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Posted: 16 years ago
hey!! awesome ff ... i hav read it all in 1 go...its aweosme!!!
loved it!!
do cont soon....
n me not in your PM list???
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey! I havent been able to read your updates as I have been a bit wrapped up lately... am going to find time this weekend, first thing, and get back to you.

Keep up the good work.
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Posted: 16 years ago
sure Hina and Neelam can lie ito the court as their intention are not wrong. and rehaan should surely take part in the show......
and your siggy is really nice..........
and the part was amazing................
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Posted: 16 years ago

sure Hina and Neelam can lie to the police as their intentions aren't bad and Rehaan should surely take part in the show.... your siggy is really nice.............

and the part was amazing...........

Edited by Anjalika Khanna - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
first of all!!!i love ur story!!i run out of wrds to express ma feel aftr readin each part!!don mind ~~



1. Do you think Neelam and Hina's good intentions justifies them lying to to the police (and in court)?
wise decision!!bt i feel their grp of frns sud cme to knw!!

2. If you were Rehaan, would you take part in the show despite the injustice?yes i wud!!do gud...te gud ll follow u is ma pilocy!
3. How do you like my siggy?wat s a siggy yar??
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing really insightful
cant w8 for the next one
thx soo much
i lvoe all the characters neelam, deepali, aditya and zaid
ur reallly goood
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Rabia! 😃
How're ya doing?
Aww this update was a fun read Rabia. Ok first I'd like to throw a party:
🥳
You might ask why? Well no need to ask cuz I'll tell ya.....Wohoooooooo Karan made an appearance!! 😃
*silently parties by herself*.....yes I know I'm sad....but since Karan made a guest appearance in this update I felt like partying ok? Here's another warning for you btw: everytime Karan makes an appearance I'm gonna throw a party...just so you're prepared. We get to see so less of him as it is in your FF...maybe the party will motivate you to show him more? *nods vigrourously* haan haan? Nahin?.....*sigh*...chalo koi ni it was worth a try. 😆
hehe...j/k...ok now coming to the actual update. I don't know if I should be organized and start from the beginning....or randomly let my thoughts fly....I'm sick of being organized so I believe I will just be random...tell me if it really makes you pull your hair then I won't do it next time deal? See, I play fair. 😃
Ok so OMG Todd!!! What a big f**in creeper!!!! Has he been stalking these people all this time? What grudge does he have against Neelam? O ya...because of the mall incident. OMG Neelam's reaction to seeing him.....so freakin creepy!! I'd be scared too. Ok this is SO exciting. Are we gonna get to see some horror scenes too now?? 😲 Cuz that'd be pretty frickin awesome! *bites nails anxiously*...he's not gonna stalk them in the night is he? OMG he's not a serial killer is he?? 😲😲 .....*breathes*....ok I'm calm now...All I'm sayin is that I'm excited. 😃
Awww the Adi scene....that was cute how he was opening up to Neelam but couldn't to his jigri dost Zaid. And I'm actually loving their pair...it's better than SG in the show. 👍🏼
Ok movin on...I love how you're showing the Adi-Deepali friendship much like the show. It's totally cute. So this labour day weekend trip thingy, are the 4 of them gonna go to it? Or is everyone going? Since Reehan likes hand glidiing and all too? Is that what's coming up in your story?
So we got to see Gavin..nice...I totally forgot Carissa had a boyfriend...are they one of the main couples in the story too? Cuz they're present in your sig as a couple...ok Imma stop asking questions. 😳
Aww Zaid and Samira are cute. But a diamond pendant??? 😲😲😲 This guy is frickin loadedddd for a college student!! Mannn I can barely afford to pay for gas and cell phone bills (and of course leisure shopping 😃)...,.but diamond pendant?? He seems rich enough to me already...I say no need to go to school yaar...you've already got the money. 👍🏼. And dude you do not need to worry, I don't see why Hina wouldn't possibly go out with you now seeing as you're Load. Ed.....ok...sorry about the rant there....besides the him being loaded part Zaid and Samira are really adorable. Zaid reminds of my brother actually...he's always willing to buy me stuff too....😳 tee hee...he's still in high school and he bought me an ipod for my bday!!! 😲😲 I was like...I didn't even know what to say...so sweet haina? And then ofcourse I gave him a good wack in the head for spending that much (ok they're not that expensive these days par still yaar) on me...I may be broke and still spending money on shoes etc.....but that doesn't mean he has to be haina? lol...but anyways the point is....there is a point to this....that brothers are adorable and you showed that in your update as well. See I related my little ramble to your FF....it's all good. Right? 😳
