and written. šŸ‘. thanks I am glad that AK are in love, but I hope Kripa doesn't get all confused. wait & watch The upadte was very lovely. thnaks
Please continue soon,
Mona.

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Originally posted by: j44a

Oh Adi...

Loveli part.. Realli sweet n romantic... thanks
Glad tht they said those magical words to each other.. me 2 Hope itz love later on n not confusion.... wait & watch
Well written..thanks
Continue soon... Cant wait....

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Originally posted by: spvd

very lovely part.............thanks finally they r 1 yep and hope kripa doesnt confuse herselflets c ............waitin to read abt sk..cont soon...........

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ak lover

a vey sweet ans cute part 😳😳. thanks i hope kripa don't think it was a confussionšŸ˜•.wait & watch

pm me when u update nxt part. i will

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Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey adi..so they are finally one...yep aww..loved this part..wonder what will happen next..pls dnt either of them regert it... lests c which i am sure that they will not..but just incase!

cant wait till the next part..hope u continue soon! i will

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Originally posted by: 26javey26

great part thanks

finally there fully togather yep
cont soon i will
Javeria

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjana25

jst read it as my exams wer onbest of luck 4 ur exams then plz contd soon waitin 4 sk part

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Originally posted by: rongna

oh.. so will kripa regret ever having intimate relationship with angad?? wait & watch this is gonna be interesting. lest seedo continue soon!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

Heyy !! hey

woahh--- that was some heat-y part !!--it was supposed to b
bt i'm glad that the tension in their relationship is gone-- me 2
i'm excited to read the morning after !!_- wait & watch
update soon !! =)i will

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Originally posted by: deeya123

very romantic partthansk

great to see that angad and kripa have become oneme 2

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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow adi a beautifully described part thanks cont soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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MORNING:

Kripa woke up as sun rays disturbed her eyes. When she was conscious enough she saw the position she was sleeping in. Angad's face was pressed against her neck, his arms were around her & 1 of his thighs were on her legs. She loved being this close to him. Even though the position was uncomfortable she felt good to wake up in the arms of the man she was in love with. She loved it & wanted to wake up like this on every morning of her life. She just turned her face towards him & brushed her lips with his. It was the most perfect day of her life… & she was going to cherish it throughout her life. As the goginess passed away she turned her head to look as the clock in the room & all but freaked out.

It was past 12 in the afternoon… they were supposed to in a meting now with Alliya & Josh. & they were still in bed. She shacked Angad out of his sleep… shouting at top of her voice.

K: Angad wake up…. V r late for our meeting.

Angad wakes up from all that pulling & Shouting but doesn't let go of Kripa but instead pulles her back into his arms & coveres her body with hin pretending to b asleep.

A: go back to sleep honey…

K: what the hell Angad… get up… I hate being late for a meeting.

Saying so she pushes Angad off her & gets out of bed. She is abt to walk out when Angad pulles her back & kisses her neck mumbing.

A: Josh had called up saying that he has postponed the meeting as Alliya has a hangover…. (pressing her closer to himself) go back to sleep honey.

K: I don't wantto sleep Angad (she got out of his hold) I am going to freshen up.

Before he could stop her she was put of the room locking her doors to get fresh.

By the time they were out roaming after finisheing the meeting with Alliya & Josh… Angad knew that something was on Kripa's mind… she was lost some where…

She got out of her thoughts as she saw they were at the beach & Angad had stopped the car. Both of them got out & atarted walking hands in hands on the shore. Finally Angad couldn't take it & askes her

A: Kripa… what's on ur mind??? U seem lost…

K: I was just thinking…

A: I know u were… what was the thought???

K: Angad last night…

A: (fear tighten his gut thininking she regretted the last night) do u regret it???

K: no I don't… but I am thinking… (not knowing how 2 put it in words)

A: tell me what's in ur mind dear???

K: Angad last night I bled… how is it possible… v were together in Goa itself.

Angad gulped in some saliva. Now he knew what he had forgotten to tell her last night…. But he would now… he lets go of her hand & looks into his eyes & says…

A: Kripa at goa… I did everthing except…

K: except???

A: let u loose ur virginity…

Saying so he ran away from there as fast as he could knowing that Kripa would surely kill him now. As soon as the words registered to Kripa she started running behind Angad in ful speed abusing him with all the bad words she knew.

Angad ran off to a cottage house near by & Kripa followed him. She started throwing each & everything that came in her hands at him.

K: u pig…(cusion) idiot… (another cusion)scum

When Angad was sure that she will not stop Angad rushed to her side when she was abt to grab a flower pot & stopped her by holing both her hands in his & making her look in his eyes.

A: look at the bright side… v r happy beocz I forced u 2 get married to me.

K: but that doesn't help how horrible I felt during that time when I was thinking how I betrayed my family trust.

A: Kripa I cant change that… at that time only having u close 2 me was on my mind… nothing but u…

He knew she was lost in the moment. So he picked her up & carried her to the other bed room.

K: where r u taking me & whose place is this any way???

A: well this is my gangs place. All of us had saved our pocket money 4 a long time 2 buy this cottage. V used to come here 4 week ends.

Kripa takes a look around the bedroom as Angad places her on the bed. It is lit with sented candles & on the wall there is a heart of roses stating "I AM SORRY". Kripa looks at Angad quaetionabley as he is holding his ears.

K: sorry??? 4 what???

A: that I lied 2 u earlier… I was going to tell it 2 u today… but u were the 1st one to ask…

K: well u r forgiven… as the end was nice… happy…

A: (sitting next to her kissing her neck) who told u it is the end??? (looks at him questionably) this is just the begning…. The end will b when v go to heaven… together… may b not even then.

Saying so he kisses her lips & lights of the room dim…

COMING UP NEXT:
I Love U
hey guys.
so heres the next part of the fick. next will b a SK & a bit of AK romance. i am ending this fick as i have a new plot in my mind. the next part will b the last part & i will do an epilogue after that. do leave ur comments.
LOVE
ADI
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww adi loved this part! hai good to knw that the confusion is sorted out! wonder what will happen next..pls continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehe i am first! ... lol ... just had to say that!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
Wow Adi...
Fab part.... Loved it....
Good that there's no confusion now....
Continue soon..
Edited by j44a - 16 years ago

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