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rida

@angel.samee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

thanxxx that update was awesome ...

cont soon i cant wat for the next part plz cont soon

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payas bansal

@_Payuu_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

omg

its fantastic yaar

do continue soon

waiting 4 it

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bharathi aram

@bharathi aram

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

damn u sooo right in track...frst let tem bcum gud buddies!!

byte way wat ll happen to carissa???? :(

gud go on!!i love te track

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shrishti gupta

@shrishti gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

Awesome update! Thanks for the pm!

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aspatel2

@aspatel2

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

I really like the FF. its awesome and all character has their own charm.

pls cont. FF and can you please add me on your pm list. Thank you

-Axita

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

OMG!!!!!! You just gave me a heart attack!!!!! Still trying to catch my breath!!!!!!

Firstly, add me to your PM list ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol. holy sh**, what a twist in the story!!!!!!! I wonder if she is ok!?!??!?! =(

All the characters are individuals in their own ways, you are an amazing writer!!!! You have captured everything so well, i don't have words to describe!!!!!!!! *round of appluase*

I see what you mean about forming bonds, trusts and all that!!!!! This will definately bring them together!!!!!!

Great update, hope the next part comes on soon!!!!!!

P.S. I love looooooong updates!!!!!!!! =)

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

hey suhana

ur FF is too good but i am still confused with characters except Kran and Deepali but will becum familiar soon

karan-deepali were too good .can u have sum more scnes of them?..i wuld love to read it

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#98

Hi Rabia....

Hows u?...

Actually i never pondered on how long it takes to write this FF......so congo for finishing in 2 weeks.....

Interesting start...........i just luv that quote.....

Adi is more of the hero...

While Zee.....is a typical ..guy........

Neelam ...i think is really sweet...she must hav sum gud skills....

Deepali is just awesum...the most energetic n fun-lving one...

Whats up wd Karan....why is he such a loner?..

Hina.....why is she in such a hurry?...She seems smart...she must hav a crush on Zaid....at least i think...

Can Samira get any sweeter....such a kind person.....

Rehaan..the troubled guy...he really has sum issues ........lolz.....

So he really doesn't hate her...that was sweet wen he backed wid Carissa's ideas......really nice...1 simple explanation can do wonders....

The disscussion was really nice.....The other day .....a substitute teacher came n asked our class what we wanted to become.....52% were Doctors....for sure.....while 40% for Engineers...n the other 8% were like Deepali....a bit different...going for interior designing...arts...etc.....

So I really likie the disscussion.....it was totally believable that a group of students said that......

That was a huge shock.....whats gonna happen......was just thinking that maybe an accident might occur.......and it did........

Adi ....like a said ...the hero of the clan....the def. dont need any more worrys...whats gonna happen now?......

Plz continue soon.....

-Ayesha-....

Thnx for the pm....

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cute-kanwal

@cute-kanwal

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#99

a short one but nyc the end was really shocking i just hope caressa gets well soon can u plz write a little more about karan i just lov him

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Shafoo
wowowow tht was amazingg ya iam wondringg yy Aditya said tht had made up his mind that he would be that person.

Thanks Shafoo...Well, Adi is the type of person who can take on the responsibility of a leader. He'll do it in order to save Carissa.

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever
Oh my gosh, that was a shocking ending, to say the least!

Thought I'd make things a little intersting! 😉

I really like how Aditya decided that he would take charge of the situation, since panicking and wasting time would be critical to Carissa's chances of recovering...Can't wait to see what happens.

The next chapter will be completely dedicated to that...Hope I can do justice to it.

Also, the way Rehaan stood up and told everyone about his concerns over the way the discussion was going...Very well done! I'm glad he spoke up! And the tension and dislike between Hina and Adi is superb, I feel the same way Adi does about Hina at moments like that...

Rehaan is very perceptive and sensitive to the concerns of everyone...Yeah, Hina can be a little irritating, but Adi is also overreacting a bit.

Aaah, Karan! His curtness is really something. I could totally imagine him giving directions to Deepali - and I would have been just as confused if someone told me to go northeast...LOL!

Lol...Karan is inspired directly from Mayank. I hope to bring the magic of Nupur and Mayank's love-hate relationship to this story. 😃

Awesome update!

~ Borna

Thanks so much Borna! I'm sorry I didn't send you a PM. I guess I forgot to include you in my PM list. Will add you now.

Originally posted by: sonali.19281
wow..didnt expect it to get to this..but it was a nice break from the pile of papers i am buried in currently..well you see i am a grad student taking my qualifiers soon..and somehow the setting of your play is my daily life....just dont have such amazing co like aditya or rehaan around

Thanks Sonali! Good luck with your qualifiers. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: debby
Finally we have an update and what a read this was!!

I know I take a long time, but I am a med student afterall. Will try to make up for my tardiness by making the chapters really interesting. 😃

I may be biased here but my favourite bit was the Karan-Deepali scene. Starting right from his collared shirt description to his irritation at getting disturbed - you captured his essence so perfectly. Deepali was so cute with her banter about the directions.. wonderful little interaction I must say.

Haha...I'm sure most MaYur fans will say that same thing. Glad you liked it.

Everything else fit in exactly too. The Aditya Zaid part in the beginning was natural and spontaneous. Coming to the ending, what a shocker! It was so unexpected and came straight out of the blue. There is something about such endings.. they keep you hooked...

That was exactly my intention. Now everyone HAS to read the next chapter to find out what happened. 😉

I am waiting for your next update.. loved this one. 😊