Truely Madly Deeply in love❤️(mayur ff)PART 11pg26 - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: komal793

heyyyyy

awesome part.
loved mayur a lot.
pls continue soon.will be waiting.
thanks for the pm.
luv
komal.

THNK YOU KOMAL!!
:) glad u liked it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome yaar.so sweet parent but less sweet than our mayur,update soon.pm me😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey zoe atlast you updates, oh jan it was amazing. it was soos sweet and cute, the best part for me was the natural and real flow of events and the way nupur made mayank got to sleep and mayank sleeping on his shoulder is soooooooooooo sweet and cute, God bless. Zoe you simply rock, loveddddddddd it man.
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Posted: 16 years ago
It was an AWESOME update!!
I love your fanfic...
Aww...Mayu was so nervous to meet her parents and you wrote their interactions really nicely.
Oh...lol....she was going to make paneer! That was a nice joke you added!
hehe...I'd thought that her dad would really make it hard for him but he was so friendly and nice!
DO update soon and PM me too...sending you a friends request.
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Posted: 16 years ago
HII ZOE!!! WAS WAITING 4 U!!
ANIWAY...WAS AWESOME
U WRITTED VERY NICELY AND WELL!!
PM ME PLS!!
CONT SOON! TAKE UR TIME!!
SEE YAA!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyyy ur update was realyyyyyyyyy gud... !!! loved it
and it was soo cute tha how nupur tried to console mayank abt her parents ... !!!!
i hope u will update soon !!!!
gr8 going =]
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowowowow tht was cool part
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww....mayank meeting her parents was too cute!! i loved...do continue soon...can't wait for the next part zoe!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
ZOE ZOE ZOE..
im janani yaar..ur frnd!!!lol..
plz plz PM me wen u update ..n plz update soon..
cus its going on amazingle well!!!>..
WAITIN TO READ LOTS MORE..!!!
luv..
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 10😊
They all had their dinner quite late. Everyone finished eating by nine which was quite late than usual for her parents. After having teased his daughter, nupur's dad bid them good night. Nupur helped her mom clean up. Mayank came up to her mom.

M – thank you so much for the dinner m…( he stopped) .. aunty..!!

Nm – I am very happy that you liked the food, beta! And ha….u can call me ma if you want. I don't mind. In fact I'll be pleased.

M – thank you so much!!

He hugged her. Nupur's mum was aware of mayank's separation of his parents. And she really loved mayank the way he was. Even though he hadn't experienced parental love he didn't let go of his love towards others. She wanted to make him feel at home. She loved nupur's best friend. Well… as far as she knew he was her best friend. Although she had gotten some idea about them being together, she still needed to confirm it.

Nm – its getting quite late. U two can go off to bed too , soon. Good night!

Saying this she too left. Mayank , being the good boy that he was, listened to her and rushed off to his room. He was soo happy and thankful to nupur to make him come here. Otherwise he would have never experienced that love.

M – I love you nupur! Ur the best thing that has ever happened to me!! I will never let u go:]

Standing there in his black vest(lol), talking to himself he didn't notice that someone was listening to him. Nupur was so happy to have found herself a guy like him. She considered herself to be the luckiest girl on earth. Hearing mayank say those words she walked upto him and hugged him from behind. Mayank freaked out for a second and when he saw nupur he got even more tensed.

M – omg! Nupur!! I am serious!! U r going to get us killed!!

N – mayank!! Unbelievable!!

Wats wrong with u??

Saying this she walked out of his room and in anger entered her room.

While mayank stood there dumbstruck. He got even more tensed as he realized that he had made nupur mad at him. Not delaying any further he went after her into her room. He entered to see nupur frowning and burning with anger changing the channels on the t.v.

Nupur still looked soo cute to him, Even though she was angry. Smiling to himself he walked up to her and tightened his arms around her chest and rubbed his cheeks with hers.and made her move left right with him.

She simply ignored him and continued flipping the channels with anger…

M – I am sorry….???

She didn't say a word and continued to ignore him.

M – hmm….

He started to mess around a little. First he seductively nuzzled her neck and then kissed it. Then slowly he moved his hands down her waist and started to tickle her. Nupur started to giggle.

N – hahahaha…. Mayank plzz stop!!!!! (giggles)

M – but I dnt feel like stopping…(he started playing around even more and picked her up in his arms)

N – omg!! Mayank plzzz!!!!

M – so u forgive me right???(and made a cute face)

N – (she had no other choice left) ok ok!! Now plzz put me down!!

He gave a quick peck on her cheek and put her down.

M – really nupur!! U have to stop eating so much!! U've gotten so heavy!!gosh!!(he started playing with her again)

N – what????? Did u just call me fat???????

She picked up the pillows and started hitting him with it. He tried his best to defend himself. They were so lost in playing like little kids that they didn't even think about how loud they were….

Nm – nupur!! Yeh kya ho raha hai??

Seeing nupur's mom enter her room suddenly made mayank panic.

Pre-cap : they go for shopping and see someone there……..

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