simple yet nt dat simple(AK)urgent note - pg 31 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Loved the part.So Angad doesn't have a family.Eagerly waiting for thier family dinner meeting.Hope Angad copes with Armaan well.Continue....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWESUM PART!!!!!!!

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cont soon.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
awesome part 👏.
cntinue soon and plz pm me 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
hey hi thanx for all d lovely comments
@mona:dey feel d heat, u bet.😉 na angad jst like kissing her, for him she is unique, a mixture a tenderness nd innocence which he cannot w8 to explore further.
@sujalangad_rock: thanx. angad has jst arrived at malik house, so armaan nd angad will b face to face in nxt😊
@teri_susan: yup angad dosent hav a family, bt hopefully he soon will. if he managed 2 convince armaan abt it😆
thanx nehasfan nd aklover
Edited by ...anshu... - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 5

Kripa was determined to set angad in his place. He may b a rock star, bt dat does nt imply he can play wid every1 around. So she decided to set sum of her ground rues.

"d telechat first thing tomm morning," angad raised his eyebrows, which forced kripa to add," after d dinner tonite." Angad has met his match, if he was d master negotiator, den kripa was his equal.

"no touching." Angad cud nt agree 2 dis. He cud feel dat dere was sumthing btw dem, which he definitely was going 2 explore.

"engaged couples touch, hug, kiss." Krips mouth fell open on his statement.

"bt we r nt engaged, its business as u said." It irked angad wen she said dat. Bt he wasn't inclined 2 agree.

"no to make dis act look convincing dis condition cannot b met." He said irrevocably. Hearing his tone, kripa thought it wud b better 2 compromise, " kk, bt no touching in private. For public display we can touch nd hug bt no kissing."

"kk." Kripa gave him a smug smile, which he returned, bcoz he was determined to change d kissing rule, both in public nd in private, nd he intented 2 do much more den kissing.

"u notify he abt d events we r gonna attend a day b4."

"sure." He will make it a point 2 do so, gals need time 2 think wat r dey gonna wear 2 impress, he thought arrogantly.

"no last minute changes."

"kk miss prim." Prim he called me prim, i will show him prim, jst cum home 2 dinner tonite, u will wish u were newere bt dere.

"this charade ends in 3 weeks, nt a minute more" Wid her head held high she walked out, leaving angad gaping.

At malik house

Kripa didn't noe how 2 break d news dat angad khanna d rock star was cuming 2 dere home for dinner. Though by normal standards maliks r in d upper class of d society, bt angad had his own class. One thing was sure, ridhi will b on top of d world, she was d biggest fan of angad khanna according 2 her, bhai will b annoyed wid d useless disturbance. He loved 2 party, bt angad khanna was on his blacklist due 2 ridhi's fanatism. I m gonna love it, beware angad. Bt surely all of dem r in for d shock. She decided 2 break d news 2 ridhi, bcoz she will b most receptive to his cuming to say d least.

"ridhi u free for a minute."

"for a sister-in-law, i m free for thousand."

"we hav 2 make dinner for one person more 2day."

"kk" ridhi loved cooking, one person more was no big deal. Indeed more d ppl 2 feed, d more she is happy. "so who is cuming?"

Kripa was dreading dis moment, bt she has 2 say it, "angad khanna."

"oh my god, oh my god...." ridhi looked close to fainting, so kripa gave her a glass of water.

"who did u say, kripa? Surely nt angad khanna."

"alas yes." In her excitement, ridhi didn't notice kripa's sulk.

"bt how, why wen?" ridhi cannot contain her joy, "i mean u messed up d interview, u banged d phone down, den how can he cum here of all places. U r talking abt angad khanna the star rite, krips say i m rite, plz."

Kripa cudn't held bak her smile, her zeal was contagious,"yup, the angad khanna is cuming here, to dine wid us, nd b4 u ask nething else, yup i messed up pretty badly, so i invited him home as a gesture of apology nd he accepted."

"oh krips i m so excited, wat r we gonna wear, wat do we cook. Oh i need to tell dis 2 armaan, nd ma nd papa."

"ARMAAN, ARMAAN, ARMAAN." Armaan came out of his room, 2 see d cause of mini hurricane.

"ARMAAN, CAN U BELIEVE IT, CAN U BELIEVE IT." He sent a quizzical glance towards kripa, bt she merely shrugged.

"believe wat?"

"ARMAAN ANGAD KHANNA THE ROCK STAR IS CUMING HERE, TO DINE WID UR, DIS EVENING CAN U BELIEVE IT." He cannot, nd he wanted angad khanna 2 keep his sorry face wid himself away frm his wife nd his sister. He knew kripa hated angad's guts, bt u never noe. He didn't want him newere near kripa nd most importantly ridhi. Bt seeing ridhi now he didn't seem 2 hav ne choice.

Angad arrived exactly at 9 pm much 2 krips consternation. Late comers arrived armaan most, though he is late most of d time. Bt a gud pt cannot negate many bad ones. Angad was intrigued by kripa's family. He was introduced to her mamaji nd mamiji first whom she called ma nd papa, he touched dere feet nd dey seemed astounded dat he cud do such a feat. Ridhi her sister-in-law was one of his tongue tied fan which krip's bro armaan didn't like apparently. Bt he liked ridhi, she was sweet nd pretty, though nt as beautiful as kripa. The toughest nut 2 crack was armaan her bro, he seemed to hav developed instant dislike for him, which he didn't understand. Bt he had discovered dat he rarely understood many things in krip's orbit.

hey guys
i noe dis is a bit short, bt my minor submission is in 10 days, nd like all lazzy ppl i started it dis thursday, so d nxt week will b hectic.
bt i promise nxt part will b longer.
meanwhile keep commenting
love
anshu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Nice part😊.So Angad is going to do more than kissing and hugging in private and public😉.Riddima is great fan of Angad despite Armaan's hatred towards him😆.Sure it's going to be tough for Angad to gain Armaan's trust.Did Kripa said about thier fake engagement to her family,especially to Armaan😉.Continue............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
nice part just loved it...
will love 2 see Angad breaking rules 4 their business...
contineu soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWESUM PART!!!!!
loved ridz reaction
cont soon....... 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
jus went thru ur fic....
loved it....
bt y angad wants 2 get engaged 2 kripa????

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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
wow, anshu, just came across your ff today and I have to say it is ADORABLE!!!! I just love your Angad and Kripa. He's so deliciously wicked and arrogant and she is just the person to cope with the hurricane that is him!!! the sparks were flying from day one and I just LOVED reading about them, Can't wait to read the next bit and see how he come with "Big B" Armaan!!!
Btw, just how serious is he about Kripa?
ps. loved that line about early morning yearnings and R.D Burman's music!!! too good!!
Definitely added one more to your fan following!!!

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