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First of all sorry for not commenting on the last part. I have exams going on, so quite busy.
Arey wah you're doing good. Chapter 4 in less than two weeks. Lovely! Main toh bhot khush hoon! 😃
I too don't think that there's a need for the names in parentheses anymore. As now we know the characters and their names and who they're being played by. 😊
Now to your lovely work!! and the awesome chapter!
The title of the chapter is very appropriate, for the chapter. I've realized that you keep a title for every chapter, and you're very good at it. it doesn't give a clue to what happens in the chapter but it's only after you read it that you realize what it meant. I really like the titles hope you continue with that.. 😃
Loved this chapter especially the part where all the characters come and help Carrisa. I personally believe that sometimes it's such difficult circumstances which can bring people together and force them to rethink their views on one another..
It was very well described the way each and every character brought in something to help out. And how we' were able to se their multiple factest of each charachters personalitty through their actions.
I loved how they all handled the situation, like Zaid giving his shirt to use, Deepali callign the police, and Hina calling her borther.
which makes me ask you are you med student? Coz you described the situation and the CPR very well.
But being a med student myself it makes me wonder isn't it a good idea to let the object where it is and apply pressure around it? But yeah i can also understand that Yusuf was more concerned about the blood volume so maybe it's good to take the obejct out and put propely presure on the wound. ( I' can see i've to do some reseach😆) . But The way you're descirbed the situation was Amazing..
I'm loving your characters which each and every chapter. Loved the way neelam realized that she could make the matter worse by showing her senstive side. And her buriyng her face in adi's chest was soo cute!
I've feeling that zaid is the kind fo guy who is careless (not in a bad way) but the way he mixex up dates and all makes him carelfree.. I don't why i've this feelign that he might be quite sensitive too.
And deepali's phone lost reception, ah i know yaar. Finally when the phone is for some good use, it loses reception or something! sometimes it can be very annoying.
Loved the Rehaan Samira scene (I Love shahid amrita ) The way Rehaan understood her and took the glass fragment out. and after that the way he tried to console her, but was surprised by her courage, and how open he was about telling her that he too was terrified when the truck had hitted Samira. ( As many boys wouldn't have expressed their fear infront of a girl.) very cute and realistic.
Yeah Samira and Adi were the heros, the way Adi took initiative was very good! But i woudn't say that it was only Samira and Adi, as everyone helped as much as they could.
Haww ! Neelam saw the driver, and Todd Mitchell well i was thinkin that it' might be him.
Loved the conversation betwen the police and Hina, very realstic again! This Todd Mitchell issue seems really interesting.
Hmm so misunderstandings are being cleared. 😊
Loved the conversation between Adi, Hina and Rehaan and Deepali. I could totally imagine Rehaans expression when the Deepali began talking in her usual high-speed. 😆
I agree with Adi, that something good had come out of Carrisa's accident. Not for her of course but the group! 😃
Okay finally I'm done with my bakwas. 😆
Continue soon dear.. Very curious to know what happens next! 😃
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