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Not even one reply to my comments!

First of all I'm sorry for commenting so late but now that I finally read it I can't tell you how hooked I am to this FF of yours! Your long updates seem really short to me now. I hope you get time to write fast again because I can't wait to read on.

Ok so I really want to tell you that I love the thoroughness (spelling?) and completeness of your FF. All the little campus settings and expressions and gestures (such as tilting of the head etc.) really engage the reader into your story and it makes it alot easier to visualize the story in your head as you're reading as well. So thank you so much for taking the time to write a complete update each time. Your story really does give a campus atmosphere feel which is totally relatable and hence makes it all the more enjoyable. And I love all your characters which I think is the biggest strength to your story as each one has something unique about them and this way we get to experience some traits through all of your characters. This makes it easier to relate as well since we all have atleast one of the characteristics in your characters. And as I said before I love the little touches of campus life and the characters' interaction with each other, it really gives a student life appeal. So a big thumbs up for that.

And yay you finally included Karan a.k.a Mayank! Ahhh I love you for that Rabia. Me being the biased MN fan I am totally loved their first interaction with each other. You captured Deepali's essence so well with her fast talking and immediately interacting with anyone she meets. And same goes for Karan's essence as well. I especially loved the part where you described how Karan wonders how Deepali can say everything in one breath. Great touch. Ahh I can't wait to read more of their scenes. I hope there will be a lot more.

And the discussion was really well written as well. O btw I am also loving how you're showing a Indians not living in India perspective through your story. I don't know if that's another intention of yours in your story but I really like it. It's another one of those totally relatable things for me. Like in Part 2 you mentioned the separation of Indian people who just come from India whereas those who have lived abroad for quite a while and then in this part about Indian parents and their expectations. Lol SO true! I keep saying this but very relatable.

O and you're such a clever writer the way you show little interactions between the couples it keeps your readers longing for more.

OMG the ending was totally unexpected!! I have no idea what might happen next and how it's going to affect all the characters' lives. Ahhh I simply cannot wait till you update next. Sorry for the super long comment...I but love your FF Rabia I'm hooked hooked hooked!! 😳

Love,

Pallavi 🤗

Hi.....

Oh .....sorry...

I've commented on all three chapters ...but u never commented on any of them...its okay...do it wen ur free....so wen's the next update??

sorry for replying so late actually i was on a vacation and i just came yesteday!

i must tell u u're FF is addictive......this part was awesome!!

i completely loved every part of it!!!

thanks for the PM

continue soon

I WAS IN A TOUR SORRY!

HEY I LIKED THE PART!

GOOD JOB!!

SEE YAA!