AK FF ~Overshadowed~ Part 4/ Pg. 6

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Just read all four chapters, and I'm already hooked. Please add me to your PM list if you have one.

So far the story seems to me like a mixture of Vivah, Cinderella and Harry Potter, with your own original touches. Your writing is very engaging and descriptive, and the characters are very real. 👏

I wonder what Kripa saw in Prithvi's room...I'm sure he must be with another woman. Can't wait for the next part. Continue soon!

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aditi

@AngelsHeaven

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

nice part.

just loved it....

finally AK meet....

wonder what Kripa saw????

hope it breaks Prithvi & Kripa... so that she can hook up with Angad....

continue soon

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

poor kripa, i bet that slimeball was cheating on her wasn't he?

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Great update...why did you leave us at such a cliffhanger???...I am damn sure that Prithvi is having an affair with Mishti,....god I hate her!!!!!....poor Kripa!

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love_KYPH

@love_KYPH

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

awesum part.....
i guess prithvi is betrayin kripa wid another girl...
cont soon....

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kripa

@vennelachowdary

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

hii....

i think prithvi is makingout with some other.....

nice update .....

continue asap....

take care...

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bunny_fun

@bunny_fun

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Hi,

I love this FF, please Update soon... I really want to read more..... Its so intresting how you have managed to create a very good story with so many loose ends... and now I am anxious to know how all the loose ends are tied up....

Bunny