FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 108

Hey hun!!

IM SORRY! But I finally updated now na? Galti maaf 😃😆

and DONT DIEEE!!!!!

You're so sweet! Imma miss you all so much 😭😆

Hey hun!

LOL yaar, I was being lazy 😆 But I was a good updater 'till the 11th part *nods head* I updated every week 😃 and then I got lazy. LOL

Thank you so much, Im touched. I'm glad you liked the fic, and I hope you enjoy the last part just as much as i enjoyed writing it!

@Drish and Lipsa- SHUSH IT YOU TOO! 🤣

u finally updated!!! yayyy!! *dances around*

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sorry for the delay!!

OMG OMG mimi!!! U finally updated!!! I can't tell u how happy I was wen I saw ur PM!! OMG!! After 3 long months…u updated!!! On one side I was soooo damn elated that u updated and on the other side I was sad coz the FF is now over….i'm gonna miss it a lot yaar *cries*!!! This has been one of the best FFs I've ever read…and ur one of the best FF writers ever…I hav no idea why u always underestimate urself!! Ur really gud at writing!!!

Cuming to the update….it was P-E-R-F-E-C-T!!! I'm totally speechless!! It was awesome, amazing, fantastic, brilliant, outstanding, superb, fabulous, marvelous, rocking, terrific, out of the world, excellent, magnificent incredible, lovely, tremendous, mind-blowing, flawless and I'm out of words already…really yaar…it was just tooo gud!! It was the bestest update of this FF….loved it like hell yaar…I can't even tell u how much!!!

I loved each and every bit of this update!! Now I understood why u took soo long…but I think it was totally worth the wait!!! What a chapter yaar!! Hats off to u!! this was the best ending the FF cud ever ever hav!! The update was magical!! And I've read it like 5 times already but still can't get enuf of it…I feel like reading it again and again and again….and still I'll never get bored!!!!! U hav tons of talent yaar!!

Awwww I feel soo bad for sam!! His parents didn't attend any of his skool function not even graduation or his birthdays…they shud hav called him and wished him happy birthday atleast!! He must hav been sooo damn hurt by all this!! And poor guy….he had to keep all that within himself only…he didn't really hav anyone he wanted share his sorrow wid!!! I loved the comparison u made of sams parents with units…that was a very thoughtful thought!! This is why I say that u hav loads and loads of talent…there'd barely be a couple of ppl who wud hav thot of such a comparison!! I loved how u showed all their emotions….anger, sorrow, regret, confusion, pain!! Sams feelings were brilliantly described…all his pain which he had kept within himself for 19 whole years….what he told their parents abt them not caring and having time for him was all soo true…anyone wud hav felt that way if their parents left them all alone since childhood and didn't care a bit for their child!!!! Hahaha…remind me to remind benji to smack me for this later…LOL…that's soo sam!! Aww…I loved how from unit 1 and unit 2 it changed to dad and mom…once sam forgave them and all well fine b/w them!!!

She touches my face, and for that one millisecond, I forget all those years that I've craved for that reassuring touch. I forget all those years I looked out the window, hoping that they'd make it home in time for dinner. All I can feel now is the warmth of a loved one. The warmth of…my mother.

^^ OMG mimi…ur a genius…really!!! Hayye…I loved this bit like hell!! OMG!! What a line!!! It touched me a lot yaar!!

And a family hug…aww…that's soo sweet!! Haha…uday…perfect timing I tell u!!

OMG gunjan told them to cum and all!! Awww…shes soo sweet!! This is why I love her!! She understands ppls feelings and whats going on within them widout them even saying it!!

Awww….sams feelings abt gunjan wen he feels sorry for treating her the way he did was soo touching…and I cud feel he totally regretted his behaviour wid her esp. abt hiding their frndship and stuff!!! Poor guy…I can imagine what he meant wen he said that he never felt more lonely!!

I loved how u put the FF title in this update…'dare you to move'…and that answered all his questions!!

I loved the gunur-papa scene!! Haha…that line…u hav another daughter too…LOL…its sooooo nupur!! Haha…they were talking abt samrat and OMG gunjans dad winks at her wen he says that sam a nice guys!! Awww….nupur gives gunji their moms bracelet….aww…that's sooo sweet of her yaar!!

You can't even imagine how proud I am of you. And don't think it's just because of this play, no- I've always been proud of you. You're my ray of sunshine Gunjan, and the way you hold yourself together through everything... even I couldn't do that. You're the strongest and bravest person I know, and I know that whatever decision you take in life... it'll take you to greater highs. But, I am your big sister, so I want you to always think twice before whatever you do... but most importantly, follow your heart. Your heart is never wrong Gunjan, never."

I swear I had tears in my eyes when I read this!! They were the most touching lines in ur entire FF (I think)!! Ur awesome yaar!!

OMG gunjan imagined samrat!!!! OMG OMG OMG!! Awww….that was sooooo damn cute yaar!!

OMG sam wasn't there….and benji was doing his role…hes such a sweetheart yaar!! Haha….sam and his grand entry!!! I knew it he'll make an enrty like that after reading that he was no where to be found!! He had to tell gunjan that's hes sorry!! I loved how instead of using the lines of the play sam was asking gunjan questions abt why she did all of it for him and all!! Awww…sams feeling soo damn guilty!! I loved how u wrote all these dialogues and all of sams feelings!!! Awww….he lifts her chin…hayye!! I loved how gunji was all hesitant and didn't wanna believe sam…how she thot all this was only a play not reality…and how she walked away!!

No Gunjan means going back to being the old Samrat. No Gunjan means no more complications. No more hiding, no more lying. No Gunjan means everything going back to normal.

But do I want normal?

No Gunjan means no more being myself. No more happiness...no more genuine smiles. No more cooking meals to impress her, no more using the "car" excuse to walk her home, no more watching her expressions when she's nervous, no more bike rides...

No Gunjan means going back to before. I don't want that.

OMG these lines….what can I say abt them yaar!! I'm speechless!! U rock mimi!! Loved how u described this!!

OMG OMG OMG the confession!! Haila!! I loved it!! Hayye….i love u gunjan!! OMG!! Mimi!! *dies*…that was sooo romantic yaar!! And that hug!! OMG!! Tam mam….i loved how she said that it all ended as a reality!!

A week later…OMG uday and tamanna together…awww…and a kinda serious uday!!

Finally mayank proposes to nupur…she wud hav been relieved!!

Hahaha…benji and sheena!!!

Awww…I sooo adore the dia in ur FF….and OMG dia and RV…I've always wanted that to happen!!!

Awwww….the dance…*sigh*…sooo damn romantic yaar!! And it starts to rain..hayye…*dies*..i've always wanted a rain sequence for SG in the show…atleast we got it in ur FF!!! I loved it yaar!!

Awww….sid is uday and tams son!!! Aww…what a cute family yaar!!

I totally loved the end!! It cudn't hav been any better!!!

I'm sooo gonna miss ur FF yaar!!! And u did an mind-blowing job wid it!!

Phew…sorry for the long comment…hope I didn't bore u!!

That was freaking BRILLIANT!

OMG, I have no words right now to describe how much I loved that part...I feel so happy now...This last chapter has left me in such a wonderful mood; I don' t know why...The story's finished (and I'm sad about that) but the way that you brought it to an end was simply mindblowing!!!

LOVE you, Mimz! (Maybe I'll come back and give you more comments later, when I'm not soaring through the clouds in happiness!)