simple yet nt dat simple(AK)urgent note - pg 31 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
very interesting part
so kirpa is still immune to Angad's charms...
waitng 4 Angad's entery....
just a request.... can u write in eng.... it is difficult tfor me 2 understand hindi eng....
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
awesome start thank you for this awesome update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx nehasfan, sujalangad_rock, monikaseth

i will write it in english bt since i wrote dis part part b4 i read ur reply sum of it is in hindi bt frm nxt i will stick 2 english meanwhile dis is d promised weekly update, do tell me if u liked dis part. here goes...
Part 2

a-hello dis is angad khanna.

k-hi i m kripa ur host for 2day. So r u ready, shall we get 2 d agenda of 2day.

a-i m always ready, get going.

k-here we go.

k-hello listeners, welcum bak guess who is wid us, yup ur wait is over angad khanna d gal magnet himself is here.

a-hey wat did u say?

k- dat we r gonna talk 2 angad oops i forgot 2 add since its hindi day we r gonna talk in hindi.

a-no before dat.

k-i don't noe, u tell me.

a-gal magnet

k-haan toh.

a-toh...r u insane u cannot call me dat.

k-y nt its ur clich

a-so wat?

k-dats wat i m saying...

a-u cannot talk abt me like dat i m ur guest.

k-bt its d truth.

Dey continued like dat through d whole telephone call until krips cut d line. D listeners were overjoyed morning masala was gud, nd dis was better, bt dey didn't get answers 2 dere questions nd producer had no hope of securing d interview dey wanted as angad was seriously pissed off. Kripa was rude bt is she gonna accept it? Well wat can 1 do wen ur job is on line. Nd yup she was given an ultimatum by her amiable producer, to get him 2 call back nd talk to him nicely warna...

So d bebas, majboor krips did wat she never wud hav done otherwise. She called angad, bt cud nt get through his manager as angad has forbidden him 2 take ne calls frm her radio station. So at last she was left wid no choice bt 2 contact him personally. Bt its nt dat easy.

She tried 2 set up n appointment wid him in d office, went 2 his studio 2 no avail. So her last attempt was 2 go 2 his home. she dressed up as a soldier on mission. Sand coloured track suit(for undercover or wat do we call it to mingle wid d surroundings) as angad's house was on d beach, tied up her hair in a tight bun, nd wore sports shoes.

She knew she cud nt get through d main entrance, so she used her childhood skills of climbing trees for climbing a pipe which got her to d balcony of angad's room. The first thing she noticed was d vast ocean wid no ends visible. The beach, children running after each other, playing gully cricket, badgering dere parents for a balloon, couples walking along d coast hand in hand, bt d most enchanting were d waves. Waves of different colours dat mix together nd form a beautiful combinations, blue, green, black all come together as one. Bt d calm, almost soothing atmosphere did nothing for her.

She was nervous, he haven't seen her ever, wat will he think wen he finds her in his bedroom, will he understand she is here 2 apologise nd get him to give her dat telechat slot. Or will he think she is one of d gals who flocks around him. Wat will he do if he thot so? More importantly wat will she do.....She was tired wid all d pipe hopping nd undercover stunts she had done, so she didn't noe wen sleep overcame her senses nd she went 2 sleep on d recliner placed in d balcony...lucky krips.

She entered angad's home at 5 pm nd now its 9. He is nt home yet, bt still some1 is moving around in his room. All d noise wakes krips up, nd she peeps through d curtain to his room. Wat she sees dere confirms her theory, dat angad khanna is indeed a gal magnet. A half naked gal is practicing provocative moves in front of d dressing table mirror, d bed is all set. Chilled champagne nd strawberries nd creme are definitely on agenda. Kripa's stomach grumbled, it seemed she has nt eaten in ages. Bt now she is in a bigger prob, wid dis amazon in d room how is she gonna contact angad. Cross dat does she really wanna talk 2 d world renowned gal magnet, or leave him to his own issues. Bt wat abt d producer nd all d listeners. Wid dere questions unanswered nd his interview nt set will dey allow her 2 keep her job.

