FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 109

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Posted: 15 years ago

WOW, I'm speechless..For the first time..

Mimi, I dont know what to say..
Anything i'll say will seem like nothing compared to what you wrote..
Your story is beautiful..
Absolutely stunning..
It kept me hooked, from beginning to end..
I loved this fanfic..
I actually felt as if I was a part of Samrat and Gunjan's love story..
All the emotions, circumstances, and conflicts felt so real..
Thank you Mimi for writing such a wonderful story..
I will miss reading this..=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
IT WAS AWOSME!!!
BUT WHY WAS THIS THE LAST PART??/
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Posted: 15 years ago

Updated my comments on pg 143

i was first :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
Mimi!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I cant believe it!!!!
YOU actually updated! 😲 *dances in happiness* FINALLY!!!!
you have no idea how i reacted when i got your PM , lolz i was like "huh?" *pinches myself!!!*
awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant believe the FF is finished! 😲 no!!!! but hats off to you, how well you finished the story off and how well you presented it! *claps* 👏 👏 👏
okay soo heres the review - - - - -
samrat n his parents:
awwww poor guy couldnt believe it, i felt soo bad for him yaar
but the scene was sooo touching, especially the part where he thinks that one family hug can get rid of 19 years of void. sooo true! 👍🏼
but 19 years isnt a small time, just imagining what he would have been through, its really hurtful when parents dont turn up for parents evening or school functions, been there. but atleast they made up now....
n what a way to end the scene lolz, "umm i kinda got to go now...", it was so samrat! 😆
n then the parents telling him that they were there coz of gunjan, makes me love this girl even more man!
she does soo much for everyone!! and finally samrat realises that she has always been there for him.
i actually strated to get goosebumps. 😆
The realisation part was sooo cute! wondering into the streets, and then teh papaer lands on his face, and he finds all his answers....
truly shows that sometimes the answers are right in front of you, its just you that needs to spot them.
awesome mimz!!!! 👏
Bhuushan scene -
awwwww i alwaiiz love the bhushans in MJHT and in your FF, makes me want a elder sister of my own. 😳
aneway the hug was really cute with their father, and then nupur wanting him to have the front row seats, sooo Nupur-ish lolz. 😆
nupur tells gunjan about her and mayank, awwww soo cute, loved the way gunjan just pulled her into a hug, and assured her that even mayank loves her..
and then Nupur fulfilling the duty of an elder sister, she really is one caring sister, teh way she told gunjan how proud she was, n then gave gunji her mother's necklace, awwwwwwwwww.
Love dthe mention of childhood days there, fighting over it, i can soo imagine. 😳 😆
why do you have to be sooo good for?????
Gunjan imagines samrat -
oye hoye! Gunjan is starting to imagine samrat everywhere now.
his hands brush over her cheeks, omg *shivers*
even the smallest scenes like these give me goosebumps!
and the.....
dream shattered, damn!!!!!
I wanted more! lolz! 😆
Benji replaces sam -
omg gotta love benji sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!
he's such a sweetheart!!!
when samrat actually arrived, his cute intro n then exit!!
i really wanted to pull his cheeks!! loving him sooo much!
CONFESSION!!!!!!! - - - - - -
okay soo where do i start????
it was just toooooo awesome!!! absolutlely phenomenal!!!
you described teh silence sooo welll!!!! very realistically, coz silence is really scary sometimes! ⭐️
Then comes samrat questioning her and answering everything!!! omg!!!!!!
the way he found all his faults in one go, and questioned her "why?" mar jawan!
and then Gunjan comparing whats happening to a horro movie lmao found that quite funny, but sweet!
and then teh way samrat apologised, awwwww, he was crying, hate it when sam cries, mekes me cry tooo! their small argument over her always forgiving him, sooo well written! 👏
He lifts her chin!!!!!!! major goosebumps!!!!!! *dies*
awww can soo imagine how gunjan must be feeling, churning and sumersaults, bless!
and he places her hand on his chest 😍
no!!!! gosh! why did gunjan have to take her hand back and go??
awww sam thinking of all the things that wouldnt remain if she left, soo sweet of him, made me smile soo much! the way he plucked up teh courage and said it.....
"I LOVE YOU GUNJAN!"
Music to my ears!!!!!!!!!
why couldnt this be used in the show? it made me goo all touchy, just hearing "gunjan" gives that effect, where you just wanna go all mushy and soft 😆
awww soo cute how gunjan was smiling and amazed at the same time 😳
lolz and then cheeky gunjan "what makes you think i feel the same..?" awww felt like bursting out laughing their, shes soo different from the show, yet soo much more loveable!
and then she says it tooo "i love you too!" *dances in happiness*
and the HUG!!!! omg!!!!! finally everything comes true!!!!! 😍 🥳
the hug of a lifetime! the crowd applause and everything made it all soooo..... so..... (cant even think of a word to describe it now!) but it made me all.... (cant think of the word) AWEOSME!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
and then the stage and bow, awwww tam mam, soo sweet of her!!!!
MIMZ IT WAS PHENOMENAL!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Week later -- --
so everyone is now happy!
its all gon back to so normal, yet theres something new, if you get me.
everyone is soo casual like everything was always like this.
mayur were now a couple!
tammy and uday, blesss.
and then we have our very own samrat and gunjan!!!!!!!
Dia as soo obvious to tell that she wouldnt like it, but now even she's found RV, sooo everything is like soooo perfect!!!! i swear mimz if this was a tv show, you would have got some soaring TRP's! ⭐️
RAIN DANCE!!!!! ARGH!!!!!!
Finally get a rain dance!!!! *dies*******
omg! it as sooo perfect!!!!!!!!!
goosebumps and everything!!!!! *dies*******
I cant describe it, but im just soo jumpy n screaming. haha! 😆
it was definitely THEIR moment! 😳 😳 😳
awww the ending was soo cute!!
Sid! and tam and uday!
ABOSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!!!!
seriously hats off to you!!!!!!!
cant believe your the same age as me, yet you write like a twenty year old!!!!!
amazing mimz!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Cant believe this is the end 😭 😭 😭
im gonna miss it soo much!!!!! *cries*
But will wait to see what you write next!
Hopefully it'll be soon! Keep writing Mimz!
You have talent!!!!!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Naima x x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
CoCo.................

ok this is how I am 😎..n I havent even read it yet...this is how I felt wen I read yer PM..you COMPLETED..never tht u wld 🤣 ..fine will try to read soon...but m tryin hard to resist it..as I wld end up 😍 whole day...and not study..will read soon


RESERVED...
mimi0295 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Im getting all emotional now *cries*
Ozymandias thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Im getting all emotional now *cries*

😲🤣 not this early...most of the comments are still reserved only🤣
425360 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: trouble_maker

😲🤣 not this early...most of the comments are still reserved only🤣



Like Mine's. LOL



Bizzi I miss you :(
425360 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
Mimi told me this part would be long.


She lied :(

Ozymandias thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: reya.



Like Mine's. LOL



Bizzi I miss you :(


And mine 🤣

I miss u too...alotttttt Y dont u come on MSN?! Can we meet up tonight at the CC?

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