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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: lalala10

Hi,hey
awesome part!!! I loved it! thanks AK are just soo sweet!! The whole part was lovely! thanks again
Please continue soon, i will
Mona.

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Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome i just finish reading last 2 parts , aww angad is so sweet , he wont let her down with his act at goa soo sweet . thats Angad 4 u...

both are together now , wanna too see their some romantic part with lots of masti and angad's shaitani. with sujal and all also one part they should have one big party together .

awesome thanks for great parts .

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Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

heyy !! hey
wen i saw the title (ie CONFUSION) i was like uh-oh bt then wen i read the part i got it !!-- cant wait for the nxt part-- tho am kinda sad that ur ending it bt newez am lookin forward to ur nxt FF !! =) hope u enjoy it

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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: ak lover

awesome 👏. thanks

very cute part finally ak are together 👏.yep
pm me when u cntinue nxt part 😊 i will

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Originally posted by: spvd

wow adi cool part...................thanks everythin is cleared..... yep n u gonna end the ff og god............love this ff a lot..........add some more sk scenes.missin them................ in the next part and wats ur next ff???????????? is it abt sk?????????? will let u know shortly cont soon.............

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Originally posted by: 26javey26

aww great part thanks

love AK me 2
cont soon
Javeria

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjana25

it was really gud thanks plz contd soon

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Originally posted by: deeya123

great part thanks

i knew that angad dint do anythin at goa. me 2...
luved them all together thanks
but u r ending it...thats sad a end leas 2 a new begning
lukin fwd for ur next fic hope u enjoy it

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

MORNING:

Sujal Gerewal was abt to blow his top. He had been calling his wife for the past half an hour… but she was not picking up the call. In the end he had just called her sectary… who told himthat Kashish was in a meeting & hence was not picking up any call & had specifically told her that she would not transfer any calls especially from her husband to her. He had been calling her… every half an hour… after all he was worried sick abt her. He had actually begged her to stop working but every1 in the house told his it was ok… even Anjali who is her doctor… had agreed to it.

What the hell he thought… she was supposed to take her medicens half an hour ago & still she was in a meeting. He thought he had enough of this. He simply picked up his keys & after canceling all his meeting for next 2 hrs he went to Kashish's office.

Without a knock he entered her cabin. She was busy with some files. She looked up at him with a smile but his expression of anger confused her.

S: what the hell Kashish. I have been calling u 4 so long & u r not even picking up my calls. I call up ur office & ur secretay tells me that u have told her not to forward me calls.

KA: u have been calling every half an hour…

S: so… I am worried abt u. as it is u don't take care of ur self. Ur were supposed to have ur luch abt an hr ago & then take in ur medicines but I know u would have forgotten abt it. See I have got all the proper thing 4 u. now sit down & leave all this work & eat.

Sujal forces her to sit down & start eating. At the same time he is blabbering her what could b the bad effects of her not eating on time on their kid.

After a few mins her sectary comes in & is surprised to see Kashish eating.

SEC: mam… u r having ur luch again??? (sujal looks at her questionably) mam had her luch abt 1 hr ago…

S: & her medicines… that 2… she took them in front of me. I thinks so she was hungry again… may b its all due to her pregnancy…

Saying so she took Kashish's signs on a few papers & then left. Sujal looked at Kashish with a small embrassed smile on his face. Which Kashish returned with a bigger 1.

KA: nowdo I have 2 finish all this??? (pointing towards the food)

S: no… I will do it. Y didn't u say something before…

KA: u kind of… didn't want to listen 2 me…

S: I am sorry… its just that…

KA: u were worried abt me & our kid… I understand… its ok… infact I am happy abt it…

S: y??? becoz u got to eat double…

KA: no.. becoz it just stated that u will b an excellent father…

S: & u r the best mother.

Saying so he embraced her after kissing her forhead in pure love.

ANGAD & KRIPA R OUT ROAMING THE LONDON WITH EACH OTHER… IN EACH OTHERS ARMS TO B MORE PRECISE.

ANGAD:

Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon; Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai;

KRIPA:

Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se; Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua


SUJAL:
Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon; Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai;

SUJAL TAKES KASHISH TO THEIR FAV BEACH TO LET HER UNWIND FROM ALL THE STRESS. HE KISSES HER AS EVERY1 IS LOOKING AT THEM 4 THIS DISPLAY OF EMOTIONS.

KASHISH:

Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se; Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua

SUJAL:

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Mit Gaya


ANGAD:

Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

KRIPA & ANGAD R WALKING ON THE BEACH. KRIPA IS STANDING ON ANGAD'S FEET WITH HER ARMS AROUND HIS NECK & HIS HANDS AT HER WAIST… LOST IN EACH OTHERS EYES.