Finally at around 11 angad is home. He is not aware of d presence of either, krips or d amazon bcoz both of dem r uninvited. He is tired, sulky, restless though he didn't noe y? His manager has told him abt d repetitive phone calls from dat rude, insolent rj, he has ignored dem till now. bt tomm mayb he will take d call nd let her grovel. Bt rite now he jst want 2 sleep.

So he is shocked to see his room decorated as ekta kapoor's suhaag raat dream, nd even more shocked to c simone (amazon, i noe she was nt all dat tall, bt imagine she was) nd he jst wanna get out of dis mess. Simone has nt yet seen him, she is 2 busy practicing in front of d mirror. Angad did find d situation funny, bt he cannot smile, bcoz it can soon turn into his worst nightmare. He was abt 2 turn nd go bak 2 his studio, wen he notices sum1 peeping through d curtains. Only her eyes were visible, huge pansy eyes, wid long black eyelashes, apparently no mascara or kajal visible (typical angad to notice dese things, so guys do u think krips is so wrong in calling him wat she did?). click, nd d plan got made. The floor was covered wid carpet, so wen he went to d balcony simone didn't hear him. Wid quick strides he reached d curtains flipped dem open grabbed kripa nd kissed her.

Kripa didn't noe wat was happening. One moment she was peeping , nxt she was in angad's arms. She wanted to kick him, hit him. bt her hands nd legs seemed to have frozen. His lips were teasing, soothing nd sensuous. Unwilling krips began responding.

"ANGAD, WHO IS THIS? "

Krips broke apart jst d second he did. He knew it was his plan, bt something magical had happened a moment ago which he could nt wait 2 explore. Krips was shell shocked, she has never been kissed, bt still she knew wat jst happened was once in d lifetime. She was exhilarated yet ashamed of herself for responding. Meanwhile angad has his own plans.

hey guys hope u like d part.

anshu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
my my.... Khanna surely has astyle....
kissing a girl when u dont even know who or wht she is????
gr8 going....
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesum part....
i guess he kissed her 2 get rid of simone....
jus guessin........
anyways cont soon........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Hai caught up with ur fiction.Nice part.Please do conitnue.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17

read ur ff. nice cntinue soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

hey hi

thanks sujalangad_rock, nehasfan, teri_susan, aklover
d story gets weirder by d day, first he kisses her nd den...read below
well angad follows his instinct nd his instincts r almost always rite.
thanx for encouraging me comments listing my good pts, my short cumings r welcum.
i now dis part is a bit weird bt i will reduce d weird element in d nxt meanwhile njoy nd keep commenting
here is d weekly update.

PART 3

Kripa didn't noe wat 2 do. So she did wat she always do wen d situation went out of her control, ran for it. Bt angad was faster, he grabbed her again nd made her stand beside him. Her hands were imprisoned in his big, rough, masculine one. She was bewildered. Y wud angad khanna kiss her?

"wat?"

"darling where do u think u r going?"

Kripa was amazed, nt only by him calling her darling bt also by d way he was looking at her. His gaze was possessive nd passionate at d same instant. She found she cannot look away from his eyes. They were a mersmerising shade of brown. Bt dere was sumthing dere which she wud never hav associated wid angad khanna, his eyes were pleading wid her 2 cooperate. For once kripa followed her instinct nd did wat his eyes were telling her 2.

"ANGAD???"

If d situation had not been so serious, kripa wud hav laughed at d expression on amazon's face.

"simone i didn't notice u were here?" so d amazon was named simone.

"well i was thinking of surprising u." Amazon said. Angad's eyes turned icy, kripa hoped he wud never look at her wid dose eyes, though y did it matter if he did she did nt noe, nd in her present predicament didn't fancy finding out.

"i clearly remember telling u we r over nd never to meet me again."

"oh darling u surely wud pardon a small mistake."

"u think infidelity is small, unfortunately for u i don't."

"darling it was jst a distraction, u noe i love u."

"bt i don't love u nd never did. i was clear frm d start. i said i dint do permanent. nd love has a very permanent ring abt it."

"oh bt it changed."

