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hey pallavi
finallllyyyyyy, you updated......you know since you said you were updating last night....i waited till almost 2 30 for you to post your update as i wanted to read the next part....but anyways, it was worth the wait i guess.
absolutely fantastic....i loved the uday-gunjan bonding....it was so sweet that even though uday is not too smart, he ended up helping out gunjan and made her think about her actions......i just loved the way uday so casually and innocently made gunjan realize of her talent.....that part was just too cute for words.
mayur were too good.....it is so like mayank to get his head into books every chance he gets.....i loved he chunu part....that always makes me laugh.....loved the looks they gave each other while pretending to be a happy married couple in front of the villagers.......that was halarious.
thier nokh-jhoks are the best part of their relationship and i think you have captured that pretty well....i m sure when you will make the transition of them falling in love will be as amazingly written as well.
cant wait to see mayank admiring nupur when he sees the caring side of her........we hope you update tonight...but if you cant, i m sure it will definately be worth the wait when you update next week....after all, family and school comes first....so if u cant update tonight, then we will anxiously wait for you to update next friday.
keep writing!
Arjun
Cricket
Udne Ki Aasha
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