KRIPA:

Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Ek Dhum Ke Mein Nishano Pe
Chaloon Rukoon Ishaare Pe


KASHSIH IS LYING ON THE BED WITH HER HEAD ON SUJAL'S LAP WHO IS MUMBLING HOW HE IS GOING TO PAINT THE BABY'S ROOM… KASHISH GETS UP & KISSING HIS CHEEK TO STOP HIM…

KASHISH:

Tu Kahe To Khwab Ka Bana Ke Mein Bahana Sa
Mila Karoon Sulaane Pe


ANGAD & KRIPA R AT THE DISCO WHERE SOME GIRLS TRY TO FLIRT WITH HIM BUT HE JUST GOES TO KRIPA IGNORING THEM & DANCES WITH HER.

ANGAD:

Hoo…Tumse Dil Ki Baathe Seekhi
Tumse Hi Yeh Raahe Seekhi


IN TAKING CARE OF KASHSISH SUJAL FORGETS TO TAKE CARE OF HIMSELF. SO KASHISH COMES TO HIS OFFICE WITH THEIR LUNCH & EEDS HIMAS HE HAD BEEN FEEDING HER.

SUJAL:

Tum Pe Mar Ke Mein To Jee Gaya
Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon

ANGAD:

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Mit Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

ANGAD GOES 2 GET ICE CREAM 4 KRIPA LEAVING HER AT THE LONDON BRIDGE. BUT WHEN HE COMES BACK KRIPA IS NOT THER… WHICH FREACKS HIM OUT. HE GOES LOOKING FOR HER. AFTER SOMETIME SHE TAPS ON HIS SHOULDER TO SHOW HIM THE CUTE DOLL SHE HAS BROUGHT FOR KASHISH'S CHILD. ANGAD JUST HUGS HER TIGHT LETING THE FEELING SINK OF HER BEING CLOSE TO HIM.

ANGAD:
Dil Kahe Ke Aaj To Paalon Tum Panaahon Mein
Ke Dar Hai Tumko Khodoonga


SUJAL IS BUSY BUYING THE TOYS FOR THE BABY'S ROOM WITH KASHISH. HE FEELS THE TOP OF THE WORLD… BUT IS AFRAID IF SOMEHTING GOES WRONG THEN WHAT WILL HE DO???

SUJAL:

Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko Na Nazar Laga
Ke Dar Hai Mein To Rodoonga


KRIPA CANT UNDERSATND WHAT'S WRONG WITH ANGAD WHO FEELS LIKE HE HAS JUST REAGINED WHAT HE HAS LOST. SHE MAKES HIM LOOK AT HIS EYES… STATING THAT SHE WILL B ALWAYS CLOSE TO HIM.

KRIPA:

Hooo Karthi Hoon Saugaate Tumse
Baande Dil Ke Waade Tumse,

KASHISH ASSURES SUJAL THAT NOTHING WILL HAPPEN TO HIS HAPPINESS NOW.

KASHISH:

Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kyan Hua

ANGAD JUST LIFTS KRIPA IN HIS ARMS & CIRCLES AROUND TO EXPRESS HIS HAPPINESS.

ANGAD:

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon

SUJAL:

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Mit Gaya

ANGAD:

Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

SUJAL & KASHISH TAKE THE TOYS THEY HAV CHOSEN FOR THE BABY & HEAD FOR THE ROOM DECORATING IT.

SUJAL:
Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon; Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai;

KASHISH:

Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se; Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua


SUJAL:

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon

ANGAD:

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Mit Gaya

SUJAL:

Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

COMING UP NEXT: EPILOGUE
HEY GUYS,
SO hers the next part. the next will b an epilogue & mayb i will start with my new fick.
thanks 4 ur support.
LOVE
ADITI
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
wow adi i loved this part especially the sk bit gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Wow Adi...
Loveli part.. Just loved it..
But sad that next will be the epilogue .... But then will be waiting for your new ff eagerly...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
heyy--
cute part-- i loveee khuda jaane !!- and all the cute things they were doin here during the song-
my heart is breaking that heartbreakers is coming to an end- tho hopefully ur gonna write another one so looking forward to that !! =)

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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
hey adi loved the sk part very much...........cont wit the epilogue..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
heya adi! loved this part...good to see them all happy! aww ur ending the ff....oh well... hope u start another one! cnt wait till the epilogue
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
thnkx for pm 😊.
aweosme part 😊.
it was too cute 😊.
cntinue soon n pm me the lst part 😊

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