"for u may b, no i don't think so. Now wud u mind dressing nd leaving me nd my fiance alone." Kripa was astounded, in one breath he has said he didnt do permanent nd in next he was telling d amazon he was engaged wid her? was dis guy out of his mind, she turned towards angad wid a open mouth expression, fortunately simone was too busy to notice.

"fiance??"

"yes, fiance. Now will u get out of my room, my home or should i call d guards."

"angad khanna u will pay for dis. I cared abt u, i loved u, i went 2 all dis trouble to ask for ur forgiveness."

"which u didn't get. Now get out." Simone for once did as he said, though she was nt happy 2 do so, bt she recognised a closed door wen hit wid one. She will make angad pay, jst who does he think he is, nd who is dat little nobody.

"now who do we hav here miss..."

"kripa Sharma." The name did ring a bell, he had heard it sumwere.

"surely nt rj kripa... "

Kripa gulped nd said, "rite on."

"so wat do i owe u for getting d pleasure to meet u? nd Wat do u think u r doing in my room." he is certainly weird how can he say 2 contradictory things in d same breathe. the ungrateful louse, i jst saved his hide frm d amazon nd all he can think of is abusing me.

"i jst wanted to talk 2 u."

"now now wat has ms prim got to talk 2 gal magnet abt?" Sweat trickled on kripa's brow.

"i m here to apologise."

"so apologise..."

"i jst did."

"well i didn't hear u say nething on d sort." Kripa hated saying sorry, nd angad was making it all d more difficult wid his taunts. She took a deep breath nd said, "i m sorry. U were a guest nd i shudnt hav been rude 2 u."

"is dat it? U break in my home jst 2 say sorry, how intriguing."

"uh...well...i did hav a request."

"out wid it." Kripa didn't need a second prompting.

"can u cum for n interview at our studio, our listeners like u very much nd dey wud like 2 talk 2 u, noe u better, hear u sing."

"interesting...kk i will do it..."

"oh thank u mr angad khanna. I don't noe how 2 thank u enuf, i guess i was wrong abt u..."

"I WILL DO D INTERVIEW ON 1 CONDITION..." kripa looked warily at him, "wat sort of condition."

Angad gave her a smug smile, "u act as my fiance for 3 weeks."

"wat?"

"yes take it or leave it ur call." Though angad hated to say it bt he said, "d exit id behind u, i will give u 24 hours 2 think abt it." all he wanted 2 do was kiss those puckered lips in2 submission.

Kripa walked in n stupor out of his bedroom, his home. She was in daze d nxt morning wen sahil turned up for d show.

"hey krips, u kk. U r pale."

"no no ang...i mean sahil i m fine."

"so how is ur mission bring angad on d show going?"

"fine." Sahil knew sumthing was wrong, bt krips was n introvert, so she will nt tell wat was worrying her. He cared for her as he wud for his sister, so seeing krips like dis after his sister's accident was nt helping, bt life must go on.

As the show progessed kripa turned frm pale 2 blue. D callers were unreasonably harsh, dey wanted angad bak, nd asking kripa to apologise to him. D producer came at d end of the show nd threatened her once more. Though she didn't much care abt d money, bt she needed it for her college fees. She mulled over angad's ultimatum once more, bt she didn't hav much choice.

Dis time wen she called, angad's manager didn't hesiatate, he transferred her call 2 angad immediately.

"i agree," she said nd slammed d receiver. Angad was bemused by her response, he was looking forward 2 dis 3 weeks.

hey
kripa nd angad r totally opposite one follows his instinct, other think carefully b4 acting, lets c how both of dem fair 2gather. nd guys i didnt hav time for proof reading, so plz dont mind d mistakes.
PS:i wud like sum suggestions, i m slightly confused shud i continue nd make it a normal love story, or add sum supernatural element in d story.
anshu
Edited by ...anshu... - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey nice part👏.I don't know wat u mean by supernatural elemnt.But I love this concept and the way the story prgresses.So Angad seems mesmerized by the kiss than Kripa😉.He is eagerly waiting the for those three weeks😆.It's really nice part.Please do continue............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi,
just read your ff. It's awesome. Lol! Kripa calls Simone "amazon". I love Kripa's character and hope to read more of AK scenes.Please do conmtinue soon,
Mona.

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