I'll be there for you | MJHT | Chapter 12 Page 47 - Page 8

Originally posted by: trouble_maker

Hey Rabia =D
U update YAY!!!
Hmm so where to start....ok ya there's wasnt much development in the plot but I loved the chapter cz we got to know more about the character and got to c their interactions with other characters like u said...n I totally agree dat character development is more important at first and then the rest of story wud be better...
Ok so the title totally suited the chapter and all the details really made it easy for us to picture everything

Thanks so much Binu for the detailed comments once again! I truly appreciate the time you put into them. And I'm glad you didn't mind the lack of plot development. All in all, this is a character driven story rather than a plot driven one. However, there will be many surprising events here and there. I guess you could say that it's more like a TV drama rather than a movie (like most stories are).

N im loving all ur character as they r sooooo relatable, as a typical canadian desi I can truly feel dat these characters are one which we interact with everyday including the teacher n love birds carrissa n her boyfriend....they r such everyday character...I love it!!!
N also the situations are common as well....conflicts between group members, some are friends so the others feel left out....c this happening everyday!! Esp Neelam's situation of talking in front of the class...U can say I go through this every time I have to do a presentation hehe

I think I tend to be inspired by people I see around me and issues that I have faced in my own life. I'd rather write something that people can relate to instead of an overly dramatic fairytale like story. I know not all readers can appreciate that, but I'm so glad that you do. 😃

Hmm so now to the story LOLZ....the group one is interesting...seems like Rehaan n Deepali are gonna have a some sort of personality clash working with each other...but I really like Deepali's character as even I wud get mad if others totally ruled out my suggestions even if they dont do it intentionally!
I like how all the couples are together but there are also friends too within groups....so hoping to c lots of friendly relationships building!! N their fights n their masti n fun!!
BTW the assignment sounds pretty cool...allows tonnnnns of interaction between characters!

Rehaan and Deepali have definitely started out on the wrong foot, and you will eventually see that it's not entirely one person's fault. It involves a little bit of insensitivity on the part of Rehaan (mainly because he was too preoccupied by a different concern) and a little overreaction by Deepali.

Chalo Im stopping with my blabbering here! All in all loving ur FF...n can't wait for the next update! I no ur a medical student...so wud jus say update whenever u can =)

And o yes a tiny suggestion...can u do quick recap of ur previous part whenever u update....jus like a line or two...cz u have readers like me with extremely bad memory hehe!!

Sure, I can do that! 😃

N thank u for the PM =)

Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna

it was a good chapter......... continue soon..........

Originally posted by: bharathi aram

loved it!!!

Originally posted by: CeruleanSky

Woot woot update !!! *does a little jig* and thankoos for the PM !

Aww, no problem Shreya! 🤗

One thing I absolutely HAD to tell you Rabia , your updates are so .... complete = ) Um , that doesnt make any sense at all , and I dont think I'll be able to make you understand what I mean , 'cause I'm definitely not as good with words as you are : ) but what I mean is , I never feel dissatisfied after completing the chapter .

Thanks so much! I think I understand what you mean. But you know, I will start to include some cliffhangers soon. I hope you won't mind that. 😉

And I love the theme of the whole identity crisis you touched upon in this chapter .... I was wondering if you would explore that particular arena since I read the first chapter , and you did ! I've heard a lot about this ... sort of unconscious segregation , and I'm hugely eager to know how you're going to deal with it in the upcoming chapters as well.

It's definitely an issue that is prevelant in the US. I've seen the unconscious segregation (great term, btw) with my own eyes...but personally, even though I was born in the US, I'm more drawn to FOBs. I more desi than most American borns. This issue will come up again throughout the story...I'll do my best to handle it realistically.

Enough rambling about abstract things....coming to the actual chapter , have I mentioned just how adorable I find Samira ? I found the whole exchanging-the-pens thing rather funny , even though Rehaan doesnt seem to share my opinion 😆 Does she have OCD , BTW ?

You guessed it! 😉

I really liked the chapter...yeah , I guess there wasnt much of plot movement , so to speak , but I like taking things slow = ) In any case , it was interesting how , apart from the clashes of wills , individual challenges came up for the group members -Neelam being appointed spokesperson , Deepali having to keep her mouth shut for some time 😆,etc...Carissa studying the subject should be interesting,seeing that she's not of Indian origin . Seems to me like things will come to a head in Group II sooner as both Hina and Aditya are forceful characters .... Zaid may be a little hampered by his crush : P

Yup, a lot of conflicts and challenges...I hope they're making the story more interesting rather than confusing. 😕

Woo yea , Karan is here ! Hmmm.....I like how you've kept his character enigmatic = )

There's no way I could leave him out. Mayank is my favorite MJHT character. I know I scared people by not making him one of the seven main characters...and some fans might be disappointed that it will take some time before he becomes important...but I'm hoping everyone will be satisfied ultimately.

Erm , my 'reply' is turning out to be an essay itself.....so I'll make an exit now methinks . Take care !

Originally posted by: aabha_monaya

a very nice chapter!!!!!

luvd d way u introduced each and every versatile character!!!!😛

do update d next part soon!!!!will b waitin😊😊😊

Originally posted by: debby

Hey! I am glad I decided to check this thread today.. had wanted to a few days back but to be honest, sumthin held me back. See the sinister charm your thread is surrounded by? 😉

Sinister charm? Oh dear...I had no idea. 😆

For starters, you are a wonderful writer. I like the characters and they way they are being developed. Your effort into putting them in shape and giving them colour shows. Though the avalanche of people seemed a bit confusing in the beginning esp. since the cast is intertwined with MJHT and I tend to imagine different people.. but now I have got the hang of it..

Thank you soo much. I can understand that so many characters can get confusing...but that's just the way this story came to me. Hope I can do justice to each character...

Add me to your PM list and update soon. Looking forward to reading more of this.. 😊

Adding you now...