Anyways, so moving on....o ya still about Zaid...um this guy seems kinda weird to me actually....how is he in love with Hina already? He doesn't even know her that well! *shakes head*....Yeh ladke bhi na....jahaan khoobsurat ladki dikhi nahin ki bas....pad gaye un ke peeche. 😆😆 hehe...I thought a filmy dialogue was appropriate there. 😎. I am not too crazy about the Hina and Zaid jodi...but all the other jodis I am getting all mushy and excited for!! Promise I am. Tere sar ki kasam. 😃....especially Karan and Deepali....*hint hint*.
Fine fine...I'll try to stop giving these not so subtle hints to include more Karan Deepali ok? Wait...I said I'll try...don't blame me if I fail though deal? 😛😃
O ya back to Zaid and Hina...Hina seems to know Zaid pretty well already? Her talking to Samira and all about him...but I don't actually remember them hanging out that much? 😕...ok fine *zips mouth*...I'll try to like this jodi too...
OMG I LOVE Rehaan! 😃😃 ....before you get too excited....not more than Karan though *hint hint*....But he dances!!! *silent party mode back onnn* 🥳 That's enough for me to love this guy. I love guys that can dance...and there are only a few chindi guys that can!! 😡....speaking from experience. Anyways I'm excited for this HFD thingy and how it relates to the story.
Ok...so this random...bakwas...ok this post actually was mostly bakwas *hides face*...😳...sorry about that...so as if this post isn't long enough already...I guess I'll answer your questions too...*dikhas superstar wale nakhre*
1. Hmmm...I think this is going to get them in trouble later on. As we already know, Neelam sucks at keeping secrets and her face pretty much reveals everything in her heart since she is so innocent and dil ki saaf types...so Hina is actually really dumb for going with this plan in the first place. Well..I guess she doesn't really know Neelam that well...but seeing as Neelam has already told Deepali and Deepali talks so much that she could let something out subconciously (as you hinted in your story)....so I'm sensing some major trouble. And once the police suspects even a hint of gadbad...they're screwed. So ya in the long run I don't think it's justifiable because they're good intentions are going to go waste if they can't carry this out fully...which they won't be able to.
2. Ok this one's easy. HECK YA!!! For one, come on it's dancing, and since he seems to love dancing I'd grab any chance to dance with both hands. And since your question is if I was Rehaan then knowing myself I wouldn't even think twice before accepting. Number two, this his chance to prove himself. Life doesn't give opportunities twice so you gotta grab them when you get the chance. If he doesn't take this...it would be more of an injustice as he is not using his talent to good use. And politics happens everywhere...it's a part of life...you can't get away from it so you gotta deal with it. And this is one HECK of a chance to prove himself. I say go for it boy! 👍🏼...and he'll probably impress Samira in the process too. 😉 😆
3. Acha ji? waah ji waah. Yeh hui na baat. 👏 What's the point of having an FF if ya can't get compliments on other stuff too? lol j/k Awww your sig's SO pretty! 😍....love the colour combination. Really eye catching fo sho. Really good idea too...to have a sig for your FF. Nice nice...I'm likin it. 😃
Ok jee...aaj ki bakwas yahiin samaapt hui...sunne ke liye bahaut bahaut dhanyawaad. I'll bet you'll think twice before pming me with updates from now on. 😛 lol...Hope it didn't make you wanna headesk too much...😳
Parting note: Love your FF Rabia! Can't wait for your next part 😃
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O P.S. ..I forgot to mention one thing...don't hold your head...it's not bakwas it's actually a good point ( I like to think)...I loved how you included little details like Deepali's hot pink cushion and Zaid's dreamy mode etc...little things like that tell alot about a character and we did get to see alot more little points like that about the characters this time.
Ok for reals this time I'm out....great update btw...loved it! 😃
Edited by cute2stay - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy Rabia... loved this part.. especially the conversation between deepali, aditya and zaid! can't wait for this hang gliding to come soon and gr8 to see carissa is okay.. im waiting for karan and deeps scene.. do cont soon. xxSonia
Edited by Bollywood_chic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome Suhana!!!!!!!!i luved it!!!plzz cont soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOOOW
KARAN COME TO MEET CARISSA!!
AWESOME UPDT!!
I LIKE IT!!
THANX 4 THE PM!!
CNT SOON WHEN U WANT
SEE YAA!

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